for Under the Blood red Sky11/12/2012 c28 Brenda
Im so glad she ended with Demetri. Edward deserved losing everything.
Im so glad she ended with Demetri. Edward deserved losing everything.
2/16/2012 c27 
1JMaire
Yes, Edward was 'babied' by the Cullens in canon. They indulged him and let him get away with his sulking and tantrums and "I want Bella to be HUMAN!" whining.
1JMaireYes, Edward was 'babied' by the Cullens in canon. They indulged him and let him get away with his sulking and tantrums and "I want Bella to be HUMAN!" whining.
2/15/2012 c28 MaryMary123
Mama you are correct there is not Edward and Bella together in this story ending. He ruined any hope of that. He gets what he deserves, memories of his life of stupidity. Sandy used him and he let her. He is the mind reader and he let her.
Bella deserves love and D loving her and marrying her is wonderful.
Thanks Mama.
Mama you are correct there is not Edward and Bella together in this story ending. He ruined any hope of that. He gets what he deserves, memories of his life of stupidity. Sandy used him and he let her. He is the mind reader and he let her.
Bella deserves love and D loving her and marrying her is wonderful.
Thanks Mama.
2/12/2012 c28 JMaire
Ha! Good one! Assward got what he deserved for betraying Bella - I wish ALL of them misery and pain.
Ha! Good one! Assward got what he deserved for betraying Bella - I wish ALL of them misery and pain.
2/12/2012 c28 kiwisrock
SWEET! That was SPOT ON! Of course no HEA B&E! Thanks! Great stuff, way to bring it home to stupid, selfish Edward!
SWEET! That was SPOT ON! Of course no HEA B&E! Thanks! Great stuff, way to bring it home to stupid, selfish Edward!
2/9/2012 c28 2TwilightMom505
I'm not sure what I thought would happen - but this seems like a good ending...for Bella. I didn't read the original fic but your continuation made it clear...this is the right way...
2TwilightMom505I'm not sure what I thought would happen - but this seems like a good ending...for Bella. I didn't read the original fic but your continuation made it clear...this is the right way...
2/9/2012 c28 Twiolic
Edward f'd up BIG time in Blood Moon. His treatment of Bella in your continuation was atrocious. Edward preferred and looked forward to death as his punishment, didn't get it, then arrogantly thought Bella would let him back into her life as her feeder and lover. The punishment you meted out to him was exactly what he deserved.
Now I look forward to reading Blood Moon and UtBRS together as if they are one story.
Well done!
Edward f'd up BIG time in Blood Moon. His treatment of Bella in your continuation was atrocious. Edward preferred and looked forward to death as his punishment, didn't get it, then arrogantly thought Bella would let him back into her life as her feeder and lover. The punishment you meted out to him was exactly what he deserved.
Now I look forward to reading Blood Moon and UtBRS together as if they are one story.
Well done!
2/8/2012 c28 nikkistew2
So will Edward continue on forever mateless, or was skanky Sandy or crazy Alice really his mate?
So will Edward continue on forever mateless, or was skanky Sandy or crazy Alice really his mate?
2/8/2012 c28 Navarre
Hey, that's life in fanfiction. Sometimes you win and others...
I enjoyed this story and am so glad you took on the continuing from Blood Moon.
You did a great job!
Take care!
Hey, that's life in fanfiction. Sometimes you win and others...
I enjoyed this story and am so glad you took on the continuing from Blood Moon.
You did a great job!
Take care!
2/8/2012 c28 2roon0
This is a perfect ending to a wonderful story. Bella deserved her happy ending and it was right that is was not with Edward. Thank you so much for sharing.
2roon0This is a perfect ending to a wonderful story. Bella deserved her happy ending and it was right that is was not with Edward. Thank you so much for sharing.
2/8/2012 c28 milicentforever
Well..seems afitting ending for this Edward..and shes right..he never acted like he loved her..only when it was way too late.
Well..seems afitting ending for this Edward..and shes right..he never acted like he loved her..only when it was way too late.
2/8/2012 c28 fangrl01
I think it ended as it should have. I would have liked to have seen a BPOV about her growing and loving relationship with Demetri. Perhaps an outtake. Pretty please.
I think it ended as it should have. I would have liked to have seen a BPOV about her growing and loving relationship with Demetri. Perhaps an outtake. Pretty please.
2/8/2012 c28 csp4
Edward needs a massive amount of therapy! He really is 1 sick dude:( I'm glad Bella will be happy. Ultimately, that's what I always want!
Great story! Thanks for sharing:)
Edward needs a massive amount of therapy! He really is 1 sick dude:( I'm glad Bella will be happy. Ultimately, that's what I always want!
Great story! Thanks for sharing:)
2/8/2012 c28 miawmiaw
Awwwww, I was hoping she'd end up with Jasper. But then, Demetri's fine - he was there to save her. Edward got what he deserved. Perhaps, a few hundred years later, he can have his chance again and not blow it away.
Awwwww, I was hoping she'd end up with Jasper. But then, Demetri's fine - he was there to save her. Edward got what he deserved. Perhaps, a few hundred years later, he can have his chance again and not blow it away.