for Choices10/21/2012 c2 
12Maudlin Matryoshka
Please keep going with this! Great concept and nice writing. Can't wait to see more :D
12Maudlin MatryoshkaPlease keep going with this! Great concept and nice writing. Can't wait to see more :D
7/19/2012 c2 4RandomClarinetPlayer
I really like where this is going!
I hope you make more soon.
i was kinda mad about the ending too.
make more? Please?
4RandomClarinetPlayerI really like where this is going!
I hope you make more soon.
i was kinda mad about the ending too.
make more? Please?
7/16/2012 c2 6Servant of Agape
Good for Elli. She deserves it.
Nice chapter. I like where it's going.
WRITE ON!
6Servant of AgapeGood for Elli. She deserves it.
Nice chapter. I like where it's going.
WRITE ON!
7/15/2012 c2 26ghettos
beautifully written, though I'm momentarily confused regarding the part about Siry ans Aja. They said they were going to Ibara, and even though I understand that Ibara is Veelox simply in a difderent time frame; why did Press say "Veelox?" yep, that's about it. c:
I like the fact that Spader and Gunny left together - it feels right. And I'd love to see a form of reunion between Courtney, Mark and Bobby.
Yeah, that's it, do update soon! (:
26ghettosbeautifully written, though I'm momentarily confused regarding the part about Siry ans Aja. They said they were going to Ibara, and even though I understand that Ibara is Veelox simply in a difderent time frame; why did Press say "Veelox?" yep, that's about it. c:
I like the fact that Spader and Gunny left together - it feels right. And I'd love to see a form of reunion between Courtney, Mark and Bobby.
Yeah, that's it, do update soon! (:
4/25/2011 c1 WriterCat
THANK YOU the real ending was just mean. Please continue I wanna see where everyone goes!
THANK YOU the real ending was just mean. Please continue I wanna see where everyone goes!
3/4/2011 c1 6Servant of Agape
One chapter and I love it already. This was very nicely done. I hope you update soon.
Keep writing!
6Servant of AgapeOne chapter and I love it already. This was very nicely done. I hope you update soon.
Keep writing!
2/25/2011 c1 The weird writer
interesting plot and wonderfull writing! i look forward for more!
interesting plot and wonderfull writing! i look forward for more!
12/16/2010 c1 Em
Wow, this is amazing. That better not be the end. You should definitely write more of this. I was disappointed by the other ending too, and I like this way better. I felt the same way. I mean, why have them just give up the lives they almost died hundreds of times over fighting for! Please write more!
Wow, this is amazing. That better not be the end. You should definitely write more of this. I was disappointed by the other ending too, and I like this way better. I felt the same way. I mean, why have them just give up the lives they almost died hundreds of times over fighting for! Please write more!