for Decided Fate10/7/2012 c41 Destine
Your story is completely amazing! I love how you keep the characters personalities and manner of speaking pretty much the same as it is in the show. I have read other YYH stories with and without oc's and sometimes they can not keep the the characters in character. But you have done a wonderful job of that. I also love your story line, you are doing a good job with it! Your oc is i think believable not to perfect, I like that. Its not always fun when a character is perfect. I do hope you finish, it would be awesome! It would be a shame not to finish a good story!
Your story is completely amazing! I love how you keep the characters personalities and manner of speaking pretty much the same as it is in the show. I have read other YYH stories with and without oc's and sometimes they can not keep the the characters in character. But you have done a wonderful job of that. I also love your story line, you are doing a good job with it! Your oc is i think believable not to perfect, I like that. Its not always fun when a character is perfect. I do hope you finish, it would be awesome! It would be a shame not to finish a good story!
9/13/2012 c41 
2NameWithNoMeaning
I like this story but i have an idea of what could happen, ren could be inprisoned due to the council and the council forces her to have a 'mate' from the council to keep her in check, then of course something epic happens and hiei saves her *eyes start to twinkle*... sorry for the lil ranting :P
2NameWithNoMeaningI like this story but i have an idea of what could happen, ren could be inprisoned due to the council and the council forces her to have a 'mate' from the council to keep her in check, then of course something epic happens and hiei saves her *eyes start to twinkle*... sorry for the lil ranting :P
9/8/2012 c41 Guest
Im new but im excited to see that your back!
Im new but im excited to see that your back!
8/25/2012 c41 9DarkDragonDreamer
I am still here and waiting :-)
I really want to know what happens!
:-D
Please do finish!
9DarkDragonDreamerI am still here and waiting :-)
I really want to know what happens!
:-D
Please do finish!
12/14/2011 c40 26wolfsrainrules
...I'm going to curse now...
GOD DAAAMN IT! NO! NONONO! BAD! BAD CLIFFHANGER! DIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEE!
TT.TT
Update soon please?
26wolfsrainrules...I'm going to curse now...
GOD DAAAMN IT! NO! NONONO! BAD! BAD CLIFFHANGER! DIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEE!
TT.TT
Update soon please?
10/31/2011 c40 2Hiei's Ice Queen
Ahhhhhhh! I LOVE your story! I noticed it's been a couple months since the last chapter but I really hope you get up the inspiration to add the end. I really adore Ren and Hiei, and how you kept to the demon traditions so well! Kudos! Keep up the good work.
2Hiei's Ice QueenAhhhhhhh! I LOVE your story! I noticed it's been a couple months since the last chapter but I really hope you get up the inspiration to add the end. I really adore Ren and Hiei, and how you kept to the demon traditions so well! Kudos! Keep up the good work.
7/14/2011 c25 3Fellowship of Avengers
PLEASE tell me u r not pairing up Botan and Kurama! I can stand him with any OC but Botan or any other female character in the show is unbearable! Poor Ren!
3Fellowship of AvengersPLEASE tell me u r not pairing up Botan and Kurama! I can stand him with any OC but Botan or any other female character in the show is unbearable! Poor Ren!
7/14/2011 c24 Fellowship of Avengers
ROFL-LMFAO! XDDDD! OMFG! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! THIS IS DEFINATLY MY FAVORIE CHAPTER!
ROFL-LMFAO! XDDDD! OMFG! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! THIS IS DEFINATLY MY FAVORIE CHAPTER!
6/8/2011 c1 maggie
i really enjoyed this story and wish you had completed it. it was well written and kept me intrigued.
i really enjoyed this story and wish you had completed it. it was well written and kept me intrigued.
5/25/2011 c40 1dancearound-9
This is by far the best fanfic of hiei/oc I have ever read. Its a 2:45 on a skool night when I finally get finished. My favorite parts were when ren and hiei mated, hiei vs ricter sorry I messed his name up, and when haku walked in on hiei and ren. I was so shocked! I can't wait to hear more, and u left a cliffy :(
One thing I didn't like was when u skipped the lemon when they were in the tent. U have by far written one of the best lemons I've ever read! I was super impressed. U balanced out a lot of romance in it, so it wasn't just dirty. They were so cute. My only request is to continue writing lemons not just the mating one. U really have a nack for them :D
1dancearound-9This is by far the best fanfic of hiei/oc I have ever read. Its a 2:45 on a skool night when I finally get finished. My favorite parts were when ren and hiei mated, hiei vs ricter sorry I messed his name up, and when haku walked in on hiei and ren. I was so shocked! I can't wait to hear more, and u left a cliffy :(
One thing I didn't like was when u skipped the lemon when they were in the tent. U have by far written one of the best lemons I've ever read! I was super impressed. U balanced out a lot of romance in it, so it wasn't just dirty. They were so cute. My only request is to continue writing lemons not just the mating one. U really have a nack for them :D