for Please, save him12/20/2011 c7 SSJSaphira
Every few weeks I would remember this fic. And how epic it is. I never reviewed before for I was a ... bit shy.. Still am a bit but I just had to review as every other week I remeber this story and it makes me want to read it again, and again, and again, and again. I'm still a bit sad that it hasn't been updated for it is at a really good spot, Suspenseful in my case. I truely can't wait for a new chapter. Please keep it up! I'm about to go crazy here.
Every few weeks I would remember this fic. And how epic it is. I never reviewed before for I was a ... bit shy.. Still am a bit but I just had to review as every other week I remeber this story and it makes me want to read it again, and again, and again, and again. I'm still a bit sad that it hasn't been updated for it is at a really good spot, Suspenseful in my case. I truely can't wait for a new chapter. Please keep it up! I'm about to go crazy here.
10/31/2011 c7 Rai Rai Blue
Hell i know school started and everything, but please make another chapter. I want to see how this all turns out! AAAAAAAAHHHHHH! And what happened to Allen to make him retreat like that? Poor Allen. Oh and can I make a suggestion? please kill that bastard somehow. Hell I hate him so much that I don't even want to type his name! Please another update soon.
Hell i know school started and everything, but please make another chapter. I want to see how this all turns out! AAAAAAAAHHHHHH! And what happened to Allen to make him retreat like that? Poor Allen. Oh and can I make a suggestion? please kill that bastard somehow. Hell I hate him so much that I don't even want to type his name! Please another update soon.
10/18/2011 c7 MissRenaChan
I just can't wait for the new chapter.. Really, it is a brilliant fanfic and your writing is really good!
I just can't wait for the new chapter.. Really, it is a brilliant fanfic and your writing is really good!
10/9/2011 c7 BlueStar1937
Nooo! Allen they do care about you and miss you so much! Don't leave! Please update this story because I want Allen to come back! :( So please! I really love this story because it is awesome
Nooo! Allen they do care about you and miss you so much! Don't leave! Please update this story because I want Allen to come back! :( So please! I really love this story because it is awesome
9/29/2011 c7 Sayuki09
Really good. I mean really reeeeeally good like, update soon really really soon or I'll reach through the computer screen and slap you good. :D
Really good. I mean really reeeeeally good like, update soon really really soon or I'll reach through the computer screen and slap you good. :D
9/1/2011 c7 
30KingRabbit
This is heartbreaking. And sad. And devastating. And awesome. And amazing. And so many other things that make me eager to find out what happens next. This story is so captivating... Thank you for writing and posting it! Can't wait for the next chapter... Please tell me Allen eventually resurfaces? It's so hard to think about him being withdrawn like that...
30KingRabbitThis is heartbreaking. And sad. And devastating. And awesome. And amazing. And so many other things that make me eager to find out what happens next. This story is so captivating... Thank you for writing and posting it! Can't wait for the next chapter... Please tell me Allen eventually resurfaces? It's so hard to think about him being withdrawn like that...
8/27/2011 c7 3Adele365
Huh. This I pretty interesting, and a variant i havent seen before. I'd really like to read more!
3Adele365Huh. This I pretty interesting, and a variant i havent seen before. I'd really like to read more!
8/12/2011 c7 37Rin0rourke
I was worried at first, that we would get an immediate reaction from Allen, but I can see you're handling his trauma delicately. I love slow paced development and high stakes action, but so few writers try for it, I hope you plan on taking a long time to reveal Neah and Allen to the others, it would be very boring otherwise.
-Rin
37Rin0rourkeI was worried at first, that we would get an immediate reaction from Allen, but I can see you're handling his trauma delicately. I love slow paced development and high stakes action, but so few writers try for it, I hope you plan on taking a long time to reveal Neah and Allen to the others, it would be very boring otherwise.
-Rin