for Stars12/10/2010 c9 Just4Me
I love the idea of Esme greeting Carlisle at the door when he comes home from work every day for over 80 years!
I love the idea of Esme greeting Carlisle at the door when he comes home from work every day for over 80 years!
12/9/2010 c9 
2Milene Lira
Hey! I've fallen for this story, sweetie! I love how you put all the characters, very good, so like the book ... especially Carlisle and Esme. I think you should follow this up with the BD or beyond.
It's very cute how you put the Carlisle and Esme as parents and a couple, and especially as stars, aww, I loved it.
And please update soon, I can't wait for more! Thanks for write it ♥
2Milene LiraHey! I've fallen for this story, sweetie! I love how you put all the characters, very good, so like the book ... especially Carlisle and Esme. I think you should follow this up with the BD or beyond.
It's very cute how you put the Carlisle and Esme as parents and a couple, and especially as stars, aww, I loved it.
And please update soon, I can't wait for more! Thanks for write it ♥
12/9/2010 c9 9Lothlorien Aeterna
Great chapter! :)
This has nothing to do with the story, but I just wanted to mention how selfish I think Edward is lol. He risks his entire family's life for this..that is the main reason why I don't like them. Just putting it out there lol
9Lothlorien AeternaGreat chapter! :)
This has nothing to do with the story, but I just wanted to mention how selfish I think Edward is lol. He risks his entire family's life for this..that is the main reason why I don't like them. Just putting it out there lol
12/9/2010 c8 Lothlorien Aeterna
Ooh, poor Carlisle! :(
Now I'm off to read the next chapter..thank you so much for posting three today! :D
Ooh, poor Carlisle! :(
Now I'm off to read the next chapter..thank you so much for posting three today! :D
12/9/2010 c9 43Mackenzie L
I love the way you've written Rose here. Sounds like you've been working hard. Sometimes I do my best writing in the middle of the night. :) There's just no controlling the muse... ;)
43Mackenzie LI love the way you've written Rose here. Sounds like you've been working hard. Sometimes I do my best writing in the middle of the night. :) There's just no controlling the muse... ;)
12/7/2010 c6 Just4Me
I think it's sweet that Esme would consider changing Bella, even though it would be so difficult for her.
I think it's sweet that Esme would consider changing Bella, even though it would be so difficult for her.
12/7/2010 c6 9Lothlorien Aeterna
Aww! One of my favorites so far :)
And you REALLY are spoiling us..two chapters in a day, possibly three? Wow haha. Keep it up!
9Lothlorien AeternaAww! One of my favorites so far :)
And you REALLY are spoiling us..two chapters in a day, possibly three? Wow haha. Keep it up!
12/7/2010 c5 43Mackenzie L
Very nice writing! I find it challenging myself when I have to write dialog between many characters at once. When the number of people rises over three at a time, I find it difficult to "juggle" the characters and their reactions to each other. You do well with that here while still keeping everyone true to their character.
43Mackenzie LVery nice writing! I find it challenging myself when I have to write dialog between many characters at once. When the number of people rises over three at a time, I find it difficult to "juggle" the characters and their reactions to each other. You do well with that here while still keeping everyone true to their character.
12/6/2010 c3 Just4Me
I loved the little section about Esme helping Carlisle get dressed for work - very sweet.
I loved the little section about Esme helping Carlisle get dressed for work - very sweet.