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7The German City
I believe that when Sora "permanently" went Anti-Form, Roxas was released from within Sora, and witnessed Riku kill Sora, so now he seeks vengeance against him. You should probably write about that.
7The German CityI believe that when Sora "permanently" went Anti-Form, Roxas was released from within Sora, and witnessed Riku kill Sora, so now he seeks vengeance against him. You should probably write about that.
7/7/2012 c1 Guest
I luved dis story
I luved dis story
5/27/2012 c1 7SqueeFreak
This is amazing! Poor Sora, abandoned by his friends to face the darkness alone! TT But I do have to agree that the Anti-Sora is really kickass. XD
7SqueeFreakThis is amazing! Poor Sora, abandoned by his friends to face the darkness alone! TT But I do have to agree that the Anti-Sora is really kickass. XD
7/30/2011 c1 thedoggydog2
Can you please make a twoshot out of this?
Pretty please with sugar on top!
Can you please make a twoshot out of this?
Pretty please with sugar on top!
5/22/2011 c1 Darkfria09
You know I wasn't going to read this story cause I saw that it was rated T and I normally don't read anything under M but it was the title that drawed me in and I'm glad that I read it. It was really good and I haven't read a story this sad in a while but still amazing. Also I liked how you made the killings realistic but not too gory (even though I like gory stories). Overall it was an awesome story keep up the good work!
You know I wasn't going to read this story cause I saw that it was rated T and I normally don't read anything under M but it was the title that drawed me in and I'm glad that I read it. It was really good and I haven't read a story this sad in a while but still amazing. Also I liked how you made the killings realistic but not too gory (even though I like gory stories). Overall it was an awesome story keep up the good work!
4/7/2011 c1 1Karrnras
I like your story, anti-sora. One thing you should have done is make Sora after he remebers the last thing he says to Riku is "This is your falt, if you hadnt left me I wouldnt have become this" or something like that. Make Riku have to feal gilt that it was Him that made Sora what he became. it would have been better, so I think anyway. But it's a good story anyway. I like the gor, very nice.
1KarrnrasI like your story, anti-sora. One thing you should have done is make Sora after he remebers the last thing he says to Riku is "This is your falt, if you hadnt left me I wouldnt have become this" or something like that. Make Riku have to feal gilt that it was Him that made Sora what he became. it would have been better, so I think anyway. But it's a good story anyway. I like the gor, very nice.
2/5/2011 c1 8Gamer551
That was so sad... ): I've always thought anti sora was cool, but you made him awesome :)... XD I think Riku just left sora to have kairi for himself though... O.o
ANY WHO... I was kinda hoping sora would like, kill kairi and THEN remember who he was, but the ending was still awesome - if you haven't realized, I'm not a Kairi fan... Hate her guts actually :|.. But that's not important :) - Your an amazing writer.. KEEP IT UP! (DONT CHA LOVE MY SMILIES! 8-D)
8Gamer551That was so sad... ): I've always thought anti sora was cool, but you made him awesome :)... XD I think Riku just left sora to have kairi for himself though... O.o
ANY WHO... I was kinda hoping sora would like, kill kairi and THEN remember who he was, but the ending was still awesome - if you haven't realized, I'm not a Kairi fan... Hate her guts actually :|.. But that's not important :) - Your an amazing writer.. KEEP IT UP! (DONT CHA LOVE MY SMILIES! 8-D)
1/30/2011 c1 6XTAIGAX
Wow, I love this! I like how it's really realistic (and that not a cover up for the fact I like gruesome things. Maybe...) and I like your writing style. It's really descrptive!
6XTAIGAXWow, I love this! I like how it's really realistic (and that not a cover up for the fact I like gruesome things. Maybe...) and I like your writing style. It's really descrptive!
1/29/2011 c1 Artseke
I love anti-form as well. This was good (without being graphic, thank goodness!) and you didn't lose sight of Sora's character. He would be optimistic in any situation (Trying to think of his friends,) And although I doubt Riku and Kairi would leave him for anything, that's what Fanfiction's for!
I really liked it. The end was kind of tart, but that's a one-shot for you!
Thanks for the entertaining read!
I love anti-form as well. This was good (without being graphic, thank goodness!) and you didn't lose sight of Sora's character. He would be optimistic in any situation (Trying to think of his friends,) And although I doubt Riku and Kairi would leave him for anything, that's what Fanfiction's for!
I really liked it. The end was kind of tart, but that's a one-shot for you!
Thanks for the entertaining read!
12/4/2010 c1 KyuubiShinigami-chan
I love anti - Sora too, but i think it was to sad that he died at the end, i was hoping for kairi to save him or something D: I got so depressed i'll have to read a happy story about sora now XD anyway realy well written since it got me depressed =)
I love anti - Sora too, but i think it was to sad that he died at the end, i was hoping for kairi to save him or something D: I got so depressed i'll have to read a happy story about sora now XD anyway realy well written since it got me depressed =)
12/4/2010 c1 5Ghost-Drive
Lol! Somehow... I like the bottom part when you rattle better... XP but yeah, awesome story.
5Ghost-DriveLol! Somehow... I like the bottom part when you rattle better... XP but yeah, awesome story.