for Northern Star4/3 c1 TheWalkingGnome
This actually gave me chills. In a good way, obviously. I completely agree with your AN; Lust was my favorite homunculus for the exact reasons you gave.
Thank you for writing this, it was really quite nice.
This actually gave me chills. In a good way, obviously. I completely agree with your AN; Lust was my favorite homunculus for the exact reasons you gave.
Thank you for writing this, it was really quite nice.
1/2/2011 c1 
58Infamousplot
I tried to review this earlier, when i wasn't logged on, but u don't allow anonymous reviews T.T O well..
I thought this was a very good story, as usual. You have a wonderful writing style, especially when it comes to writing for the homunculi. You have a great sense of understanding for them and their lives, without making it seem like "Oh, they're not really bad, they're not that evil, bla bla bla!" I love the way you depicted Lust, and her view on humanity, and how she still longs to be a human again. It's wonderful ^_^
58InfamousplotI tried to review this earlier, when i wasn't logged on, but u don't allow anonymous reviews T.T O well..
I thought this was a very good story, as usual. You have a wonderful writing style, especially when it comes to writing for the homunculi. You have a great sense of understanding for them and their lives, without making it seem like "Oh, they're not really bad, they're not that evil, bla bla bla!" I love the way you depicted Lust, and her view on humanity, and how she still longs to be a human again. It's wonderful ^_^
12/18/2010 c1 15Zchocolatebunniesrulezworld
I just love love love it. The end, how she slowly progresses to realizing she has hope, es hermoso, simply gorgeous. This style isn't all huge-wordy and pretentious, and I think it's more effective in having a more powerful pull on mai heartstrings :)
Oh, thank you for picking through her mind so I can learn more about this wonderful woman and the motives/drive behind her. She's not completely alone, though - she has her baby Gluttony, and her sex-slave (noo, kidding, more like a brother, a la that fic you sent me ^^) Envy, and Scar (?), and Ed/Al started to understand her a little bit toward the end, right? So no matter what lies her twisted "father" fed to her (wait, but Father...doesn't exist...in the 1st anime...right? Then I guess, despite the lies Dante and society fed her) she was still not alone, even if she didn't realize it.
But that doesn't make her story less sad, or her finding hope any less impressive. I can't understand how anybody could be as strong as she was, es muy fantabulous ^^
"But Lust has seen the worst of humanity, and that gives her the ability to see the best." Es posible? o_O
Who *did* try to bring Lust back, again? And who was she before? Goodness, I'm still such a n00b. I feel like I still can't understand half of your stuff until I get a better feel for the characters/their situations...so I shall persevere! 1st anime is goin' DOWN owo
15ZchocolatebunniesrulezworldI just love love love it. The end, how she slowly progresses to realizing she has hope, es hermoso, simply gorgeous. This style isn't all huge-wordy and pretentious, and I think it's more effective in having a more powerful pull on mai heartstrings :)
Oh, thank you for picking through her mind so I can learn more about this wonderful woman and the motives/drive behind her. She's not completely alone, though - she has her baby Gluttony, and her sex-slave (noo, kidding, more like a brother, a la that fic you sent me ^^) Envy, and Scar (?), and Ed/Al started to understand her a little bit toward the end, right? So no matter what lies her twisted "father" fed to her (wait, but Father...doesn't exist...in the 1st anime...right? Then I guess, despite the lies Dante and society fed her) she was still not alone, even if she didn't realize it.
But that doesn't make her story less sad, or her finding hope any less impressive. I can't understand how anybody could be as strong as she was, es muy fantabulous ^^
"But Lust has seen the worst of humanity, and that gives her the ability to see the best." Es posible? o_O
Who *did* try to bring Lust back, again? And who was she before? Goodness, I'm still such a n00b. I feel like I still can't understand half of your stuff until I get a better feel for the characters/their situations...so I shall persevere! 1st anime is goin' DOWN owo
12/14/2010 c1 4Escaping Yesterday
I normally read tragedy, but I love this story. It's very well written.
4Escaping YesterdayI normally read tragedy, but I love this story. It's very well written.