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6StayWithMeForTheKids
I've just finished reading this story, it's 3:30 am in the UK right now and I am completely upset that I can't continue reading this story to 4 or 5 am :( I'm loving this so much, I love the mix of Pezberry and Faberry, it's weighed out nicely! As to whom I'd like Rachel to pick is so simple for me: Quinn. Faberry is my ULTIMATE OTP and as much as I love Pezberry, Faberry are always going to be my number one choice. I hope you update soon, I see you haven't updated in a while, but I'm sure you have your reasons. Until next time!
6StayWithMeForTheKidsI've just finished reading this story, it's 3:30 am in the UK right now and I am completely upset that I can't continue reading this story to 4 or 5 am :( I'm loving this so much, I love the mix of Pezberry and Faberry, it's weighed out nicely! As to whom I'd like Rachel to pick is so simple for me: Quinn. Faberry is my ULTIMATE OTP and as much as I love Pezberry, Faberry are always going to be my number one choice. I hope you update soon, I see you haven't updated in a while, but I'm sure you have your reasons. Until next time!
4/3 c21 HeatherSS1
The almost-kisses are so frustrating! Frustrating to read, can't imagine how *they* feel, lol
The almost-kisses are so frustrating! Frustrating to read, can't imagine how *they* feel, lol
4/3 c16 HeatherSS1
omg that was just awesome. The truth or dare, the Quinn/Rachel kiss, the body shot... It was all just awesome! *wants to hit Finn, though*
omg that was just awesome. The truth or dare, the Quinn/Rachel kiss, the body shot... It was all just awesome! *wants to hit Finn, though*
4/2 c13 HeatherSS1
*bursts out laughing at Santana's last lines!* Oh goodness. I love how well Santana and Quinn play off each other, they can't help the snarking and competitiveness even when they're supposedly teaming up at this point to get Finn out of the picture. Love it!
*bursts out laughing at Santana's last lines!* Oh goodness. I love how well Santana and Quinn play off each other, they can't help the snarking and competitiveness even when they're supposedly teaming up at this point to get Finn out of the picture. Love it!
4/2 c3 HeatherSS1
Just started reading this and I know I'm going to regret it because I hate reading stories that seem to have been abandoned unfinished, but I LOVE it! I love how Quinn and Santana's "truce" lasted like two minutes before they were arguing over Rachel. And this chapter, I keep thinking Rachel's not stupid, she's going to realize that *something* is up, Quinn and Santana both suddenly being nice to her.
Just started reading this and I know I'm going to regret it because I hate reading stories that seem to have been abandoned unfinished, but I LOVE it! I love how Quinn and Santana's "truce" lasted like two minutes before they were arguing over Rachel. And this chapter, I keep thinking Rachel's not stupid, she's going to realize that *something* is up, Quinn and Santana both suddenly being nice to her.
2/9 c27 planenutty
I'm really enjoying he story. I love both pairings and am torn. Really kind of wish Q and S would have clicked enough to share. :0) Can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing.
I'm really enjoying he story. I love both pairings and am torn. Really kind of wish Q and S would have clicked enough to share. :0) Can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing.
2/7 c1 K
i really hope for your sake that all this time youve been practically dead, youve been reading lots and lots of chapters for over a thousand people who hae been checking this fic everyday to see if you FINALLY updated. But no. you havent
i really hope for your sake that all this time youve been practically dead, youve been reading lots and lots of chapters for over a thousand people who hae been checking this fic everyday to see if you FINALLY updated. But no. you havent
12/31/2012 c27 12GypsySoul05
i really enjoyed this, I am so sad that it has been stalled for an update! (pout) hope that maybe you'll update soon, I really like to see where this will go !
12GypsySoul05i really enjoyed this, I am so sad that it has been stalled for an update! (pout) hope that maybe you'll update soon, I really like to see where this will go !
11/18/2012 c27 S
Just read all of it and now I realize how stupid that was because you haven't updated in a while and I'm obsessed :(
Just read all of it and now I realize how stupid that was because you haven't updated in a while and I'm obsessed :(
10/30/2012 c27 najiow
Really enjoyed reading this story even though you haven't updated in a long time..
Really enjoyed reading this story even though you haven't updated in a long time..
10/21/2012 c27 Please come back
It's been over a year and I can't get enough of this story. I know life gets in the way or writer's block, but I hope you haven't completely abandoned this fic. And if it counts, I'm all for Pezberry. I'm not much of a Faberry fan, though I can see the aesthetics of it, but it would be nice to see more Pezberry fanfics. ] Plus there's just something about the dynamics of their relationship.
It's been over a year and I can't get enough of this story. I know life gets in the way or writer's block, but I hope you haven't completely abandoned this fic. And if it counts, I'm all for Pezberry. I'm not much of a Faberry fan, though I can see the aesthetics of it, but it would be nice to see more Pezberry fanfics. ] Plus there's just something about the dynamics of their relationship.
10/5/2012 c27 ameliatana
this is so good, do you have more of an idea of who you want to be endgame? i'm team pezberry hehe, but this is great, brava!
this is so good, do you have more of an idea of who you want to be endgame? i'm team pezberry hehe, but this is great, brava!
9/30/2012 c27 4Jaely
*sighs* Not really happy that you have Rachel giving that whole "you saved me so I feel more connected to you" line.. I just think it's a little cliche. I guess because it gives Santana an edge that Quinn can not compete with unless she gets the chance to save Rachel as well.
Just putting this out there, but if the feelings get much deeper then Rachel is REALLY going to hurt them both in the end because right now even though both Quinn and Santana know about each other, Rachel is still being a bit of a player...
I'm really invested in how you have written both Quinn and Santana, and they both deserve to be happy and I really don't see how their friendship can survive the heartache if Rachel lets the feelings with both of them get more involved, and then chooses between them. so I'm going to put back out there that maybe letting Quinn and Santana find each other as well along with Rachel or give Santana or Quinn an out with a possible relationship that is equal to Rachel that takes them out of the running... I just can't see this ending without some major heartache.
That being said, I do love the story and please take my feedback as constructive criticism I'm not flaming you, I just think you need to take more in to account that the further Rachel lets her self become involved with each of them the more she is going to hurt them in the end and it will not only hurt the relationship between Quinn and Santana, it will end up more likely than not destroying what ever friendship the wounded party had with Rachel herself, it's just human nature.
Looking forward to your next update. If you ever want someone to help with writers block or a sounding board let me know. No matter which way you take the story I will be willing to lend a hand.
4Jaely*sighs* Not really happy that you have Rachel giving that whole "you saved me so I feel more connected to you" line.. I just think it's a little cliche. I guess because it gives Santana an edge that Quinn can not compete with unless she gets the chance to save Rachel as well.
Just putting this out there, but if the feelings get much deeper then Rachel is REALLY going to hurt them both in the end because right now even though both Quinn and Santana know about each other, Rachel is still being a bit of a player...
I'm really invested in how you have written both Quinn and Santana, and they both deserve to be happy and I really don't see how their friendship can survive the heartache if Rachel lets the feelings with both of them get more involved, and then chooses between them. so I'm going to put back out there that maybe letting Quinn and Santana find each other as well along with Rachel or give Santana or Quinn an out with a possible relationship that is equal to Rachel that takes them out of the running... I just can't see this ending without some major heartache.
That being said, I do love the story and please take my feedback as constructive criticism I'm not flaming you, I just think you need to take more in to account that the further Rachel lets her self become involved with each of them the more she is going to hurt them in the end and it will not only hurt the relationship between Quinn and Santana, it will end up more likely than not destroying what ever friendship the wounded party had with Rachel herself, it's just human nature.
Looking forward to your next update. If you ever want someone to help with writers block or a sounding board let me know. No matter which way you take the story I will be willing to lend a hand.