for Growing Up Black4/25 c69 yuiop
Loved it. Normally I would review more than one chapter but the whole couple of days I was reading this FFN was messing up alot for me and I couldnt log in.
Loved it. Normally I would review more than one chapter but the whole couple of days I was reading this FFN was messing up alot for me and I couldnt log in.
4/23 c10 Guest
This story seems like a bit of a fan girl fantasy. From the excessive Dumbledore bashing, to Harry and Draco being best friends, and the tired old fangirl argument to justify dark! Harry going into gryffindor. "but it's actually slytherin to be sorted into gryffindor!"
No. It isn't. It's gryffindor to be sorted into gryffindor. And canon Draco going into gryffindor is ridiculous. I don't believe the hat would be so easily duped by a pair of eleven year olds.
Along with the idea that pureblood fanatics like Draco only object to muggleborns because they lack knowledge, and will get along fine with them if they are sufficiently humble. And the Stephanie Meyer-esque way of presenting everyone who opposes Harry as bumbling fool, while everyone who is on his side is far superior to the rest of the population.
This story seems like a bit of a fan girl fantasy. From the excessive Dumbledore bashing, to Harry and Draco being best friends, and the tired old fangirl argument to justify dark! Harry going into gryffindor. "but it's actually slytherin to be sorted into gryffindor!"
No. It isn't. It's gryffindor to be sorted into gryffindor. And canon Draco going into gryffindor is ridiculous. I don't believe the hat would be so easily duped by a pair of eleven year olds.
Along with the idea that pureblood fanatics like Draco only object to muggleborns because they lack knowledge, and will get along fine with them if they are sufficiently humble. And the Stephanie Meyer-esque way of presenting everyone who opposes Harry as bumbling fool, while everyone who is on his side is far superior to the rest of the population.
4/23 c14 A W
You do realize that wizards live for well over a 100 years, death at 78 would be like death at 30 for muggles. I'm pretty sure that Dumbles is around 170 in the books.
You do realize that wizards live for well over a 100 years, death at 78 would be like death at 30 for muggles. I'm pretty sure that Dumbles is around 170 in the books.
4/22 c69
21twistyguru
Now that's scary, especially if Hogwarts got the 'evil power hungry' parts of Tom.
21twistyguruNow that's scary, especially if Hogwarts got the 'evil power hungry' parts of Tom.
4/22 c69 schnookums
Just took the last few days to reread this fic. Very curious what happened with Skeeter and how Dumbles will react to his article not being printed...so far anyways. Hopefully Sirius will get out of his funk. Now what will Harry do about the school? I don't think even basilisk venom will do anything for this. Can't wait to see what comes next and if things will ever get better for this family.
Just took the last few days to reread this fic. Very curious what happened with Skeeter and how Dumbles will react to his article not being printed...so far anyways. Hopefully Sirius will get out of his funk. Now what will Harry do about the school? I don't think even basilisk venom will do anything for this. Can't wait to see what comes next and if things will ever get better for this family.
4/22 c5 Sjstaudt
Okay... But as the sole surviving member of the Potter family, since he is now a Black and his parents have changed can he not inherit from the Potters?
Okay... But as the sole surviving member of the Potter family, since he is now a Black and his parents have changed can he not inherit from the Potters?
4/21 c69
27Super-Saiyan-3-Vegeta
two things really, first glad you're continuing the story. and 2nd this whole Hogwarts is a Horcrux thing just feels out of place for the rest of the story.
27Super-Saiyan-3-Vegetatwo things really, first glad you're continuing the story. and 2nd this whole Hogwarts is a Horcrux thing just feels out of place for the rest of the story.
4/21 c69
1Celexs Draconia
Well that was certainly a twist I did not see coming. I look forward to seeing how this is going to continue.
Cel
1Celexs DraconiaWell that was certainly a twist I did not see coming. I look forward to seeing how this is going to continue.
Cel
4/20 c69 dragonlordrb
Your story has taken the great jump over the shark, and fell on your bum! There is no way that Hogwarts would have let a horcrux assume any control over Itsself especially one with only 1/8 of a soul at the most! And anyway, wouldn't a 3/4 pure Gryphindor take presidance over a 1/2 blood-1/8 soul Slytherin?
Your story has taken the great jump over the shark, and fell on your bum! There is no way that Hogwarts would have let a horcrux assume any control over Itsself especially one with only 1/8 of a soul at the most! And anyway, wouldn't a 3/4 pure Gryphindor take presidance over a 1/2 blood-1/8 soul Slytherin?
4/20 c69 Separ
Oh, bold play of Tommy it seems. So the question is, is Hogwarts now a Horcrux keeping Tommy alive, or has it been consumed and Tommy didn't really get anything?
Great story so far, looking forward to the next chapter!
Oh, bold play of Tommy it seems. So the question is, is Hogwarts now a Horcrux keeping Tommy alive, or has it been consumed and Tommy didn't really get anything?
Great story so far, looking forward to the next chapter!
4/19 c69
2AutolycusinExile
I can't tell you how happy I am that you are still continuing this piece. It is by far one of the best I have ever read, and the characterization here is phenomonal. I'm very excited to see how the story progresses.
Best of luck to you in your life and in your writing. Your devotion to this story is very much appreciated!
2AutolycusinExileI can't tell you how happy I am that you are still continuing this piece. It is by far one of the best I have ever read, and the characterization here is phenomonal. I'm very excited to see how the story progresses.
Best of luck to you in your life and in your writing. Your devotion to this story is very much appreciated!
