for Decided Fate11/11/2010 c7 
9DarkDragonDreamer
I was late for a appointment this morning becuase I was too busy reading these chapters lol
Well done, and once again can not wait for the next inastallment.
9DarkDragonDreamerI was late for a appointment this morning becuase I was too busy reading these chapters lol
Well done, and once again can not wait for the next inastallment.
11/10/2010 c5 9DarkDragonDreamer
confusion is good, it keeps me coming back for more.
Just dont throw to many questions in with out at least answering some in return :-)
i loved the way this seemed to flow and was actually sadend to come to the end... again...
hope to be hearing again soon, 'n' thanks for the 'in' story review...
hehe, my first one of hopefully many to come :-)
9DarkDragonDreamerconfusion is good, it keeps me coming back for more.
Just dont throw to many questions in with out at least answering some in return :-)
i loved the way this seemed to flow and was actually sadend to come to the end... again...
hope to be hearing again soon, 'n' thanks for the 'in' story review...
hehe, my first one of hopefully many to come :-)
11/10/2010 c5 6Gothic Saku-chan
okay so now that i finally found you...i started reading thiss tory and OH MY GOD...i love it...u are doing a great job and cant wait for the next chapter :)
6Gothic Saku-chanokay so now that i finally found you...i started reading thiss tory and OH MY GOD...i love it...u are doing a great job and cant wait for the next chapter :)
11/9/2010 c4 9DarkDragonDreamer
Hey,
I just read your four chapters
Well done. *claps exitedly*
I can't wait for the next chapter(s)
I like way you write...
I imagine great things will come from your mind
9DarkDragonDreamerHey,
I just read your four chapters
Well done. *claps exitedly*
I can't wait for the next chapter(s)
I like way you write...
I imagine great things will come from your mind
11/1/2010 c3 deaddog1991
""I said GET OUT!", she screamed, a sudden static filled the air and small flashes of blue lightning struck Hiei sending him crashing through the far wall."
-She sent Hiei (an S class demon who is over 10 times stronger than Sensui) flying? Is that a joke? You do realise that Hiei can tank multi-mountain busting attacks right?
I explained everything in post number 11 of this thread-
http:/forum.fanfiction.net/topic/3210/33191548/1/
For further questions, just ask me. I will help you.
Ratings: 6/10.
""I said GET OUT!", she screamed, a sudden static filled the air and small flashes of blue lightning struck Hiei sending him crashing through the far wall."
-She sent Hiei (an S class demon who is over 10 times stronger than Sensui) flying? Is that a joke? You do realise that Hiei can tank multi-mountain busting attacks right?
I explained everything in post number 11 of this thread-
http:/forum.fanfiction.net/topic/3210/33191548/1/
For further questions, just ask me. I will help you.
Ratings: 6/10.
10/31/2010 c2 deaddog1991
"AuthorsNote= Well thank you dead dude/chick"
- I am a guy. lol
"for the site its helpful but I have seen the show and I like trying to be exact as I can so no real worries there"
-Well... you still haven't read the manga. The anime got many things wrong.
"I will try to do my best to keep everyone in line."
-I hope so. Good luck
Btw, Hiei is an S class (almost as strong as Yusuke and more than 10 times stronger than Sensui). Don't portray Hiei as too slow or weak OK? Here, this will help-
http:/outskirtsbattledome.wikispaces.com/Yu+Yu+Hakusho
For further details, read post number 11 of this thread-
http:/forum.fanfiction.net/topic/3210/33191548/1/
Ratings: 8/10.
-getting better.
"AuthorsNote= Well thank you dead dude/chick"
- I am a guy. lol
"for the site its helpful but I have seen the show and I like trying to be exact as I can so no real worries there"
-Well... you still haven't read the manga. The anime got many things wrong.
"I will try to do my best to keep everyone in line."
-I hope so. Good luck
Btw, Hiei is an S class (almost as strong as Yusuke and more than 10 times stronger than Sensui). Don't portray Hiei as too slow or weak OK? Here, this will help-
http:/outskirtsbattledome.wikispaces.com/Yu+Yu+Hakusho
For further details, read post number 11 of this thread-
http:/forum.fanfiction.net/topic/3210/33191548/1/
Ratings: 8/10.
-getting better.
10/28/2010 c1 deaddog1991
Quite good.
Rating- 7.5/10.
Just don't make OCs mary Sues/Gary Stus OK?
Since this is an adventure fic, I assume there will be some fighting scenes. In that case, I would recommend you to take a look at this-
http:/forum.fanfiction.net/forum/Yu_Yu_Hakusho_Cafe/3210/
-Me and the other posters have pretty much covered everything one needs to know about the characters to write a good adventure fic. If you want to ask some questions, just make a thread there.
Quite good.
Rating- 7.5/10.
Just don't make OCs mary Sues/Gary Stus OK?
Since this is an adventure fic, I assume there will be some fighting scenes. In that case, I would recommend you to take a look at this-
http:/forum.fanfiction.net/forum/Yu_Yu_Hakusho_Cafe/3210/
-Me and the other posters have pretty much covered everything one needs to know about the characters to write a good adventure fic. If you want to ask some questions, just make a thread there.