for Halloween, Team Evil Style5/5/2011 c1 
95JoeMerl
Ha, excellent work! Seriously, I could imagine the Giant making a special Halloween comic with the same amusing banter between the Team Evil members. ;-D
95JoeMerlHa, excellent work! Seriously, I could imagine the Giant making a special Halloween comic with the same amusing banter between the Team Evil members. ;-D
4/2/2011 c1 11Brother Mirtillo
My one complaint is that Xykon's lines at the end were the humor equivalent of an anticlimax. (And I'd half-imagined Tsukiko bubbling over with her own plans for the night.) Ah well... he would have been a killjoy anyway, and you were spot on with Tsukiko's excitement about death-related fun, Monster-san missing the point repeatedly, and Redcloak's deadpan lines. (In fact, listening to him talk reminded me of his lesson on elementals.) Very nice!
11Brother MirtilloMy one complaint is that Xykon's lines at the end were the humor equivalent of an anticlimax. (And I'd half-imagined Tsukiko bubbling over with her own plans for the night.) Ah well... he would have been a killjoy anyway, and you were spot on with Tsukiko's excitement about death-related fun, Monster-san missing the point repeatedly, and Redcloak's deadpan lines. (In fact, listening to him talk reminded me of his lesson on elementals.) Very nice!
2/11/2011 c1 EpsilonShawn
I liked it. The characterizations I liked best. Some of the cultural descriptions didn't really jive with me, but I think that's to be expected when you go beyond bare bones in this setting.
I liked it. The characterizations I liked best. Some of the cultural descriptions didn't really jive with me, but I think that's to be expected when you go beyond bare bones in this setting.
12/18/2010 c1 1LawyerGoblin
Interesting...I would have thought Xykon would be more for it, but, he is still pondering the fact that at the very moment his phylactery could be anywhere.
I like it. Heh, it's a lot more clever than the kind of thing I think of.
1LawyerGoblinInteresting...I would have thought Xykon would be more for it, but, he is still pondering the fact that at the very moment his phylactery could be anywhere.
I like it. Heh, it's a lot more clever than the kind of thing I think of.
11/21/2010 c1 43Water-smurf
Wow, it took me a while to review this. o.o
You got me to laugh. :) Especially with lines like "I'm a priest. Religious study comes with the job." People don't really talk much about the religious aspect of Redcloak beyond the fact he gets his power from the Dark One, maybe because he's usually very soft-spoken about that part of it in canon. It's nice to see someone showcasing it in their interpretation of him. That was probably my favorite part.
Of course, including teasing!Tsukiko to play off of him is always fun. ;)
43Water-smurfWow, it took me a while to review this. o.o
You got me to laugh. :) Especially with lines like "I'm a priest. Religious study comes with the job." People don't really talk much about the religious aspect of Redcloak beyond the fact he gets his power from the Dark One, maybe because he's usually very soft-spoken about that part of it in canon. It's nice to see someone showcasing it in their interpretation of him. That was probably my favorite part.
Of course, including teasing!Tsukiko to play off of him is always fun. ;)