for My Heavenly Judgement5/20 c41 
8CrimsonHeartFairy
I had been finished KHR manga a few weeks ago and this was the first time i looked into KHR fanfiction section and I felt so damn lucky that the first fanfic I first read was yours,though because your amazing plot and awesome storyline making my taste in reading became too high lol...
I spent a whole three days to finish all the chapter and I was seriously dying to know what will happen.
I really like Alice. Her character and her personality are so likeable. I like how she isn't your typical weak-helpless heroine.
oh..and I really suported Hibari X Alice. I completely love every little moment they had in every chapter (and I hope more their moment will be coming soon)
so,anyway, please update soon. I'll keep waiting for any new chapter from you.
and sorry again for long comment and error grammar :)
8CrimsonHeartFairyI had been finished KHR manga a few weeks ago and this was the first time i looked into KHR fanfiction section and I felt so damn lucky that the first fanfic I first read was yours,though because your amazing plot and awesome storyline making my taste in reading became too high lol...
I spent a whole three days to finish all the chapter and I was seriously dying to know what will happen.
I really like Alice. Her character and her personality are so likeable. I like how she isn't your typical weak-helpless heroine.
oh..and I really suported Hibari X Alice. I completely love every little moment they had in every chapter (and I hope more their moment will be coming soon)
so,anyway, please update soon. I'll keep waiting for any new chapter from you.
and sorry again for long comment and error grammar :)
5/19 c3 1White Ivy
Poor Alice! ;) I find her pain at school funny. Just how in the world is she going to approach Tsuna?
1White IvyPoor Alice! ;) I find her pain at school funny. Just how in the world is she going to approach Tsuna?
5/18 c61 3TsubasaFan1230
OMG Alice xD this is getting epic xD I wonder if there are going to be consequences for revealing knowledge about the future owo I'm still curious on who will end up with Alice xD
3TsubasaFan1230OMG Alice xD this is getting epic xD I wonder if there are going to be consequences for revealing knowledge about the future owo I'm still curious on who will end up with Alice xD
5/16 c61 14Aoi Kazuya
I think I'm about ready to call myself crazy for reading through all 61 chapters in one day...but I think I've done worse before, haha.
I really like how well you integrated the Brighteyes into the plot and even found ways to fill in plot holes and everything. The character development is really really good, and I feel like Alice is a real person that I would totally root for in a fight.
I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Good luck with the last few months of your school year, but don't wish them over too soon. Like I think Alice does, you should treasure your time as well.
14Aoi KazuyaI think I'm about ready to call myself crazy for reading through all 61 chapters in one day...but I think I've done worse before, haha.
I really like how well you integrated the Brighteyes into the plot and even found ways to fill in plot holes and everything. The character development is really really good, and I feel like Alice is a real person that I would totally root for in a fight.
I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Good luck with the last few months of your school year, but don't wish them over too soon. Like I think Alice does, you should treasure your time as well.
5/16 c61 2Kagehana.Tsukio
Oh **. Oh god **ing **. Those last lines... are you going to update soon? Please say you are. Frankly, I almost got a panic attack just now. no joke...
2Kagehana.TsukioOh **. Oh god **ing **. Those last lines... are you going to update soon? Please say you are. Frankly, I almost got a panic attack just now. no joke...
5/16 c61 9Nenagh24
This story is FANTASTIC omg one of the most perfect OC fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading, thank you so much! I look forward to reading the rest as it updates
9Nenagh24This story is FANTASTIC omg one of the most perfect OC fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading, thank you so much! I look forward to reading the rest as it updates
5/14 c61 Nomurai
Hang on, school just started for you? How does New Zealand (I think that's where you live...) school system work? o_O My school year's already almost done (like, in a week or two).
Regardless, thanks for updating! I can't wait for the plot bending to begin XD (Evil cliffhanger there, though.) Good luck in school :)
Hang on, school just started for you? How does New Zealand (I think that's where you live...) school system work? o_O My school year's already almost done (like, in a week or two).
Regardless, thanks for updating! I can't wait for the plot bending to begin XD (Evil cliffhanger there, though.) Good luck in school :)
5/14 c61 shirokuromokona
Hehehehe she really gets no breaks. The part of Yamamoto surprises me, but I guess it shouldn't, since he did know of the curse before anyone (unless you were a Brighteye or an Arcobaleno). I really like Hana I always wondered why she wasn't put into the future arc. And when she did appear, it was as Kyoko's friend TYL. I guess they needed someone. Her jealously really gives character, she isn't flat or background. She is Kyoko's friend. She is Hana, the ever sarcastic, worrying, child-hating, friend. I really respect her for this. I hope they tell her someday.
Can't wait for the next chapter (Hibari and Alice moment, I hope). Also kind of want to really she her telling Tsuna about her flame using her life, (I love angst moments in fanfic). Thanks for the chapter.
I understand why you didn't reply to some reviews from the last chapter, but I still wondering about this question:
('We… we are allowed to see our family as our real selves if we succeed. As we were taken at eight—' I let Reborn connect the dots by himself. His eyes lit with understanding, and slight sympathy and pity."
Did he think that her appearances were changed or something. Our real selves. What did Reborn understand. Sorry if I'm a little slow on the up take. )
If you still don't reply that's fine, but I'll probably bother you for a little bit more in each review, cause I really couldn't get it out of my head, every time I reread the story. Thanks again for the chapter.
Hehehehe she really gets no breaks. The part of Yamamoto surprises me, but I guess it shouldn't, since he did know of the curse before anyone (unless you were a Brighteye or an Arcobaleno). I really like Hana I always wondered why she wasn't put into the future arc. And when she did appear, it was as Kyoko's friend TYL. I guess they needed someone. Her jealously really gives character, she isn't flat or background. She is Kyoko's friend. She is Hana, the ever sarcastic, worrying, child-hating, friend. I really respect her for this. I hope they tell her someday.
Can't wait for the next chapter (Hibari and Alice moment, I hope). Also kind of want to really she her telling Tsuna about her flame using her life, (I love angst moments in fanfic). Thanks for the chapter.
I understand why you didn't reply to some reviews from the last chapter, but I still wondering about this question:
('We… we are allowed to see our family as our real selves if we succeed. As we were taken at eight—' I let Reborn connect the dots by himself. His eyes lit with understanding, and slight sympathy and pity."
Did he think that her appearances were changed or something. Our real selves. What did Reborn understand. Sorry if I'm a little slow on the up take. )
If you still don't reply that's fine, but I'll probably bother you for a little bit more in each review, cause I really couldn't get it out of my head, every time I reread the story. Thanks again for the chapter.
5/14 c61 1Deceivingly Cute
Uff...I'm writing this to tell you that this is 'one' of the most amazing fanfics I have ever come across in this part of the site. Since I'm technically new, don't blame me for not finding this awesome piece of work earlier.
*Cough cough sips lemon water like a boss*
Now, to the main reason I am writing this review (Even though for the life of ME and my laziness I decided to write anyway, lol) is because it is in short, spectacular, amazing, and makes a lot of sense even when it's not supposed to.
... Understand what I wrote there? Ahem, never-mind...
Alice is very special in a way that she began looking like a normal sue-ish (Which I get, because there isn't depth to her character in the beginning. A normal person can be rich and have butlers and live high class and all that jumble of so called mary-sue traits and actually be excruciatingly normal. Like Alice's case.) but shows more personality as they story began during cannon, and more interactive.
Lets say I think of you as my sensei of sorts that I might ask for advice from time to time (If we manage to become friends in the first place...that is .) and that you have gained yet another fan.
Huzzah, rejoice. Quote'th le me.
Btw, I don't mind if you update slowly, cuz school is a pain. I know, been there, done that. Even I am in the middle of my tests 0_0 and should not be here in the first place...
Oh well!
1Deceivingly CuteUff...I'm writing this to tell you that this is 'one' of the most amazing fanfics I have ever come across in this part of the site. Since I'm technically new, don't blame me for not finding this awesome piece of work earlier.
*Cough cough sips lemon water like a boss*
Now, to the main reason I am writing this review (Even though for the life of ME and my laziness I decided to write anyway, lol) is because it is in short, spectacular, amazing, and makes a lot of sense even when it's not supposed to.
... Understand what I wrote there? Ahem, never-mind...
Alice is very special in a way that she began looking like a normal sue-ish (Which I get, because there isn't depth to her character in the beginning. A normal person can be rich and have butlers and live high class and all that jumble of so called mary-sue traits and actually be excruciatingly normal. Like Alice's case.) but shows more personality as they story began during cannon, and more interactive.
Lets say I think of you as my sensei of sorts that I might ask for advice from time to time (If we manage to become friends in the first place...that is .) and that you have gained yet another fan.
Huzzah, rejoice. Quote'th le me.
Btw, I don't mind if you update slowly, cuz school is a pain. I know, been there, done that. Even I am in the middle of my tests 0_0 and should not be here in the first place...
Oh well!
5/13 c61 22shanagi95
Colbub, I will say that I certainly do not mind if chap 60 of AFS is very long. So, please continue it soon!
So, I think I would like more interaction between Alice with Yamamoto. And I want to know what TYL!Tsuna wrote for his past self!
22shanagi95Colbub, I will say that I certainly do not mind if chap 60 of AFS is very long. So, please continue it soon!
So, I think I would like more interaction between Alice with Yamamoto. And I want to know what TYL!Tsuna wrote for his past self!
5/13 c61 Guest
Finally, Chapter 61!
Is this a cliffhanger? Oh well, Alice might ditch the question or maybe not, considering what kind of a person she is.
Hehe.
This is getting exciting, I'm having goosebumps! Alice should leave for a vacation since she's going to 'die again' soon.
Finally, Chapter 61!
Is this a cliffhanger? Oh well, Alice might ditch the question or maybe not, considering what kind of a person she is.
Hehe.
This is getting exciting, I'm having goosebumps! Alice should leave for a vacation since she's going to 'die again' soon.
5/13 c61 moonprincesst15
I love your story and now that I think about it they really should have told Hana about the mafia she would of been able to take it and understand much better and faster to
I love your story and now that I think about it they really should have told Hana about the mafia she would of been able to take it and understand much better and faster to
5/13 c61 5Syngaly
Hello :)
Tsuna 's going to find out ? Alice really can't get a break now can she ?
Well I really liked your chapter! Alice plotting with Reborn is a great idea . But I wonder what'll do exactly once you'll reach the end of the canon!story...
( sorry if there's any grammar/spelling mistake in my review )
I'm soooooo happy you're going to continue AFS! :D :D :D I thought you forgot about it or something ... Thanks anyway
Well, ganbatte for your exams ( sadly my exams are in two weeks too :/ ) and see you next chapter I hope :)
5SyngalyHello :)
Tsuna 's going to find out ? Alice really can't get a break now can she ?
Well I really liked your chapter! Alice plotting with Reborn is a great idea . But I wonder what'll do exactly once you'll reach the end of the canon!story...
( sorry if there's any grammar/spelling mistake in my review )
I'm soooooo happy you're going to continue AFS! :D :D :D I thought you forgot about it or something ... Thanks anyway
Well, ganbatte for your exams ( sadly my exams are in two weeks too :/ ) and see you next chapter I hope :)