for Crazed9/17/2011 c1 
2Ghostukine
read the frist ch and love it. and it's SCREAM.
check out one of my stories and review please
2Ghostukineread the frist ch and love it. and it's SCREAM.
check out one of my stories and review please
7/16/2011 c5 1mrose381
Thanks everyone so far. I update sooner depending on my reviews. I have finished the whole story, have 50 something chapters.
1mrose381Thanks everyone so far. I update sooner depending on my reviews. I have finished the whole story, have 50 something chapters.
7/15/2011 c2 1jasonX65
Another great chapter!I like how she goes to the kitchen and the knife isn't there anymore.
1jasonX65Another great chapter!I like how she goes to the kitchen and the knife isn't there anymore.
3/20/2011 c3 anon13846
I loved it.
I loved it.
3/20/2011 c3 1mrose381
Hello guys, please spread the news about this story, I like comments so depending on how many people are reading/comments depends on how fast I publish new chapters because I'm already up to Chapter 13, just didn't publish others because not enough readers. Appreciate the support, thanks.
1mrose381Hello guys, please spread the news about this story, I like comments so depending on how many people are reading/comments depends on how fast I publish new chapters because I'm already up to Chapter 13, just didn't publish others because not enough readers. Appreciate the support, thanks.
12/15/2010 c1 4Mikami95
I like the concept of the story. You could broden the language a little, I mean, make the dialogue a little more interesting. It keeps the reader more entertained. I like the detail you gave about everything, it was very good. The only other thing that I would put it in paragraph forms because it is a little hard to read. But it was really good. I would like to keep reading, see where it goes from there.
4Mikami95I like the concept of the story. You could broden the language a little, I mean, make the dialogue a little more interesting. It keeps the reader more entertained. I like the detail you gave about everything, it was very good. The only other thing that I would put it in paragraph forms because it is a little hard to read. But it was really good. I would like to keep reading, see where it goes from there.