for My Beaten Body6/10/2012 c16 Sam
Its been almost two months since who last updated. Please update. When will she whistle.
Its been almost two months since who last updated. Please update. When will she whistle.
4/18/2012 c16 
4PandaJayne
Good story :) There's just one little thing that I keep noticing and that's that you keep writing Mangus instead of Magnus but other than that, keep up the good work! :D
4PandaJayneGood story :) There's just one little thing that I keep noticing and that's that you keep writing Mangus instead of Magnus but other than that, keep up the good work! :D
4/13/2012 c16 6purple halo
WOO! *cheers* Nice chapter!
There were a couple of grammar mistakes here and there though.. :)Remember to capitalise the 'I's all the time! And also every now and then you forgot to capitalise the words at the beginning of each sentence! :D
I'm looking forward to more! :D
6purple haloWOO! *cheers* Nice chapter!
There were a couple of grammar mistakes here and there though.. :)Remember to capitalise the 'I's all the time! And also every now and then you forgot to capitalise the words at the beginning of each sentence! :D
I'm looking forward to more! :D
9/11/2011 c15 Smile 4 the Day
Haha, this story is full of happiness, in a way... A shirtless Jace sounds brilliant! I wonder what will happen next?
Haha, this story is full of happiness, in a way... A shirtless Jace sounds brilliant! I wonder what will happen next?
9/10/2011 c15 Hi
Ok...you are getting better as a writer through each chapter but there still is room to improve. And, I think more description and longer chapters would be good. You've got the right idea, keep going!
Ok...you are getting better as a writer through each chapter but there still is room to improve. And, I think more description and longer chapters would be good. You've got the right idea, keep going!
9/9/2011 c15 Bookninja15
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aww...I like it.
^^
Keep writing awesome,
~Bookninja15 XD
(Too lazy to log in...)
aww...I like it.
^^
Keep writing awesome,
~Bookninja15 XD