for Same Difference12/6/2010 c1 Velshard
An Interesting idea but I find that your poor grammar and sentence structure greatly detracts from the quality of the reading experience. Now I'm not trying to flame you but my only real problem was that I had to go back and read a lot of the same lines 2-4 times over to get the gist of what was occurring. So while not a bad or much less horrible start it is most certainly below average in my book, I recommend getting a beta reader if at all possible.
An Interesting idea but I find that your poor grammar and sentence structure greatly detracts from the quality of the reading experience. Now I'm not trying to flame you but my only real problem was that I had to go back and read a lot of the same lines 2-4 times over to get the gist of what was occurring. So while not a bad or much less horrible start it is most certainly below average in my book, I recommend getting a beta reader if at all possible.