for Intoxicated1/25 c1 the reader
please please write more write more !
please please write more write more !
1/23 c1 stormyrose
Write more! ..you must... - .-"
Write more! ..you must... - .-"
1/23 c1 Write more
Please write more for this! its so good ! the pairing is so different it would be a story like no other! please please please!
Please write more for this! its so good ! the pairing is so different it would be a story like no other! please please please!
9/9/2012 c1 Aidan
Aaaahaha I think it's great! I dunno if it needs another chapter, but perhaps an omake of the morning after would be nice. Something fun, light, yet still lovely as ever? It's up to you though, of course _
Aaaahaha I think it's great! I dunno if it needs another chapter, but perhaps an omake of the morning after would be nice. Something fun, light, yet still lovely as ever? It's up to you though, of course _
8/13/2012 c1 Cassandra
That was the best, and most well written fanfic I've read in a long time, and I mean in general as well! Loved it!
That was the best, and most well written fanfic I've read in a long time, and I mean in general as well! Loved it!
3/28/2012 c1 
25Crimson Siyrean
love it. love Jiraiya fics like this and i wish their were more out there. i hope you decide to atleast do a morning after chapter, just to get everyones reaction.
25Crimson Siyreanlove it. love Jiraiya fics like this and i wish their were more out there. i hope you decide to atleast do a morning after chapter, just to get everyones reaction.
11/5/2011 c1 Safuuru
Please sequel please! Loved the story and can't wait to see everyone else's reactions :)
Please sequel please! Loved the story and can't wait to see everyone else's reactions :)