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4/25 c37 3Phoenix Rise from the Ashes
I sorta just tripped on this and when I started reading I couldn't stop, it was like "Who needs food?" Your writing style is amazing, you don't spoon feed the readers but tease them with the spoon, so keep going girl, because it is truly amazing how you write :D :D! -Liz
4/21 c37 8Belle C'est Moi
So i just read this story.. like today,

and I must say this is AMAZING!

From the beginning i was hooked. I was trying to put all the pieces together. And i was doing quite well with figuring out Cody was stalking them over the weekend. But then you had a plot twist and added Lashawna. My mind was blown. lol. And I don't know why, but i have this overwhelming feeling Lashawna is next to die. Which would make since as to why Courtney had no other choice but to kill Duncan in the prologue. He is her only loose end. Unless of course you decided to make it end Duncan x Gwen and Courtney dies/ goes to jail, which I could see. ( But I hope you don't :)

But yeah! I want to commend you on your writing skills. Your great, your story is awesome. So update sooner rather than later.

Your new fan,
Brianna
4/9 c37 4play for keeps
They have a very flimsy plan. They can't have Leshawna see them, but they barely saw her anyway over the break, so that's gonna fail. This is SO gonna go downhill. And then Duncan will find out the real reason why Leshawna is blackmailing Courtney and then he's gonna break up with her and go out with Gwen. That's my opinion anyway :)
4/7 c36 play for keeps
OHHHHHHH SNAP! So Leshawna was behind everything! WOW! After reading chapter 9 again I was thinking the shelf that fell on Duncan and Courtney was done on purpose before he kissed her, but I wasn't sure who did it. So Leshawna and Duncan had a thing, and now she's black mailing Courtney so she can have Duncan to herself. Wow, this is such a plot twist! Duncan's gonna find out, though, and that's probably why they're not together next year.

Also, I had a question when you said Alejandro thought Courtney had been a virgin all this time. How come Al didn't notice she was NOT a virgin when they slept together? I can't remember, but Duncan and Courtney slept together, right? So she would've bled cuz it was her first time. And then she slept with Al, so if he thought she was a virgin, he should've seen her bleed too. But she didn't b/c she already slept with Duncan, so how did Al still think she was a virgin if she didn't bleed? Maybe she made him drunk or something when they did it so he couldn't remember, or made the sheets red somehow? It's just a thought.
4/7 c36 ShikaInoInuKikIchiHime36
Wow, So Great! Amazing! You've Really Done An Great Job! Please Continue!
4/6 c36 4chrisATD1
Holy plot twist! I didn't see that coming. Hope you update soon, just so I can see what happens next.
3/15 c35 ShikaInoInuKikIchiHime36
I Re-Read Chapter 9, I Think Im Starting To Get It! Please Continue Soon!
2/25 c35 4play for keeps
Aaaah I want to know what happened with Courtney and Alejandro! I was thinking this chapter would explain what happened, but I guess we all know what happened-I just wanted details :P It sucks Courtney has to sneak around with Duncan, but I knew she would comment that it was exciting haha. She likes danger haha. So they're gonna wait till September to be an item? I can't remember if they were or not, I have to re-read the senior year's. I'll re-read chapter 9 when the next chapter comes out!

Keep up the good work! I will def being reading this till the end!
11/20/2012 c14 BananaGang
Amazing!
11/19/2012 c34 ShikaInoInuKikIchiHime36
-.- Definitely Not Feeling This Chapter, Starting To Lose Interest. Hope This Isnt How The Rest Of The Story Will Be!
11/19/2012 c34 play for keeps
Man, each chapter my head's spinning like that the heck happened between Duncan and Courtney?! I'd like to know what really happened over the summer, why didn't they keep in contact? It's like tearing me apart trying to figure out what the heck happened from being all lovey dovey to this?! And I still think Eva was the one who was stalking them and not Cody.

I'm also curious about Duncan's motives; so he brushes off both Courtney and dismisses his relationship with Gwen as a 'thing.' He's hard to read. And why the heck is Courtney still with Alejandro if he's sleeping with Heather?! So many questions that I need to know hahaha. Great chapter, even with all my useless rambling about why things are the way they are hehe. I felt bad for Bridgette too that Heather basically said she just kept her around so she can do their homework. I really like how you characterize everyone in the story, I felt like I could feel Courtney's pain of Duncan not taking her back and Bridgette's humiliation.
11/13/2012 c9 Steffi
Omgodness i love this story please make a sequel this is my second time reading it.
11/13/2012 c33 4MorTay3
This is spine chilling good. Glad to see an update :)
11/10/2012 c33 24Theater Of The Mind
This story, omg I just can't get enough of it- like Ughh! I know I've said this like I don't even know how many times but its my absolute favorite i just adore it as much as I did when I was actively in this fandom! You know what! I wanna draw something for this to show my appreciation for how incredible this story is... Is there any particular seen that you'd like drawn out? (Just to let you know I got the TDI style down exceptionally well... Haven't done it in over 2 years though but I'm sure i still got that touch hahaha).
11/9/2012 c33 kutiekat44
This was great
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