for Crossing the Line12/17/2010 c1 
30Lestat's Violinist
Wicked! I have no words other than: "Papa Winchester **in' RULES!"
30Lestat's ViolinistWicked! I have no words other than: "Papa Winchester **in' RULES!"
12/11/2010 c1 5Ellie Clemons
huh? Im a little bit confused... what happened to sammy? Nice writing though! Just a little.. cryptic. haha maybe another chapter? Or make it into a story! I would LOVE that :)
5Ellie Clemonshuh? Im a little bit confused... what happened to sammy? Nice writing though! Just a little.. cryptic. haha maybe another chapter? Or make it into a story! I would LOVE that :)
12/8/2010 c1 doyleshuny
I think everybody has said that if you mess with their kid they'll kill the person. John Winchester is one parent that means it. Excellent Job!
I think everybody has said that if you mess with their kid they'll kill the person. John Winchester is one parent that means it. Excellent Job!
12/8/2010 c1 nuncha
I loved the story. Even the author's note was great. "I was just in a dark mood and someone had to pay." The tone of the story came alive. I love the blunt simplicity of the sentences. I just wish you had expanded a bit more. Mostly because I want this to be a full-length story.
I loved the story. Even the author's note was great. "I was just in a dark mood and someone had to pay." The tone of the story came alive. I love the blunt simplicity of the sentences. I just wish you had expanded a bit more. Mostly because I want this to be a full-length story.
12/8/2010 c1 44T.L. Arens
I felt John's anger-both supressed and unbridled. I'll bet at the outstart, John was a good and loving father toward his sons but as he delved deeper and deeper into the world of the supernatural, he lost those parts of himself that would have accepted Sam moreso; understood him. Mary would have been mortified.
Thank you for writing
44T.L. ArensI felt John's anger-both supressed and unbridled. I'll bet at the outstart, John was a good and loving father toward his sons but as he delved deeper and deeper into the world of the supernatural, he lost those parts of himself that would have accepted Sam moreso; understood him. Mary would have been mortified.
Thank you for writing
12/7/2010 c1 calcium77
That definitely was dark. I hate to imagine what was done to Sam for John to kill someone. I can only think of one thing. Poor Sam
Thanks. I always am excited if you write something new. Even short it is a treat.
Kat
That definitely was dark. I hate to imagine what was done to Sam for John to kill someone. I can only think of one thing. Poor Sam
Thanks. I always am excited if you write something new. Even short it is a treat.
Kat
12/7/2010 c1 Red Hardy
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Loved, loved, LOVED this story! The short, powerful sentences make a huge impact! A perfect example of less is more. Not many people can master this style of writing but you are one of the best at it. Some favorite lines...
"His little boy flinched away from him when he asked what was wrong; almost disappearing into the plaid of his older brother's shirt."
"His fourteen-year looked at him, barely concealed fear warring with devastating anger; demanding that he make it better."
"John Winchester killed his first man today and he'll do it again tomorrow if he has to."
Damn straight! Just because this guy wasn't 'supernatural' doesn't mean he wasn't a monster. I love the way you write John. He may not win Father of the Year but you know he LOVES his boys!
Alaina
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Loved, loved, LOVED this story! The short, powerful sentences make a huge impact! A perfect example of less is more. Not many people can master this style of writing but you are one of the best at it. Some favorite lines...
"His little boy flinched away from him when he asked what was wrong; almost disappearing into the plaid of his older brother's shirt."
"His fourteen-year looked at him, barely concealed fear warring with devastating anger; demanding that he make it better."
"John Winchester killed his first man today and he'll do it again tomorrow if he has to."
Damn straight! Just because this guy wasn't 'supernatural' doesn't mean he wasn't a monster. I love the way you write John. He may not win Father of the Year but you know he LOVES his boys!
Alaina
12/7/2010 c1 twomoms
That's the John I love. He wasn't perfect. Who is. But he loved and protected those boys. Thanks girl!
That's the John I love. He wasn't perfect. Who is. But he loved and protected those boys. Thanks girl!