for Toxic5/11 c3 silversimon
It's unfair to your reader-fans that you write these wonderful story openers ... then abandon us. What a tease! But seriously, you write well, and usually have an innovative take on FF/twilight. Really wish you would return. Thanks for your FF contributions. WHERE ARE YOU?
It's unfair to your reader-fans that you write these wonderful story openers ... then abandon us. What a tease! But seriously, you write well, and usually have an innovative take on FF/twilight. Really wish you would return. Thanks for your FF contributions. WHERE ARE YOU?
11/5/2011 c2 mi-shell87
I couldn't review in chapter 3 cause I had already done so. But I hope you do update soon, it's been ages and I want to know what happens! :-)
I couldn't review in chapter 3 cause I had already done so. But I hope you do update soon, it's been ages and I want to know what happens! :-)
6/24/2011 c3 
55MoonPrincess623
Ohh dear. I hope that Jasper meets Bella and then Peter and his yoda ** comes!
55MoonPrincess623Ohh dear. I hope that Jasper meets Bella and then Peter and his yoda ** comes!
6/22/2011 c3 25silver drip
This chapter felt a bit lengthy, but I liked the BxJ interaction. Please update as soon as you get the chance.
25silver dripThis chapter felt a bit lengthy, but I liked the BxJ interaction. Please update as soon as you get the chance.
6/22/2011 c1 silver drip
I like how you put all that info upfront. It makes it easier on the reader. Great first chapter.
I like how you put all that info upfront. It makes it easier on the reader. Great first chapter.
6/20/2011 c3 7Minnakoda
What the ** in deed. That's what you get though Edward, you're supposed to at least buy a girl dinner first!
7MinnakodaWhat the ** in deed. That's what you get though Edward, you're supposed to at least buy a girl dinner first!
6/20/2011 c3 LJ515
Day-um! I'm completely in love with your Bella. In fact, I just got me a case of some serious hero worship. I love how calm and assertive she was, and I think Jasper did too, am I right? Anyway, I find this whole concept new and intriguing and I can't wait to see how this is going to pan out. More to the point, I'm dying to see what happens between Jasper and Bella. I have quite a few ideas floating in my head revolving around the specifics of Bella's 'incident' so I'm looking forward to finally hearing about it. I think the only thing more interesting than the revealing of that information will be The Major's reaction to it. The way you've written your Bella makes me hopeful that you might at some point bring Peter and Charlotte into the mix. I only say this because with her firecracker personality and mysterious nature, I think she and Peter will get on like a house on fire. Whatever it is that you're planning, I'm sure I'll enjoy it all the same because this is one of the most original concepts I've read for this pairing in a while. Great job, and thanks for sharing.
Day-um! I'm completely in love with your Bella. In fact, I just got me a case of some serious hero worship. I love how calm and assertive she was, and I think Jasper did too, am I right? Anyway, I find this whole concept new and intriguing and I can't wait to see how this is going to pan out. More to the point, I'm dying to see what happens between Jasper and Bella. I have quite a few ideas floating in my head revolving around the specifics of Bella's 'incident' so I'm looking forward to finally hearing about it. I think the only thing more interesting than the revealing of that information will be The Major's reaction to it. The way you've written your Bella makes me hopeful that you might at some point bring Peter and Charlotte into the mix. I only say this because with her firecracker personality and mysterious nature, I think she and Peter will get on like a house on fire. Whatever it is that you're planning, I'm sure I'll enjoy it all the same because this is one of the most original concepts I've read for this pairing in a while. Great job, and thanks for sharing.