for The Way You Are6/3/2012 c1 Passerby-A
Ahh, this short shot is so sweet, I'm about to leak sugar through my ears and mouth. Love how straight forward the characters are. All they (we) need sometimes is a simple, "I love you" and to believe it. Though some details have been skimmed through, there's enough to feast upon. I actually turned the song on while reading, maybe that's why I kinda sped through the reading, because of the upbeat tempo. But it's a suitable selection for this fic, and the lyrics are very sweet, too! Ah, Fate, what a romantic! Thanks for this uplifting fic, it's great!
Good, simple approach to the whole sequence of events, if a bit short. When you're drowning in sugary fluff, you really just wanna indulge a little longer, at least I do. Good grammar and no noticeable mistakes whatsoever. A solid and easy (on the eyes and overall mood) read! Keep up the great work and cheers!
Ahh, this short shot is so sweet, I'm about to leak sugar through my ears and mouth. Love how straight forward the characters are. All they (we) need sometimes is a simple, "I love you" and to believe it. Though some details have been skimmed through, there's enough to feast upon. I actually turned the song on while reading, maybe that's why I kinda sped through the reading, because of the upbeat tempo. But it's a suitable selection for this fic, and the lyrics are very sweet, too! Ah, Fate, what a romantic! Thanks for this uplifting fic, it's great!
Good, simple approach to the whole sequence of events, if a bit short. When you're drowning in sugary fluff, you really just wanna indulge a little longer, at least I do. Good grammar and no noticeable mistakes whatsoever. A solid and easy (on the eyes and overall mood) read! Keep up the great work and cheers!
4/13/2011 c1 
6Ocean Prince
A bit cheesy, but it was very fluffy and sweet nonetheless. :) Are you going to write more? I'd like to see your future works. :)
6Ocean PrinceA bit cheesy, but it was very fluffy and sweet nonetheless. :) Are you going to write more? I'd like to see your future works. :)
2/7/2011 c1 14Tear of Light
This is such a touching piece! And I love that song too. :)
I don't know what else to say about this one aside from it's beautiful and you can't but smile after reading it.
well done! :)
14Tear of LightThis is such a touching piece! And I love that song too. :)
I don't know what else to say about this one aside from it's beautiful and you can't but smile after reading it.
well done! :)
1/9/2011 c1 18Ordile
Awww that was really sweet. n.n This is not bad for your first fic. It's really sweet. :D
18OrdileAwww that was really sweet. n.n This is not bad for your first fic. It's really sweet. :D
11/30/2010 c1 3Wafarasu
Yay, you created a fanfic! I'm hyper and giddy.
And... yet, even though it seems perfect... with the lyrics an' all, still needs the characterizations, and emotions to develop a good plot. But, still good. ;)
3WafarasuYay, you created a fanfic! I'm hyper and giddy.
And... yet, even though it seems perfect... with the lyrics an' all, still needs the characterizations, and emotions to develop a good plot. But, still good. ;)
11/20/2010 c1 3Mooniecat
Even if it is mushy, it is still pretty good. I really can't see that song for the other two pairings. Really, I think you got the right pairing for the right song.
3MooniecatEven if it is mushy, it is still pretty good. I really can't see that song for the other two pairings. Really, I think you got the right pairing for the right song.
11/12/2010 c1 6MoonlightRainbow
You've been holding out on everyone. Hiding your skills.
I loved it! Sweet and cute. Very true to their characters. I especially enjoyed the ring Fate gave to Nanoha. It was very symbolic and I think when it comes to a ring that what it should be. It should represent that unique bond two people in love share.
Also, great song choice. A friend and I agreed its the perfect song to sing to a girl.
Thank you for the cute NanoFate story!
6MoonlightRainbowYou've been holding out on everyone. Hiding your skills.
I loved it! Sweet and cute. Very true to their characters. I especially enjoyed the ring Fate gave to Nanoha. It was very symbolic and I think when it comes to a ring that what it should be. It should represent that unique bond two people in love share.
Also, great song choice. A friend and I agreed its the perfect song to sing to a girl.
Thank you for the cute NanoFate story!
11/1/2010 c1 3jhayzelkhulet
Hey... Nice song choice and good work with connecting it with the story... ^^,
3jhayzelkhuletHey... Nice song choice and good work with connecting it with the story... ^^,
11/1/2010 c1 3Nanoha89-san
Oo~ First one? Seems like you've written many! Hehe nice job. And I totally love that song. I was going to do something with it, but I thought someone would do better with it and I was right! You made the song better :3 I'm glad you chose to make a nanofate fic with it. Hope to see more from you!
-Nanoha-san
3Nanoha89-sanOo~ First one? Seems like you've written many! Hehe nice job. And I totally love that song. I was going to do something with it, but I thought someone would do better with it and I was right! You made the song better :3 I'm glad you chose to make a nanofate fic with it. Hope to see more from you!
-Nanoha-san
11/1/2010 c1 11Sammie-chan89
Yay Honulicious! You've finally stepped up and created your own master piece. I'm happy and this story was great and really sweet. I also want to thank you for making Untied Strings wonderful was well. Keep up the good work babe.LOL
11Sammie-chan89Yay Honulicious! You've finally stepped up and created your own master piece. I'm happy and this story was great and really sweet. I also want to thank you for making Untied Strings wonderful was well. Keep up the good work babe.LOL
11/1/2010 c1 1NetsuMe
I was surprised when I find this story, it's you! xD
Anyway this was a nice songfic, the lyric fit well with the story. Great job ^^.
1NetsuMeI was surprised when I find this story, it's you! xD
Anyway this was a nice songfic, the lyric fit well with the story. Great job ^^.
11/1/2010 c1 1NanoFate.us
Thanks for the fic! It was shot but very, very sweet. I loved it, fluffy fics where Nanoha and Fate are just having a time together (and maybe with their daughter too) are always nice to get you in a good mood for the day ^^ It doesn't look like your first fic, I think it was very well written.
I'll be looking forward to your next fic! In the meanwhile if you're interested you can check the new NanoFate doujin that we uploaded at nanofate.us, it's very sweet too~
1NanoFate.usThanks for the fic! It was shot but very, very sweet. I loved it, fluffy fics where Nanoha and Fate are just having a time together (and maybe with their daughter too) are always nice to get you in a good mood for the day ^^ It doesn't look like your first fic, I think it was very well written.
I'll be looking forward to your next fic! In the meanwhile if you're interested you can check the new NanoFate doujin that we uploaded at nanofate.us, it's very sweet too~