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12/8/2012 c1 Guest
Please continue!
9/16/2012 c1 6ShotaroxPhillip
are you ever going to continue this i would really like to see what happens next
9/9/2012 c1 1thegirlinthewindow
please continue this, i would love to know how it turns out especially if Takagi finds out who Shinichi is.
5/2/2012 c1 1xEllieChan
YES! CONTINUE! *O*

The story ish fantastic ;)
6/9/2011 c1 3Aniki-xvi
Waah, nice one, tough uncom;eted. Any thoughts of doing so?
5/12/2011 c1 gfhjill
interesting... wonder if the people wil die...
12/22/2010 c1 Fangirl2014
CONTINUE THIS ITS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD CONTINUE!
12/5/2010 c1 5LEP-Surface Division
Ooooh, this sounds really cool! :O

Not like DC at all, but that makes it all the more interesting. It's not just a case, it's a pandemic!
11/3/2010 c1 8pheonickx
That was just wow... I was completely blown away by how realistic and intense it sounded!

Although it's a little on the sinister side, it was really great. Kind of a fresh start if it really did happen in Detective Conan since it's not just another murder case thing. xD So glad I decided to read this even though my first impression of it was like 'is it like 'The Crazies'? (I only read the summary btw, so I woudn't know, and OF COURSE YOU SHOULD CONTiNUE THIS!

:D And you should involve everyone like Kaito, Heji and the etc and maybe the Black Organization(well maybe not to BO level) because it is that epic!

*pants from ranting on about how awesome the plot is*

But it's your choice. So if you did continue, I would be the one to wait for the updates... :)
10/28/2010 c1 M
Yes, continue. I find it odd that Takagi is taking it so calmly though. I think he would be a little more freaked out.
10/28/2010 c1 Ginshi-chan
Continue please! This is wonderfully spooky!
10/27/2010 c1 11Setoglomper
This is definitely worth continuing! I want to know what happens next! =D
10/27/2010 c1 10Yuuki-Neechan
I really like the idea, please continue, I want to see what else you have in store for this story.

Very nicely written too, some writers don't paragraph their writing and it ends up in a huge unreadable block (Which i've done on occasions ^.^) but yeah to sum up the little rambling, I like it, can't wait to see what happens next, i've not seen a story like this in the DC world before with what looks like a national or worldwide pandemic :)

Yuuki :)
10/27/2010 c1 24Red and Gold Phoenix
YES, Ytak, to be continued. Please! This is really cool! Very interesting. I don't know if you intended it but it kinda has a Resident Evil feel to it. The idea of society churning to a hault like that is indeed spooky. Thinking about it is really unsettling, I mean hospitals, the airports, even nursing homes and places where there are people who depend on others to live. Even water quality control centers may not be fully automated, how will anyone access clean drinking water! Even the stock market would be plummiting. What about other things like if there was a gas leak or a fire. What about electricity! Who is running the hydro plants? With everything going unchecked it's not difficult to imagine things degrading quickly. Especially in such a densly populated place like Tokyo. Once the news gets out to the rest of the world, will others try to take advantage of the situation and loot? Well they may be overcome by the plants before they could leave anyway.

And of course the Takagi focus has me hooked indefinitly :3 The idea of Conan and himself teaming up in a situation like this is also pretty darn awsome. Plus, I go all "NOT SATOU-SAN And Ran-san!" which makes me want to read more even more! How long before the military moves in and quarantines the area? Stopping people from leaving or entering! And what of the people who were (lucky?) to have had the initial bad reaction? Does this mean they are immune to the effects of the Spores(?) for ever or is it merely temporary?

What about all the effected! Is it possible to cure the condition! It better be! I also really liked the whole idea of Takagi and Conan bringing Satou and her mother to the agency. (Ps, I think Takagi would need to carry her up the steps into Kogoros' office, hahahhaha, just ignore me).

This is pretty intense Ytak, I don't think you have the choice of not continuing it because I may nag you insane. hahaha, well no, hopefully I wouldn't do that. Seriously though, this is awsome, I really hope you advance it!
10/27/2010 c1 SakuraS41
Love the intersting start... I did see some cartoons about dangerous plants but I've never thought it'll be good for a mystery fic.. Hope you will continue this story!
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