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3/2 c7 2ConcordBroken
The real question here is, why does Chase know anything about shoujo manga?
Chase...what are you not telling us?
9/1/2012 c9 34Kiteria
Aww. There together now. And Chase so just slapped Maya, whoooh! update whenev.
9/1/2012 c8 Kiteria
That's one hell of a birthday present.
9/1/2012 c7 Kiteria
hahahaha, that was funny.
9/1/2012 c6 Kiteria
haha nice.
9/1/2012 c5 Kiteria
hahaha, that was funny. She was avoiding him and he didn't like it.
9/1/2012 c4 Kiteria
it's nice how they're getting closer. Maya is borderline crazy if not fully crazy.
9/1/2012 c3 Kiteria
wonder how he's gonna respond when he wakes up. Your making me want to make a harvest moon fiction myself. keep this up.
9/1/2012 c2 Kiteria
that was kinda mean of him, but Maya is really hard headed.
9/1/2012 c1 Kiteria
Maya is just hopeless.
6/15/2012 c9 StephanoAtlas
I LOVED THIS STORY! I especially like how you made Maya uber jealous, instead of a calm quiet jealousy like most people have. You should make a sequel. I think that you should dial down on the language if you make a sequel, but excellent all the same.
6/6/2012 c9 6UnderxGravity
LOL. A little sappy for him, but still sweet. And THANK YOU again for the lack of love confession there, it takes time to build that up (as they like to show you in these Harvest Moon games! xD).
6/6/2012 c6 UnderxGravity
Quick fix, she didn't nod "no". That'd be, "She shook her head no".
6/6/2012 c5 UnderxGravity
I've had that sorta dream too. But then when I wake up, there is no boy saying hi, all interested ._. . But enough about my life...
6/6/2012 c4 UnderxGravity
Thank you thnak you THANK YOU for not rushing into the l word. Too many authors do, and it gets tiresome. Now when there is some chase (no pun intended) up to the big L, some flirting, some fun, THAT is when a romance has thrived in a story, has become more realistic.
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