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21/28 c10 Guest
Thank you so much for the update. And I'm sorry to hear about your Nana :) sending worry , take your time . I hope everything turns out okay and that you find your path once again :D
Thank you so much for the update. And I'm sorry to hear about your Nana :) sending worry , take your time . I hope everything turns out okay and that you find your path once again :D
9/17/2012 c9 Randomes
Hurry up with the next chapter please! Its one of the best stories i've read x
Hurry up with the next chapter please! Its one of the best stories i've read x
7/16/2012 c9 Ms.Jennylautner
Is that it ? Please tell me it's not . I love this ! It really good , you portray Tom's character so well it's amazing . Alice is so fiesty yet sweet . Great Job ! One of the best stories I read. Please UPDATE ASAP ! Lol thanks a lot (:
I hope this isn't abandoned :/
Is that it ? Please tell me it's not . I love this ! It really good , you portray Tom's character so well it's amazing . Alice is so fiesty yet sweet . Great Job ! One of the best stories I read. Please UPDATE ASAP ! Lol thanks a lot (:
I hope this isn't abandoned :/
7/16/2012 c6 Guest
Please update ! This story is beyond amazing and I really wish you would continue . Thanks
Please update ! This story is beyond amazing and I really wish you would continue . Thanks
6/17/2012 c9 Kyoki no Megami
haifisch;
i like your story, really i do, but you should correct your spelling errors xD except that - nice story, keep going
hope you continue soon
kyoki no megami
maDAlexa
haifisch;
i like your story, really i do, but you should correct your spelling errors xD except that - nice story, keep going
hope you continue soon
kyoki no megami
maDAlexa
3/10/2012 c9 Yutaki
Wow, really cool FanFiction ^0^
One of my friends actually sent it to me, because my HP OC's Name is also Alice^^ She also lived during Tom Riddles time in Hogwarts, she also is a Slytherin and she also has green eyes xD But she has black hair and didn't even really know Tom. And she has a very different personality^^ But it was really fun to read the whole thing thinking of my own OC ^.~
I actually read all of it twice, because I really liked it (and I wanted one read without thinking of my Alice). Usually I prefer Fanfictions without OCs, because they tend to be Mary Sueish but as I said I love yours ^0^ The way the relationship between Tom and Alice forms is well written. Neither too slow nor too fast. I really can't wait to read more ^0^
Wow, really cool FanFiction ^0^
One of my friends actually sent it to me, because my HP OC's Name is also Alice^^ She also lived during Tom Riddles time in Hogwarts, she also is a Slytherin and she also has green eyes xD But she has black hair and didn't even really know Tom. And she has a very different personality^^ But it was really fun to read the whole thing thinking of my own OC ^.~
I actually read all of it twice, because I really liked it (and I wanted one read without thinking of my Alice). Usually I prefer Fanfictions without OCs, because they tend to be Mary Sueish but as I said I love yours ^0^ The way the relationship between Tom and Alice forms is well written. Neither too slow nor too fast. I really can't wait to read more ^0^
2/20/2012 c9 DamonSalvatorelover
I love this one alice being all badass and kicking ** too please update soon
I love this one alice being all badass and kicking ** too please update soon
2/20/2012 c9 ConfettiRiot
Great chapter.
You have a little problem with tenses at the beginning, I think you switch from present to past sometimes which breaks the flow of the writing and can be a little confusing.
However I like your OCs, they're well thought out and interesting and you have a great range of vocabulary.
I had to skim read through the previous chapter to remember what had happened so perhaps a little recap at the beginning of each chapter or the last few sentences of the previous chapter would be advisable?
Looking forward to more,
*ConfettiRiot
Great chapter.
You have a little problem with tenses at the beginning, I think you switch from present to past sometimes which breaks the flow of the writing and can be a little confusing.
However I like your OCs, they're well thought out and interesting and you have a great range of vocabulary.
I had to skim read through the previous chapter to remember what had happened so perhaps a little recap at the beginning of each chapter or the last few sentences of the previous chapter would be advisable?
Looking forward to more,
*ConfettiRiot
12/25/2011 c5 Account Currently on Hiatus
Ahh, so she thought Tom loved her huh? And Kimberstone, how can he really think that he's all that?
Ahh, so she thought Tom loved her huh? And Kimberstone, how can he really think that he's all that?
12/25/2011 c4 Account Currently on Hiatus
Wow, Tom actually is a "bastard", and I mean that in both senses of the word. This was very dramatic, and I do wonder how they never found the tree.
Wow, Tom actually is a "bastard", and I mean that in both senses of the word. This was very dramatic, and I do wonder how they never found the tree.
12/25/2011 c3 Account Currently on Hiatus
How manipulative of Tom ehh? Poor Alice, pushed to do things by those around her...
How manipulative of Tom ehh? Poor Alice, pushed to do things by those around her...