for In Matoran Care4/21/2012 c14 
5Jazzyart
0_0! omg an update! 8D yay!
I can't wait to see what type of an adventure Takua and Aster are going to have! X3
5Jazzyart0_0! omg an update! 8D yay!
I can't wait to see what type of an adventure Takua and Aster are going to have! X3
4/21/2012 c14 InTheLight-Hija
"Had this been any other Ta-Matoran, then there would have been a long pause, hesitation to deviant from the chosen path.
This was Takua however."
Hahaha! Why yes, everyone knows he doesn't really act like that :) That made me grin. I'm so happy to see an update for this story! It's really very amazing, and one of the best Bionicle stories out there. Hope to see more soon!
"Had this been any other Ta-Matoran, then there would have been a long pause, hesitation to deviant from the chosen path.
This was Takua however."
Hahaha! Why yes, everyone knows he doesn't really act like that :) That made me grin. I'm so happy to see an update for this story! It's really very amazing, and one of the best Bionicle stories out there. Hope to see more soon!
4/21/2012 c14 wolf girl811
i love this story it always been a worth the wait kind of story but i feel this chapter was kind of short... but i would love the idea of takua and aster going explorer it kind of remind me of my oc "explorer" girl the only definite is she dont remember her name... her are some pics of her http:/kitty1066.deviantart.com/art/underwater-rahi-185618905?q=gallery%3Akitty1066%2F27180457&qo=1 and http:/kitty1066.deviantart.com/art/explorer-perials-202970955?q=gallery%3Akitty1066%2F27180457&qo=0
i love this story it always been a worth the wait kind of story but i feel this chapter was kind of short... but i would love the idea of takua and aster going explorer it kind of remind me of my oc "explorer" girl the only definite is she dont remember her name... her are some pics of her http:/kitty1066.deviantart.com/art/underwater-rahi-185618905?q=gallery%3Akitty1066%2F27180457&qo=1 and http:/kitty1066.deviantart.com/art/explorer-perials-202970955?q=gallery%3Akitty1066%2F27180457&qo=0
1/11/2012 c11 The Teenage Bibliophile
Wow. Action Adventure indeed. Awesome escape scene! It's reminiscent of the scene in Mask of Light, but waaay cooler!
Great Writing! I can't wait till the rest of the story unfolds.
Wow. Action Adventure indeed. Awesome escape scene! It's reminiscent of the scene in Mask of Light, but waaay cooler!
Great Writing! I can't wait till the rest of the story unfolds.
1/11/2012 c12 The Teenage Bibliophile
Awkward! Poor Vakama, having to explain something so... weird.
Anywhat, Aster has a heart-light, and how cool is that! And who wouldn't be relieved after having a rash like that. Ouch.
Awkward! Poor Vakama, having to explain something so... weird.
Anywhat, Aster has a heart-light, and how cool is that! And who wouldn't be relieved after having a rash like that. Ouch.
1/11/2012 c13 The Teenage Bibliophile
Oooh, who's Takua's mysterious friend? Will they meet more dangerous Roots? Will Vakama ever be comfortable outside of his workshop?
This story just keeps getting Better and Better! Hope you update soon!
Oooh, who's Takua's mysterious friend? Will they meet more dangerous Roots? Will Vakama ever be comfortable outside of his workshop?
This story just keeps getting Better and Better! Hope you update soon!
10/16/2011 c13 7Novanto
It's me, MasterMitosi!
An awesome story! One doesn't find many "Human-winds-up in-Metru-Nui-while-the-Toa-Metru-are-still-Matoran" stories. My only complaint is watch your spelling and grammer a bit closer. The spelling problems are mainly in the Matoran words.
7NovantoIt's me, MasterMitosi!
An awesome story! One doesn't find many "Human-winds-up in-Metru-Nui-while-the-Toa-Metru-are-still-Matoran" stories. My only complaint is watch your spelling and grammer a bit closer. The spelling problems are mainly in the Matoran words.
9/24/2011 c13 12ZehHyperactiveAuthor
*legasp* You're ALIVE! Wow! It's been FOREVER since you've updated ANYTHING! Anywho, loved the chappy! Keep it up!
12ZehHyperactiveAuthor*legasp* You're ALIVE! Wow! It's been FOREVER since you've updated ANYTHING! Anywho, loved the chappy! Keep it up!
9/23/2011 c13 1SuicuneLuver
Ah, yes. A very refreshing update! A few minor spelling errors here and there but over all a very good chapter!
1SuicuneLuverAh, yes. A very refreshing update! A few minor spelling errors here and there but over all a very good chapter!
9/23/2011 c13 InTheLight-Hija
Yeeees, I was so happy to see this updated! Seriously, this is one of the greatest stories I look forward to reading ^^
Awesome, Takua's shop! Not many people include that I don't think, on here at least. I wonder if that key means anything...
Can't wait for more! :)
Yeeees, I was so happy to see this updated! Seriously, this is one of the greatest stories I look forward to reading ^^
Awesome, Takua's shop! Not many people include that I don't think, on here at least. I wonder if that key means anything...
Can't wait for more! :)
8/30/2011 c12 5guitargal3894
I find this story absolutely interesting in many ways! I would like to know when is the next time you update... It's an amazing story and I'm sure alot of people, myself included, would want to see what happens next...
5guitargal3894I find this story absolutely interesting in many ways! I would like to know when is the next time you update... It's an amazing story and I'm sure alot of people, myself included, would want to see what happens next...