for Power Rangers: Beasts of Myth8/8/2012 c15 
15Michelle the Editor
That was great, definitely worth the wait. The drama was handled really well, and Izumi's appearances were intriguing. Skyler's new armor introduction went great. Looking forward to seeing Masqueraud's next fight!
15Michelle the EditorThat was great, definitely worth the wait. The drama was handled really well, and Izumi's appearances were intriguing. Skyler's new armor introduction went great. Looking forward to seeing Masqueraud's next fight!
4/10/2012 c14 Michelle the Editor
The interrupted kiss story made me chuckle. I've always been a fan of old-style Faeries - the perilous, vengeful and not-quite-demonic Folk pwn fluttery bug things any day.
Though personally I'd think Sean's previous experiences with living mythology, a bit more than his Irishness, would contribute to a Faery-phobia. And the power of love? These Rangers are a bit unnecessarily gabby - you did a good enough job showing the growing relationship that talking about it was redundant.
The interrupted kiss story made me chuckle. I've always been a fan of old-style Faeries - the perilous, vengeful and not-quite-demonic Folk pwn fluttery bug things any day.
Though personally I'd think Sean's previous experiences with living mythology, a bit more than his Irishness, would contribute to a Faery-phobia. And the power of love? These Rangers are a bit unnecessarily gabby - you did a good enough job showing the growing relationship that talking about it was redundant.
2/13/2012 c1 Jacell
Great story Wolf! I actually enjoyed this story even though I skimmed through it. The majority of the story from Chapter One to Chapter Three was a great start off to something serious. What really made it good was the uniqueness of the transformations. Finally someone other than myself does it too. You didn’t really explain much of the character appearances, but that part I left up to my imagination and it turned out well. The command to change was dull, but it was original and I like it, the changing sequence was well detailed, the spandex suits which each one was based off of was different and not a copy of the leader (that’s a relief), the weapons were cool, and this team truly is different. However, here is what I think you should do as I believe your story is good enough to be its own Sentai story and not a power rangers as you made it. Take the power rangers out and change it to something different that’s screams Sentai and not Saban, change morphers to a different name so the team can maintain its own identity, the poses make them a little cliché and aren’t needed as you did a good enough job with the changing sequence already that need no extras, and keep all your characters original because that really saves the story. Overall, your team is better than power rangers, therefore they deserve to be in their own story with no ranger related remarks or names making them a true original Sentai team to enjoy.
Great story Wolf! I actually enjoyed this story even though I skimmed through it. The majority of the story from Chapter One to Chapter Three was a great start off to something serious. What really made it good was the uniqueness of the transformations. Finally someone other than myself does it too. You didn’t really explain much of the character appearances, but that part I left up to my imagination and it turned out well. The command to change was dull, but it was original and I like it, the changing sequence was well detailed, the spandex suits which each one was based off of was different and not a copy of the leader (that’s a relief), the weapons were cool, and this team truly is different. However, here is what I think you should do as I believe your story is good enough to be its own Sentai story and not a power rangers as you made it. Take the power rangers out and change it to something different that’s screams Sentai and not Saban, change morphers to a different name so the team can maintain its own identity, the poses make them a little cliché and aren’t needed as you did a good enough job with the changing sequence already that need no extras, and keep all your characters original because that really saves the story. Overall, your team is better than power rangers, therefore they deserve to be in their own story with no ranger related remarks or names making them a true original Sentai team to enjoy.
1/19/2012 c13 Michelle the Editor
Great chapter! The character interactions in the beginning were entertaining, the conversation between you and Clarice worked very well, the action was strong, and I liked the reveal. I look forward to hearing more about Izumi.
Great chapter! The character interactions in the beginning were entertaining, the conversation between you and Clarice worked very well, the action was strong, and I liked the reveal. I look forward to hearing more about Izumi.
12/7/2011 c12 15Michelle the Editor
I liked the concept of inside-first freezing, and the Portuguese was used well. More descriptions are always a good thing, but the ones you have at least work.
Why did Xue use her powers like this? Is it even winter?
The bonding between Sean and Skyler was good, though the last bit, where Sean used both his and Skyler's powers, had a slightly weird vibe. Your dialogue is very occasionally stiff.
I'm always glad to see updates from you, keep up the great work!
15Michelle the EditorI liked the concept of inside-first freezing, and the Portuguese was used well. More descriptions are always a good thing, but the ones you have at least work.
Why did Xue use her powers like this? Is it even winter?
The bonding between Sean and Skyler was good, though the last bit, where Sean used both his and Skyler's powers, had a slightly weird vibe. Your dialogue is very occasionally stiff.
I'm always glad to see updates from you, keep up the great work!
10/29/2011 c11 15Michelle the Editor
Nice chapter! The love spell's effects on all the different characters were intriguing, and the fight was well done.
Note that your chapter title cuts off with a "ch," though.
15Michelle the EditorNice chapter! The love spell's effects on all the different characters were intriguing, and the fight was well done.
Note that your chapter title cuts off with a "ch," though.