for A Hunt In The Pentagon8/13/2012 c2 Cryanth
Hqhahhaha! Love it! You are awesome!
Hqhahhaha! Love it! You are awesome!
5/1/2012 c2 
8ironyheartsap
Absolutely hilarious. I laughed for like five minutes about the MSIA Duct Tours, especially the fact that some newbies were stupid enough to believe him. Then about the fact that Jack called Shawn about that 'cause they made it a standard. Besides, Shawn did raise a good point, what if something happened and the hallways were inaccessible? They probably ad something like that in the series but the only thing I can think of is using the air ducts to spread symbiotic poisoning. Playing Capture the Flag with zats was funny too, but didn't beat the MSIA Duct Tours though (I can't think of anything that would beat that!). The part with: "Who would that be- the president?" "Among other people, yes." I bet Dean was bursting with questions after that. The last sentence was funny too, although I would have added something along the lines "Plus Shawn doubted that an alien planet had pineapple." since Shawn is obsessed with pineapple. Way to go, this fanfic had me laughing more than usual that my family (who are used to my random bouts of laughter and other actions/comments) asked if I was okay and what was so funny. I do hope that you finish and post the fic of Shawn in the SGC. I think he'd be able to scare the Gou'ald away!
8ironyheartsapAbsolutely hilarious. I laughed for like five minutes about the MSIA Duct Tours, especially the fact that some newbies were stupid enough to believe him. Then about the fact that Jack called Shawn about that 'cause they made it a standard. Besides, Shawn did raise a good point, what if something happened and the hallways were inaccessible? They probably ad something like that in the series but the only thing I can think of is using the air ducts to spread symbiotic poisoning. Playing Capture the Flag with zats was funny too, but didn't beat the MSIA Duct Tours though (I can't think of anything that would beat that!). The part with: "Who would that be- the president?" "Among other people, yes." I bet Dean was bursting with questions after that. The last sentence was funny too, although I would have added something along the lines "Plus Shawn doubted that an alien planet had pineapple." since Shawn is obsessed with pineapple. Way to go, this fanfic had me laughing more than usual that my family (who are used to my random bouts of laughter and other actions/comments) asked if I was okay and what was so funny. I do hope that you finish and post the fic of Shawn in the SGC. I think he'd be able to scare the Gou'ald away!
12/18/2011 c2 17FallenHope-Angel
Whooo! Genius! have you thought of having a fic where shawn nd spencer meet? i mean i read a fic where shawn and spencer meet and discuss how the have the same name spencer.
Plus they are winchesters... cousins so they should meet.
17FallenHope-AngelWhooo! Genius! have you thought of having a fic where shawn nd spencer meet? i mean i read a fic where shawn and spencer meet and discuss how the have the same name spencer.
Plus they are winchesters... cousins so they should meet.
9/24/2011 c2 joniskpelare
I love Shawn and hos he sees the world.
I love Shawn and hos he sees the world.
12/19/2010 c2 Leah
Loved this story! Would totally love SG1 and Psych. Maybe a bit longer?
Have a great Christmas!
Loved this story! Would totally love SG1 and Psych. Maybe a bit longer?
Have a great Christmas!