for Little Monster8/9/2012 c1 
77KrisEleven
They are so freakin cute. Good story, here. I thought you captured their characters well, as they would have been before Sherlock became old enough to create absolute chaos. The sequence of events were a little confusing... was everything happening sequentially or was it Mycroft thinking back while Sherlock slept? A little more transition would have made it flow much more nicely. Otherwise, I enjoyed it.
77KrisElevenThey are so freakin cute. Good story, here. I thought you captured their characters well, as they would have been before Sherlock became old enough to create absolute chaos. The sequence of events were a little confusing... was everything happening sequentially or was it Mycroft thinking back while Sherlock slept? A little more transition would have made it flow much more nicely. Otherwise, I enjoyed it.
6/12/2012 c1 5SkoRn3d
Okay, that was just cute. I think I might draw something of the two of them, like this. Just so that I can have a reference of what they would look like as very young children.
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So cute.
5SkoRn3dOkay, that was just cute. I think I might draw something of the two of them, like this. Just so that I can have a reference of what they would look like as very young children.
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So cute.
4/12/2012 c1 4spinner12
I liked all of the little scenes. I thought you did a great job portraying them as children. And let's face it, they wouldn't have been 'normal' children anyway.
4spinner12I liked all of the little scenes. I thought you did a great job portraying them as children. And let's face it, they wouldn't have been 'normal' children anyway.
3/20/2012 c1 121Dlvvanzor
That was so, so precious and sweet. This has got to be one of my favorites.
121DlvvanzorThat was so, so precious and sweet. This has got to be one of my favorites.
2/13/2012 c1 austiles
D'aww, this was so sweet. I love brotherly interaction between Mycroft and Sherlock, brilliant job with this.
D'aww, this was so sweet. I love brotherly interaction between Mycroft and Sherlock, brilliant job with this.
1/9/2012 c1 7Skyfullofstars
I don't know which bit of this I liked, other than the entire Work of course! But I think it was when Sherlock wanted to know if the dog would go all slimy (yes, Sherlock it will) AND when the brothers promised each other that if Narnia existed, they would take each other along.
I, too, took a pillow, blanket, small lamp, tiny radio and all of my books into my closet, hooked everything up, shut the door and prayed with all my might that there was a wardrobe type of wall at the back of the closet...sigh...lovely,,,so lovely a story!
7SkyfullofstarsI don't know which bit of this I liked, other than the entire Work of course! But I think it was when Sherlock wanted to know if the dog would go all slimy (yes, Sherlock it will) AND when the brothers promised each other that if Narnia existed, they would take each other along.
I, too, took a pillow, blanket, small lamp, tiny radio and all of my books into my closet, hooked everything up, shut the door and prayed with all my might that there was a wardrobe type of wall at the back of the closet...sigh...lovely,,,so lovely a story!
8/19/2011 c1 26wild-springflower
oh, they are both so cute! i love stories with little Sherlock and little Mycroft! :) great job!
26wild-springfloweroh, they are both so cute! i love stories with little Sherlock and little Mycroft! :) great job!
7/24/2011 c1 5Proclaim Thy Warrior Soul
Oh my goodness, that was simply adorable! And...I need more! More young!Sherlock and brotherly!Mycroft...please? Pretty pretty please?
5Proclaim Thy Warrior SoulOh my goodness, that was simply adorable! And...I need more! More young!Sherlock and brotherly!Mycroft...please? Pretty pretty please?
12/26/2010 c1 5Noelle M
Awwww! THis was cute! I wish there was more of this child Holmes brothers stories on here, because they end up being very cute! I loved it! If you intend on writing more of this, don't hesitate oto do so!
ALso, you portrayed the characters of the two boys very well!
5Noelle MAwwww! THis was cute! I wish there was more of this child Holmes brothers stories on here, because they end up being very cute! I loved it! If you intend on writing more of this, don't hesitate oto do so!
ALso, you portrayed the characters of the two boys very well!
11/23/2010 c1 5Forever Unsolved
i have to say, the coded cyrillic letter made me laugh; im taking russian now and im taching my friends cyrillic so we can pass coded notes :P i love this, and you captured mycroft especially well!
5Forever Unsolvedi have to say, the coded cyrillic letter made me laugh; im taking russian now and im taching my friends cyrillic so we can pass coded notes :P i love this, and you captured mycroft especially well!
11/23/2010 c1 178stardiva
ok this i love.
my fave part is the bug eating question.
if mycroft had been any other older brother I would bet he would have said hey go for it. i'll prepare it my self.
i love how mycroft is the neat freak and sherlock is more a oh this looks like a good spot to drop this. But sherlock is sort of a compulise clutter bug. he has to be messy to be orginized.
that make sense?
and i do think mycroft is jeaulous of our sherlock. just in the way he treats him.
again i love this
got any more young sherlock stories?
178stardivaok this i love.
my fave part is the bug eating question.
if mycroft had been any other older brother I would bet he would have said hey go for it. i'll prepare it my self.
i love how mycroft is the neat freak and sherlock is more a oh this looks like a good spot to drop this. But sherlock is sort of a compulise clutter bug. he has to be messy to be orginized.
that make sense?
and i do think mycroft is jeaulous of our sherlock. just in the way he treats him.
again i love this
got any more young sherlock stories?