for I Feel Defeated to Fall In Love5/21/2012 c9
1Lychee Cheesecake
This fanfic is so adorable. The romance between Hikari and Chase.. HNNNNG.
Great fanfic. Update soon!
1Lychee CheesecakeThis fanfic is so adorable. The romance between Hikari and Chase.. HNNNNG.
Great fanfic. Update soon!
4/27/2012 c9
10LegendarypkmnNyunyu
WTF, Maya...
Never thought that you can be so...
Snobbish, rude, arrogant, etcetera, etcetera...
Just for your information, there are some miss type like:
-the "had" on the "I hd never seen her so angry." (missing the "a")
-"Maya" on the "May. I swear!" (missing the "a")
Just that.
Keep writing and gambatte~!
10LegendarypkmnNyunyuWTF, Maya...
Never thought that you can be so...
Snobbish, rude, arrogant, etcetera, etcetera...
Just for your information, there are some miss type like:
-the "had" on the "I hd never seen her so angry." (missing the "a")
-"Maya" on the "May. I swear!" (missing the "a")
Just that.
Keep writing and gambatte~!
4/27/2012 c9
6filipinochick
Lols. ... Ugghhhh! DX DX DX DX I hate Maya so much. Hmm... I wonder how she'll take this news.
6filipinochickLols. ... Ugghhhh! DX DX DX DX I hate Maya so much. Hmm... I wonder how she'll take this news.
4/26/2012 c9
11KhAeL
aww so sweet haha but very chase. go barney (neil partick harris) haha I watch that show too!
11KhAeLaww so sweet haha but very chase. go barney (neil partick harris) haha I watch that show too!
1/29/2012 c8
1Tammyannthinanut
Yay! New stuff! And its good. Theres romance and kissing and stuff and things. But no Maya... Oh, she is going to be so angry! Grrrrr, I can see her slapping Hikari and trying to plot her demise. MWAHAHAHAHA! I'm overtired... Sorry, I'm shutting up now...
1TammyannthinanutYay! New stuff! And its good. Theres romance and kissing and stuff and things. But no Maya... Oh, she is going to be so angry! Grrrrr, I can see her slapping Hikari and trying to plot her demise. MWAHAHAHAHA! I'm overtired... Sorry, I'm shutting up now...
1/26/2012 c8
3YuuRam4eva417
I love this it reminds me of a keaon movie i watched! I love the end of the chap the best! 3
3YuuRam4eva417I love this it reminds me of a keaon movie i watched! I love the end of the chap the best! 3
1/26/2012 c8 etherealvalen
I love how you used one of Chase's heart lines in tha title~
I'm glad you updated for the fans of this story :3
Or more like the fans of Chase 3
I love how you used one of Chase's heart lines in tha title~
I'm glad you updated for the fans of this story :3
Or more like the fans of Chase 3
11/12/2011 c6 YuuRam4eva417
are you going to write more than chapter 7 because i really love this story i even was reading it on deviant art but i couldn't find more so i came to read it on "fanfiction.net". anyway i really want you to continue this!
are you going to write more than chapter 7 because i really love this story i even was reading it on deviant art but i couldn't find more so i came to read it on "fanfiction.net". anyway i really want you to continue this!
11/4/2011 c7 YuuRam4eva417
DOES THE STORY END LIKE THIS? IF IT DOES WAHHHHAAA BUT IF IT DOESN'T PLEASE WRITE MORE!
DOES THE STORY END LIKE THIS? IF IT DOES WAHHHHAAA BUT IF IT DOESN'T PLEASE WRITE MORE!
