for Whom History Won't Remember4/29 c69 
1Madkatt
I love the OC's in this Fic. Liam is brilliant and when i started reading it I wasn't expecting the other characters that came in to it to be just as brilliant. Poor Liam has gone through so much! The character development of all the characters in this Fic was really well done and Liam's development as he got older wasn't done to quickly or slowly. You could really see how he became the person he did and how it affects his decisions. I'm Sorry this Fic is over, I'll just have to go read the next one :)
1MadkattI love the OC's in this Fic. Liam is brilliant and when i started reading it I wasn't expecting the other characters that came in to it to be just as brilliant. Poor Liam has gone through so much! The character development of all the characters in this Fic was really well done and Liam's development as he got older wasn't done to quickly or slowly. You could really see how he became the person he did and how it affects his decisions. I'm Sorry this Fic is over, I'll just have to go read the next one :)
4/26 c10 Guest
This is honestly the best fanfiction/series I have ever read. You are probably my favorite fan fiction author! Keep up the amazing work!
This is honestly the best fanfiction/series I have ever read. You are probably my favorite fan fiction author! Keep up the amazing work!
4/23 c69 Lunar191
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA HAHA haha ha
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That will be priceless.
But wait. Does this mean he's effectively replacing George?! Awww does that mean we won't get any brass jokes?! XD Oh, but I can't wait to read this in Motives... Arthur's going to go crazy. XD
I can't believe I've finally finished this. :( I wish there was more... even though I know it'll just continue in Motives. I really enjoyed all these other perspectives. It was incredibly wonderful and I've completely fallen in love with so many of your OCs now. I really can't wait to see what they do in the future. Hehehe oh Liam...
Thank you so much for writing this! :)
Oh. I almost forgot...
Merlin's become a Trusted Retainer?! Wow. Now I'm really curious as to why.
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA HAHA haha ha
ohmygod
That will be priceless.
But wait. Does this mean he's effectively replacing George?! Awww does that mean we won't get any brass jokes?! XD Oh, but I can't wait to read this in Motives... Arthur's going to go crazy. XD
I can't believe I've finally finished this. :( I wish there was more... even though I know it'll just continue in Motives. I really enjoyed all these other perspectives. It was incredibly wonderful and I've completely fallen in love with so many of your OCs now. I really can't wait to see what they do in the future. Hehehe oh Liam...
Thank you so much for writing this! :)
Oh. I almost forgot...
Merlin's become a Trusted Retainer?! Wow. Now I'm really curious as to why.
4/23 c68 Lunar191
He's been pushed to the fringes of the Conspiracy… and yet right into the center next to Merlin and Arthur. HOLY CRAP I'M SO EXCITED. AND I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THEY MEET FURREAL. :D
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He's been pushed to the fringes of the Conspiracy… and yet right into the center next to Merlin and Arthur. HOLY CRAP I'M SO EXCITED. AND I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THEY MEET FURREAL. :D
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4/23 c67 Lunar191
Awww but I'm so excited for him! I'm really hoping his confidence will grow a lot in Camelot. It's going to have to at least a little if he's going to be dealing with the force that is Merlin and Arthur. haha
Maybe then he'd be able to face Tarven in the future. It's a shame that they were never able to become friends because of everything they went through. Not that I much hope for friendship, but perhaps more open respect.
Awww but I'm so excited for him! I'm really hoping his confidence will grow a lot in Camelot. It's going to have to at least a little if he's going to be dealing with the force that is Merlin and Arthur. haha
Maybe then he'd be able to face Tarven in the future. It's a shame that they were never able to become friends because of everything they went through. Not that I much hope for friendship, but perhaps more open respect.
4/23 c66 Lunar191
I'm really going to miss Hargren. He's definitely one of my favorite OCs.
And then for him to be buried next to Liam's family. D': Though I did laugh a little that the Pendragons are completely surrounded by magic supporters. Oh if only Uther knew.
But my respect for Tarven is growing. Especially after he told off Uther like that. For Hargren to die on a fool's errand, even more so because Morgana's currently happily with her sister, is painful. I don't imagine it'll help if those in Ulwin ever discover that.
Merlin Lost goes really well with this chapter on repeat...
I think I'm starting to see where Arthur will get his idea for the Knights of the Round Table from. :)
I'm really going to miss Hargren. He's definitely one of my favorite OCs.
And then for him to be buried next to Liam's family. D': Though I did laugh a little that the Pendragons are completely surrounded by magic supporters. Oh if only Uther knew.
But my respect for Tarven is growing. Especially after he told off Uther like that. For Hargren to die on a fool's errand, even more so because Morgana's currently happily with her sister, is painful. I don't imagine it'll help if those in Ulwin ever discover that.
Merlin Lost goes really well with this chapter on repeat...
I think I'm starting to see where Arthur will get his idea for the Knights of the Round Table from. :)
4/23 c65 Lunar191
I FUDGING KNEW IT!
O_O Wait. I wonder if he was ever one of the candidates for the Once and Future King… if I remember correctly there were 2 others besides Arthur who were about 9? years his senior.
Okay, that news kind of stopped the flow of tears streaming down my face at the complete and utter EXCITEMENT of that FINALLY being revealed. YES! And the King *was* his uncle! I thought as much, but I was a little surprised to know he helped in the war against magic so I was starting to doubt my suspicions …
And then it got depressing again. And then Tarven just had to break down and… I'm currently sobbing. That was… very clever writing him like that at the end. It also helped ease some doubts about whether Tarven should take up the role of leading the Conspiracy. Part of me still wanted to judge him for his actions as a child, and I hadn't seen enough of his current self to wipe away those preconceptions. Seeing something behind the mask helps.
I FUDGING KNEW IT!
O_O Wait. I wonder if he was ever one of the candidates for the Once and Future King… if I remember correctly there were 2 others besides Arthur who were about 9? years his senior.
Okay, that news kind of stopped the flow of tears streaming down my face at the complete and utter EXCITEMENT of that FINALLY being revealed. YES! And the King *was* his uncle! I thought as much, but I was a little surprised to know he helped in the war against magic so I was starting to doubt my suspicions …
And then it got depressing again. And then Tarven just had to break down and… I'm currently sobbing. That was… very clever writing him like that at the end. It also helped ease some doubts about whether Tarven should take up the role of leading the Conspiracy. Part of me still wanted to judge him for his actions as a child, and I hadn't seen enough of his current self to wipe away those preconceptions. Seeing something behind the mask helps.
4/23 c64 Lunar191
:( This is going to be really depressing when Hargren dies and Fyren is left with his guilt. I really like him and I really want to learn more about him.
I can't wait until Liam plays a bigger role in the story. Part of me still sees him as a 12 year old kid since he's left out of all the talks involving Emrys and the Once and Future King even though I understand how much he does. But he has definitely grown a lot since then.
:( This is going to be really depressing when Hargren dies and Fyren is left with his guilt. I really like him and I really want to learn more about him.
I can't wait until Liam plays a bigger role in the story. Part of me still sees him as a 12 year old kid since he's left out of all the talks involving Emrys and the Once and Future King even though I understand how much he does. But he has definitely grown a lot since then.
4/22 c63 Lunar191
Hehehehehehe that'll be a schocker when the Conspiracy finds out Merlin already knew and has known for a long time. Actually, pretty much since day 1. Hahahahaha
I liked this conversation between them. It was enlightening.
Lol, and good job covering any plotholes. XD
Hehehehehehe that'll be a schocker when the Conspiracy finds out Merlin already knew and has known for a long time. Actually, pretty much since day 1. Hahahahaha
I liked this conversation between them. It was enlightening.
Lol, and good job covering any plotholes. XD
4/22 c61 Lunar191
Hargren dies?! Well, I guess I'll be finding that out soon enough but... nooooo...
I think this will be good. I've been wondering for a while now how Merlin and Arthur were going to come to trust the Conspiracy because I'd have serious doubts if they just randomly approached me and told me what they'd been sneaking around doing. It just seems like that'd be a little fishy. This way, someone that they actually trust, will be able to back up the fact that the Conspiracy can be trusted and is made up of decent people.
Just wait until they find out Aredian is accused of sorcerery in the end ahahahaha
Hargren dies?! Well, I guess I'll be finding that out soon enough but... nooooo...
I think this will be good. I've been wondering for a while now how Merlin and Arthur were going to come to trust the Conspiracy because I'd have serious doubts if they just randomly approached me and told me what they'd been sneaking around doing. It just seems like that'd be a little fishy. This way, someone that they actually trust, will be able to back up the fact that the Conspiracy can be trusted and is made up of decent people.
Just wait until they find out Aredian is accused of sorcerery in the end ahahahaha
4/22 c59 Lunar191
I'm still slightly convinced Fyren's related to royalty. Or I was until he spoke of putting someone on the throne. I guess I'll just have to wait and see.
Can't wait until Liam goes to Camelot. From what I've gathered that happens in AQoMotives he seems to be happier/more confidant there.
I'm still slightly convinced Fyren's related to royalty. Or I was until he spoke of putting someone on the throne. I guess I'll just have to wait and see.
Can't wait until Liam goes to Camelot. From what I've gathered that happens in AQoMotives he seems to be happier/more confidant there.
4/21 c57 Lunar191
YES! I can't wait to see what Hargren has planned! Especially if it means more information on Fyren. I feel like the next part of this story is about to begin.
While I'm glad they're going to cease their constant supervision of Merlin and Arthur... part of me wishes we had a running commentary from the cast of WHWR on Merlin and Arthur. Particularly when they're being hilariously, adorably self-sacrificing for each other and how stupid they're being about it.
YES! I can't wait to see what Hargren has planned! Especially if it means more information on Fyren. I feel like the next part of this story is about to begin.
While I'm glad they're going to cease their constant supervision of Merlin and Arthur... part of me wishes we had a running commentary from the cast of WHWR on Merlin and Arthur. Particularly when they're being hilariously, adorably self-sacrificing for each other and how stupid they're being about it.
4/21 c56 Lunar191
Awww I bet poor Arthur's just missing Merlin. Actually, I know he is (at least a little). Commenting gets a little confusing when reading both sides of the story at the same time. But this is all just so entertaining not to!
Awww I bet poor Arthur's just missing Merlin. Actually, I know he is (at least a little). Commenting gets a little confusing when reading both sides of the story at the same time. But this is all just so entertaining not to!
4/20 c54 Lunar191
Woah. Well crap. Was not expecting that. Now I have to go catch up in AQoD...
But HA. That's what happens when you doubt Merlin like that. I don't think he really needs all this protecting/interfering your conspiracy network is trying to do.
Woah. Well crap. Was not expecting that. Now I have to go catch up in AQoD...
But HA. That's what happens when you doubt Merlin like that. I don't think he really needs all this protecting/interfering your conspiracy network is trying to do.
4/20 c47 Lunar191
Yessssssss! Your author's note at the end is wonderful news! :D Ican't wait to lmao again.
Hehehehehehehehehehehe I've been waiting for Fyren to meet/see Merlin ever since he was first introduced and, lol, I was not disappointed at all. XD
Yessssssss! Your author's note at the end is wonderful news! :D Ican't wait to lmao again.
Hehehehehehehehehehehe I've been waiting for Fyren to meet/see Merlin ever since he was first introduced and, lol, I was not disappointed at all. XD