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2/25/2011 c3 4Preddi
once again excellent job
2/25/2011 c11 51Gatekat
Spot on for canon for both of them.
2/25/2011 c10 Gatekat
Good Wrecker. Good Autobot. Going out drawing blood.
2/25/2011 c9 Gatekat
Such an appropriate final response.
2/25/2011 c8 Gatekat
*howling* Oh man, those two are great crack together. Truly loved Springer's response.
2/25/2011 c2 4Preddi
Unexpected surprise i was like "What the heck?" completly stunned intreasting pairing lol xD
12/5/2010 c1 4Eerie Iri
I really liked this and it makes me wonder just which autobot is liked by which combaticon.
12/3/2010 c1 4Preddi
interesting very interesting! ilike it
12/3/2010 c1 6staringsideways
Must be odd as a gestalt, only ever coming too on a battlefield, never getting any kind of downtime. I wonder if the combined memories make up for that? Anywho - cracking piece :)
12/3/2010 c1 2mooncrossed
Bruticus rises again! It's interesting how you portray old Brutie with high intelligence, but a lot of distractions in the form of multiple pursonalities. Most writers don't do that, automatically assuming that slow reaction time means low IQ. This is a good one-shot. Very nice.
12/3/2010 c1 30Vivienne Grainger
My usual attitude toward dialogue-free fiction is suspicion. Deep, dark suspicion. It's easy to do, safely removed from the reader's (and the writer's) experience.

Here, however, it was necessary, needful even. Bruticus has no one to talk to, no need for interaction with any other, beyond what the battlefield will shortly provide him. This was a wonderful little snapshot into process itself, in the processor of someone who, for all intents and purposes, is a fully adult new-sparked mech. Thought-provoking!

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