for Decided Fate3/23/2011 c38 gothicluver13
I'm glad that you decided to finish this story. I love this line - "I don't mean to be a pain, but are we sure his g.p.s. isn't broken?".
Though I have a hard time understanding this part - "Its not a g.p.s. Kuwabara it's a sixth sense, when you make that bond you can feel your mate as though they are apart of you.", eyes fell on Yusuke as they traveled through the trees.
"You may understand the feeling some day", Kurama looked at Hiei in shock as they all came to stand together at the forest's edge.
"What?', Yusuke looked at Hiei like he had sprouted another head.
I love her outfit too!
I'm glad that you decided to finish this story. I love this line - "I don't mean to be a pain, but are we sure his g.p.s. isn't broken?".
Though I have a hard time understanding this part - "Its not a g.p.s. Kuwabara it's a sixth sense, when you make that bond you can feel your mate as though they are apart of you.", eyes fell on Yusuke as they traveled through the trees.
"You may understand the feeling some day", Kurama looked at Hiei in shock as they all came to stand together at the forest's edge.
"What?', Yusuke looked at Hiei like he had sprouted another head.
I love her outfit too!
3/4/2011 c37 wolvesrain17
I dont know what to say about this ch. I was amazing I dont like that they got intrupted by her father gosh how inbarasing lol and poor hiei all drained and she got sad but hiei loves her so it happy :) I dont know what to feel. But I did love it yeah u XD
I dont know what to say about this ch. I was amazing I dont like that they got intrupted by her father gosh how inbarasing lol and poor hiei all drained and she got sad but hiei loves her so it happy :) I dont know what to feel. But I did love it yeah u XD
3/4/2011 c37 
9DarkDragonDreamer
Wow talk about some major drama!
Well written...
I love the part when Hiei said he loves her and the others appear... ^_^
Can't wait to see where this leads ^_^
9DarkDragonDreamerWow talk about some major drama!
Well written...
I love the part when Hiei said he loves her and the others appear... ^_^
Can't wait to see where this leads ^_^
3/4/2011 c37 gothicluver13
I'm glad that the guys are going to help Hiei get her back. I don't think that Hiei is ever not going to want her and he just needs to get her to see that. I think that it is so sweet that he calls her priceless. I personally like every chapter so I thought that the last chapter wasn't bad. For me the story isn't going down hill and you won't have to worry about losing me as a reader cuz I'll be reading this all the way to the last chapter. I can't wait till you update again.
I'm glad that the guys are going to help Hiei get her back. I don't think that Hiei is ever not going to want her and he just needs to get her to see that. I think that it is so sweet that he calls her priceless. I personally like every chapter so I thought that the last chapter wasn't bad. For me the story isn't going down hill and you won't have to worry about losing me as a reader cuz I'll be reading this all the way to the last chapter. I can't wait till you update again.
3/4/2011 c37 Yeah Imma Genius
wtf dad! im glad hiei can finally express his feelings and he better get her back.
wtf dad! im glad hiei can finally express his feelings and he better get her back.
3/4/2011 c37 4pyrosnightmare
oh my frikken gods. i would punch my dad in the face if he pulled that **! almost unforgiveable!
please tell me they get to have a happy ever after. please?
4pyrosnightmareoh my frikken gods. i would punch my dad in the face if he pulled that **! almost unforgiveable!
please tell me they get to have a happy ever after. please?
3/4/2011 c37 nanisan
hiei go after your love! haha :)
it's great to see his protective side for his sister. whoever would have known that he could have been so reckless.(well know that i mentioned it, the time he'd screamed the word "hot" in one episode.) well this was fantastic darling. just sitting here waiting and working so dont mind me.
hiei go after your love! haha :)
it's great to see his protective side for his sister. whoever would have known that he could have been so reckless.(well know that i mentioned it, the time he'd screamed the word "hot" in one episode.) well this was fantastic darling. just sitting here waiting and working so dont mind me.
3/4/2011 c37 1Kagome141414
Aww and here I thought she would have understood. :( but it was sweet for Hiei to admit that he did love her.
1Kagome141414Aww and here I thought she would have understood. :( but it was sweet for Hiei to admit that he did love her.
3/3/2011 c36 gothicluver13
Can't wait till her dad is back in the picture,I like him. I also can't wait till you update again,it seems like there might be some fighting action soon.
Can't wait till her dad is back in the picture,I like him. I also can't wait till you update again,it seems like there might be some fighting action soon.
3/2/2011 c36 9DarkDragonDreamer
Great chapter!
I loved seeing this side of Hiei!
I wonder if Ren will step in to stop him from doing anything that will hurt him too badly...
As always can't wait for the next installment!
9DarkDragonDreamerGreat chapter!
I loved seeing this side of Hiei!
I wonder if Ren will step in to stop him from doing anything that will hurt him too badly...
As always can't wait for the next installment!