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2ConcordBroken
The real question here is, why does Chase know anything about shoujo manga?
Chase...what are you not telling us?
2ConcordBrokenThe real question here is, why does Chase know anything about shoujo manga?
Chase...what are you not telling us?
9/1/2012 c9
34Kiteria
Aww. There together now. And Chase so just slapped Maya, whoooh! update whenev.
34KiteriaAww. There together now. And Chase so just slapped Maya, whoooh! update whenev.
9/1/2012 c4 Kiteria
it's nice how they're getting closer. Maya is borderline crazy if not fully crazy.
it's nice how they're getting closer. Maya is borderline crazy if not fully crazy.
9/1/2012 c3 Kiteria
wonder how he's gonna respond when he wakes up. Your making me want to make a harvest moon fiction myself. keep this up.
wonder how he's gonna respond when he wakes up. Your making me want to make a harvest moon fiction myself. keep this up.
6/15/2012 c9 StephanoAtlas
I LOVED THIS STORY! I especially like how you made Maya uber jealous, instead of a calm quiet jealousy like most people have. You should make a sequel. I think that you should dial down on the language if you make a sequel, but excellent all the same.
I LOVED THIS STORY! I especially like how you made Maya uber jealous, instead of a calm quiet jealousy like most people have. You should make a sequel. I think that you should dial down on the language if you make a sequel, but excellent all the same.
6/6/2012 c9
6UnderxGravity
LOL. A little sappy for him, but still sweet. And THANK YOU again for the lack of love confession there, it takes time to build that up (as they like to show you in these Harvest Moon games! xD).
6UnderxGravityLOL. A little sappy for him, but still sweet. And THANK YOU again for the lack of love confession there, it takes time to build that up (as they like to show you in these Harvest Moon games! xD).
6/6/2012 c5 UnderxGravity
I've had that sorta dream too. But then when I wake up, there is no boy saying hi, all interested ._. . But enough about my life...
I've had that sorta dream too. But then when I wake up, there is no boy saying hi, all interested ._. . But enough about my life...
6/6/2012 c4 UnderxGravity
Thank you thnak you THANK YOU for not rushing into the l word. Too many authors do, and it gets tiresome. Now when there is some chase (no pun intended) up to the big L, some flirting, some fun, THAT is when a romance has thrived in a story, has become more realistic.
Thank you thnak you THANK YOU for not rushing into the l word. Too many authors do, and it gets tiresome. Now when there is some chase (no pun intended) up to the big L, some flirting, some fun, THAT is when a romance has thrived in a story, has become more realistic.
