for My Life With The Varia
21/13/2011 c3 khrciaossu
kekeke! i love it when a story updates the same day i start reading it!
love this chapter!... can't wait for chapter 4!
kekeke! i love it when a story updates the same day i start reading it!
love this chapter!... can't wait for chapter 4!
1/13/2011 c2 khrciaossu
oh! hahaha! I think squalo piss/shit his pants! I cant wait to see what happens next! I love Bel/OC stories~
i dont know why but I'm practicaly giddy with antisipation for the next chapter!
So in light of what i just typed...
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! UPDATE SOON!
oh! hahaha! I think squalo piss/shit his pants! I cant wait to see what happens next! I love Bel/OC stories~
i dont know why but I'm practicaly giddy with antisipation for the next chapter!
So in light of what i just typed...
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! UPDATE SOON!
1/12/2011 c2 platinum heart-goddess
This is great, please update. :P I LUUUUUV this storry gawd cplz update soon :P
This is great, please update. :P I LUUUUUV this storry gawd cplz update soon :P
12/25/2010 c2 sarahnyaa
Yay! Another chapter! I think the story is going along nicely, even if there is only two chapters. Btw, how old is everyone in the story? Hope you update soon and Merry Christmas!
~sarahnyaa
Yay! Another chapter! I think the story is going along nicely, even if there is only two chapters. Btw, how old is everyone in the story? Hope you update soon and Merry Christmas!
~sarahnyaa
12/15/2010 c1 PockyChan
Pretty good way to start a story! Your writing is good, except for a few spelling errors. And if you want to express a thought you should put it in italics or some other type of indicator to specify. Hope you update soon. :)
Pretty good way to start a story! Your writing is good, except for a few spelling errors. And if you want to express a thought you should put it in italics or some other type of indicator to specify. Hope you update soon. :)
12/15/2010 c1 sarahnyaa
Nice job! Not totally cliche, which is good. I hope you keep writing. You'll have an even nicer writing style if you keep it up! Hope to see an update soon!
Sarahnyaa
Nice job! Not totally cliche, which is good. I hope you keep writing. You'll have an even nicer writing style if you keep it up! Hope to see an update soon!
Sarahnyaa