for Seas would rise when I give the word2/24 c9 HermioneandMarcus
excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you
excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you
4/16/2012 c9
6Darth Lawyer
I love this! Eleanor is such a cool, complex character, and she and Eustache have amazing chemistry.
6Darth LawyerI love this! Eleanor is such a cool, complex character, and she and Eustache have amazing chemistry.
8/2/2011 c9
3Jnstar86
aww eustace is totally falling for eleanor of aquitaine, can't believe you put her here, am looking forward how will she and henry fare and if there is going to be, did I see a hint of it here, of love between eustace and eleanor?
you two write a good tale, I am hooked! there has not been an update in a while I want to see what happens next.
3Jnstar86aww eustace is totally falling for eleanor of aquitaine, can't believe you put her here, am looking forward how will she and henry fare and if there is going to be, did I see a hint of it here, of love between eustace and eleanor?
you two write a good tale, I am hooked! there has not been an update in a while I want to see what happens next.
6/15/2011 c9
2Crumberries
Just to tell you i really love your story even if i'm not convince by the eleonore/eustace
but we'll see;) i hope charles will leae and leace his wife ( i never liked her) and go back to the sister
and just if you want i'm french and i notice that you have some " trouble" with french conversation
one of them had no sense so if you want you could tell what you want to say and i'll translat it for you
it os only a suggestion:)
hope to read you soon
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2CrumberriesJust to tell you i really love your story even if i'm not convince by the eleonore/eustace
but we'll see;) i hope charles will leae and leace his wife ( i never liked her) and go back to the sister
and just if you want i'm french and i notice that you have some " trouble" with french conversation
one of them had no sense so if you want you could tell what you want to say and i'll translat it for you
it os only a suggestion:)
hope to read you soon
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5/31/2011 c9 Diana Prince
Yeah that was a good chapter sorry for the late review. I hope that she will be able to help Mary. I do wonder how though the princess will accept her new stepmother. Hope to read more soon if possible.
Yeah that was a good chapter sorry for the late review. I hope that she will be able to help Mary. I do wonder how though the princess will accept her new stepmother. Hope to read more soon if possible.
5/14/2011 c9 Kat
First off, I find this incredibly intriguing. I never would have thought to put Eleanor as a possible match for Henry,to me he is such an a**ha! I don't think he knew what to do with himself because lets face it he was not meant to be king, tho I think he has meet his match with Eleanor. We all know he can't do her like he done Anne because she has power all on her own much like KOA.Anyway I can't wait to see where you go with this one.
First off, I find this incredibly intriguing. I never would have thought to put Eleanor as a possible match for Henry,to me he is such an a**ha! I don't think he knew what to do with himself because lets face it he was not meant to be king, tho I think he has meet his match with Eleanor. We all know he can't do her like he done Anne because she has power all on her own much like KOA.Anyway I can't wait to see where you go with this one.
5/6/2011 c1
4Claire Hayasaka
OOH! Lion in the Winter Quote! I loved that movie so much!
First off, I find this incredibly intriguing. I never would have thought to put Eleanor as a possible match for Henry, (Although I always thought she and Anne would have got along well had they met! Both married to stubborn Henry's, haha)
I love Chapuys too! Also, this was a great opening chapter, and I can't wait to read the following chapters! I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed before now, forgive me!
4Claire HayasakaOOH! Lion in the Winter Quote! I loved that movie so much!
First off, I find this incredibly intriguing. I never would have thought to put Eleanor as a possible match for Henry, (Although I always thought she and Anne would have got along well had they met! Both married to stubborn Henry's, haha)
I love Chapuys too! Also, this was a great opening chapter, and I can't wait to read the following chapters! I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed before now, forgive me!
2/18/2011 c9 unnamed visitor
I understand you have a busy life and school as I said before always needs to come first. The important thing is that you are your partner where eventually able to spare some time to update. This was one amazing chapter and defiantly worth the wait. As the story goes on I really like Eleanor a lot more. She is taking a big risk in her efforts to help Princess Mary and I admire her for that. As for Henry’s obsession with a male heir I’ve said it before and I will say it again PRETTY PLEASE for Eleanor’s sake and England’s let her get pregnant soon and let the baby be a strong healthy son.
Of course my favorite part in this whole chapter was the official meeting between Eleanor and Eustace Chapuys. I have been waiting forever and ever for that moment to come and I think you did a great job writing it. I’m glad that Eustace doesn’t hold Eleanor’s lie against her and understands why she did it. I think Princess of Peace is a perfect title for the current queen of England. I also think it’s really sweet how much of a gentlemen Eustace has been towards and Eleanor and her sister especially when he offered them his coat. After listen to the queen’s true intentions towards Mary I really liked how he declared himself to be Eleanor’s servant. I have feeling that this is the start of a beautiful friendship between them.
At the end of this chapter you were asking for some thoughts and suggestions to your story. When it comes to Mary I of course root for my favorite couple Chary as always. If however it is not going to work out in this story for some reason Mary should still get the happy ending she deserves. Maybe you could try something different and hook Mary up with Don Luis, Edward Seymour, Lady Margaret Pole’s Grandson Henry or to make it really interesting set her up with Henry Fitzroy. I also read somewhere that Philip of Spain is going to make an appearance in this story. When it comes to paring him up with someone I am a number 1 supporter of the couple Philip of Spain/Princess Elizabeth.
Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to your next update.
I understand you have a busy life and school as I said before always needs to come first. The important thing is that you are your partner where eventually able to spare some time to update. This was one amazing chapter and defiantly worth the wait. As the story goes on I really like Eleanor a lot more. She is taking a big risk in her efforts to help Princess Mary and I admire her for that. As for Henry’s obsession with a male heir I’ve said it before and I will say it again PRETTY PLEASE for Eleanor’s sake and England’s let her get pregnant soon and let the baby be a strong healthy son.
Of course my favorite part in this whole chapter was the official meeting between Eleanor and Eustace Chapuys. I have been waiting forever and ever for that moment to come and I think you did a great job writing it. I’m glad that Eustace doesn’t hold Eleanor’s lie against her and understands why she did it. I think Princess of Peace is a perfect title for the current queen of England. I also think it’s really sweet how much of a gentlemen Eustace has been towards and Eleanor and her sister especially when he offered them his coat. After listen to the queen’s true intentions towards Mary I really liked how he declared himself to be Eleanor’s servant. I have feeling that this is the start of a beautiful friendship between them.
At the end of this chapter you were asking for some thoughts and suggestions to your story. When it comes to Mary I of course root for my favorite couple Chary as always. If however it is not going to work out in this story for some reason Mary should still get the happy ending she deserves. Maybe you could try something different and hook Mary up with Don Luis, Edward Seymour, Lady Margaret Pole’s Grandson Henry or to make it really interesting set her up with Henry Fitzroy. I also read somewhere that Philip of Spain is going to make an appearance in this story. When it comes to paring him up with someone I am a number 1 supporter of the couple Philip of Spain/Princess Elizabeth.
Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to your next update.
2/18/2011 c9
18Vain x Life Poetess
hahah Chapuys you finally admit that no one is a match for the indomitable spirit, even more so than Anne Boleyn, Eleanor of Aquitaine, and when he thinks she is beautiful, incredibly beautiful I was thinking oh Eustace cupid has got your heart.
Great chapter you two, and please please update soon!
I am glad Eustace will accept an alliance with EOA and will deliver the letter to Mary, I can only guess it will persuade her as Eustace's words did in the Tudors, and historically Cromwell's threats did, to sign the oath.
18Vain x Life Poetesshahah Chapuys you finally admit that no one is a match for the indomitable spirit, even more so than Anne Boleyn, Eleanor of Aquitaine, and when he thinks she is beautiful, incredibly beautiful I was thinking oh Eustace cupid has got your heart.
Great chapter you two, and please please update soon!
I am glad Eustace will accept an alliance with EOA and will deliver the letter to Mary, I can only guess it will persuade her as Eustace's words did in the Tudors, and historically Cromwell's threats did, to sign the oath.
