for Do Not Cry2/11 c1 
12luvtheheaven
Ah that was... depressing as hell... and QUITE good. Really realistic and easy to get into that mindset actually. I cannot imagine finding even a stranger like that. And unfortunately this kind of thing does happen - boys like Karofsky, the more "manly" kind of boy especially, would be the most likely to choose a gun as a suicide method.
12luvtheheavenAh that was... depressing as hell... and QUITE good. Really realistic and easy to get into that mindset actually. I cannot imagine finding even a stranger like that. And unfortunately this kind of thing does happen - boys like Karofsky, the more "manly" kind of boy especially, would be the most likely to choose a gun as a suicide method.
12/15/2010 c1 m0rem0k
nicely written, ashamed as i am to say it, K's apparent suicide didn't resonate with me at all... essentially he's a character so thoroughly loathsome that i had no problem with it...
nicely written, ashamed as i am to say it, K's apparent suicide didn't resonate with me at all... essentially he's a character so thoroughly loathsome that i had no problem with it...
12/1/2010 c1 13summer-flower-girl
Wow I really admire you for succeeding in writing a post-suicide fic without over doing the angst, but still keeping it realistic! Thanks for writting this!
13summer-flower-girlWow I really admire you for succeeding in writing a post-suicide fic without over doing the angst, but still keeping it realistic! Thanks for writting this!
11/30/2010 c1 waterlily85
I think this is really great. I would take out the line mentioning that he died though. It would make it more powerful to not find out until the end that he had died and not simply moved out or had been kicked out.
I think this is really great. I would take out the line mentioning that he died though. It would make it more powerful to not find out until the end that he had died and not simply moved out or had been kicked out.