for Sweet Life of Mine12/24/2012 c5 NBB
U r evil for making me cry, but an amazing author for the same reason.
Nicely done!
Xxx Nikki
U r evil for making me cry, but an amazing author for the same reason.
Nicely done!
Xxx Nikki
12/18/2012 c5 Silver-Knightmare
This has been a very riveting series to read. I haven't ever expierenced this level of emotional attachment to a fan fiction before. Halfway through the epilogue i was sobbing heartbrokenly with Derek. You have done an amazing job and I look forward to more of your stories.
This has been a very riveting series to read. I haven't ever expierenced this level of emotional attachment to a fan fiction before. Halfway through the epilogue i was sobbing heartbrokenly with Derek. You have done an amazing job and I look forward to more of your stories.
10/23/2012 c5 Syryane
That's a wonderfull story, but now I can't stop crying.
That's a wonderfull story, but now I can't stop crying.
10/9/2012 c5 
35smoshy.fever1
Pouring my eyes out. Spencer... :''''''((((((( the fact that they all woke up at the same time and found him... I started crying right then. This was amazing. I actually cried, and people refer to me as am emotionless rock
35smoshy.fever1Pouring my eyes out. Spencer... :''''''((((((( the fact that they all woke up at the same time and found him... I started crying right then. This was amazing. I actually cried, and people refer to me as am emotionless rock
6/21/2012 c5 sugarskull85
Just read all three parts in one sitting. I couldn't stop.
I think you need a warning that say "must be near someone to hug after" it was such a sad ending. Its taken me a while to recover.
Just read all three parts in one sitting. I couldn't stop.
I think you need a warning that say "must be near someone to hug after" it was such a sad ending. Its taken me a while to recover.
6/14/2012 c5 PurpleBox
I can't stop crying while I read the last chapter but congratulation for finishing the trilogy. It was well written and the emotion carry through the whole story smoothly. I don't normally read sad ending story but this one is just too good to pass. Thank you for delivering such a beautiful story.
I can't stop crying while I read the last chapter but congratulation for finishing the trilogy. It was well written and the emotion carry through the whole story smoothly. I don't normally read sad ending story but this one is just too good to pass. Thank you for delivering such a beautiful story.
6/8/2012 c5 10keiLuvsme
I can proudly say congratulation to you for finished this trilogy. I've been a silent reader but a review is worth it. I cried to every part since from the first story until this one. Your story is just awesome to sad it had to end with a character death but I think its alright because the whole story revovles on it. Nice plot and very inviting summaries for people to read the story further. Good Job with this story. I hope to read more of your stories :))
10keiLuvsmeI can proudly say congratulation to you for finished this trilogy. I've been a silent reader but a review is worth it. I cried to every part since from the first story until this one. Your story is just awesome to sad it had to end with a character death but I think its alright because the whole story revovles on it. Nice plot and very inviting summaries for people to read the story further. Good Job with this story. I hope to read more of your stories :))
6/7/2012 c5 LaRieNGuBleR
It's a pretty good story, even though sad ending (wiping the tear T_T)
I wanna say this again "I'm glad I found this trilogy" :)
It's a pretty good story, even though sad ending (wiping the tear T_T)
I wanna say this again "I'm glad I found this trilogy" :)
5/22/2012 c5 2pinkygirl123
This chapter is so sad, good but sad. The whole triolgy story is amazing plots including.
With in years I've hardly ever cried at anything in my life stil find it hard at sad stuff sometimes but once spencer died I cried, and that's very rare to happen.
Well done on creating a amazing story. xx :)
2pinkygirl123This chapter is so sad, good but sad. The whole triolgy story is amazing plots including.
With in years I've hardly ever cried at anything in my life stil find it hard at sad stuff sometimes but once spencer died I cried, and that's very rare to happen.
Well done on creating a amazing story. xx :)
5/15/2012 c5 11RideEmLikeACowboyJazzy
Spencer swallowed again, feeling ready to throw up, before he managed to squeeze the words out. "I… I know where the twins are, but… I'll have to go there alone, or Kenneth won't listen." He grit his teeth to hold vomit down. "There's… something I need to show him."
that isn't a good idea...not sure why Derek would agree with that. He most likely has stage 4 cancer...and going alone to see a heartless bastard. He is too weak and he probably cant even drive :( He should have taken a weapon:(
I don't like that Spencer finally was with Derek, Derek was finally happy and Spencer finally moved on...and then over three years later Spencer gets cancer and dies...And Derek raises the kids all alone...Its very sad.
I think that in your epilogue two years later or so... or maybe even longer 3 or 4 years later...Derek moves on and finally gets to be happy, and maybe gets back together with that lady and their all happy together. Its such a sad ending for Derek. And those children...Joey lost two fathers and the other two lost two fathers also but they never knew Shawn...They deserve some happiness.
I like that Joey went to the grave and gave what her papa Derek gave to her to Spencer, that was sweet. And that birthday party scene was so sad. And Little Spencer? How precious, but so sad. I wish that scene was longer though...Oh and also the scene when Spencer died that was sad. I cried thru out the last two chapters and I am not a big crier...Freaking SAD STORIES! I liked that they all fell asleep and Spencer watched them all, smiled and closed his eyes and went peacefully...Though I wish you wrote out the funeral...I'm sure it would have been beautiful and huge. He used to be a FBI agent and he was a professor...and his mother should have went to the funeral, as well as his father that abandoned him...
One thing that did ** me off about these stories (no offence) is that Jason Gideon did NOT come back in these three stories...So much ** happened to Spencer! I think Aaron or Derek should have called him and told him, especially when Spencer got cancer. I think Spencer would have wanted to say goodbye to Gideon and I think that Gideon would hate himself if he wasn't there...I actually would have cried even harder if you did write that in...or at least Spencer write a letter to Gideon and have Gideon get it and read it and shred some tears or whatever. That would have been so heartbreaking. BUT I am glad that JJ was in this story and was around this whole time. I would have been very angry if she wasn't around and if she didn't at least come back to say goodbye. I love their friendship. I find them so adorable...I also love them as lovers and wish they'd finally get together on the show :( (Not a Will fan)
I just don't like that derek didn't go see Mrs. Reid, she may be mentally ill but she is a grandmother. He should have continued writing letters to her and going to see her instead.
But enough of my ranting...I really did love this series. I actually am sad that its over. I was upset that Spencer died, wish they all got to be happy...but thats life. Everyone dies. I just wish that you wrote a happy ending for Derek and those kids...him finally moving on and then maybe on the epilogue showing Spencer and Shawn watching Derek, their children and maybe his new love interest, being their new mama or dada. I think it would be a really good story...Spencer may be jealous or it may sting, but after watching Derek thru out all of those years, missing and still loving Spencer and it being so ** him without his husbend and love of his life...to watch Derek finally move on and be happy. And for Spencer to be happy for Derek being happy, even though his children has another parent that gets to raise them and watch them grow up.That would be ANOTHER damn tear jerker! Lol.
Oh I'd rather not read a Emily point of view with her pregnancy...I'd rather read a one shot with JJ telling Derek that she is pregnant, and even though he is still hurting and missing Spencer, maybe he'd be there for her for her pregnancy...And then she asks Derek for permission to name her son after Spencer. And maybe asking Derek to be the god father. That would be such a tear jerker. Another great story. Or maybe a one shot with those two several years later with the kids at a park or something and having a conversation just with those two as they watch the kids, finally talking about Spencer and how much they miss him. Because they were the closest out of the friends with Spencer...
Anyway I love your stories. Great job. Thanks for sharing them.
11RideEmLikeACowboyJazzySpencer swallowed again, feeling ready to throw up, before he managed to squeeze the words out. "I… I know where the twins are, but… I'll have to go there alone, or Kenneth won't listen." He grit his teeth to hold vomit down. "There's… something I need to show him."
that isn't a good idea...not sure why Derek would agree with that. He most likely has stage 4 cancer...and going alone to see a heartless bastard. He is too weak and he probably cant even drive :( He should have taken a weapon:(
I don't like that Spencer finally was with Derek, Derek was finally happy and Spencer finally moved on...and then over three years later Spencer gets cancer and dies...And Derek raises the kids all alone...Its very sad.
I think that in your epilogue two years later or so... or maybe even longer 3 or 4 years later...Derek moves on and finally gets to be happy, and maybe gets back together with that lady and their all happy together. Its such a sad ending for Derek. And those children...Joey lost two fathers and the other two lost two fathers also but they never knew Shawn...They deserve some happiness.
I like that Joey went to the grave and gave what her papa Derek gave to her to Spencer, that was sweet. And that birthday party scene was so sad. And Little Spencer? How precious, but so sad. I wish that scene was longer though...Oh and also the scene when Spencer died that was sad. I cried thru out the last two chapters and I am not a big crier...Freaking SAD STORIES! I liked that they all fell asleep and Spencer watched them all, smiled and closed his eyes and went peacefully...Though I wish you wrote out the funeral...I'm sure it would have been beautiful and huge. He used to be a FBI agent and he was a professor...and his mother should have went to the funeral, as well as his father that abandoned him...
One thing that did ** me off about these stories (no offence) is that Jason Gideon did NOT come back in these three stories...So much ** happened to Spencer! I think Aaron or Derek should have called him and told him, especially when Spencer got cancer. I think Spencer would have wanted to say goodbye to Gideon and I think that Gideon would hate himself if he wasn't there...I actually would have cried even harder if you did write that in...or at least Spencer write a letter to Gideon and have Gideon get it and read it and shred some tears or whatever. That would have been so heartbreaking. BUT I am glad that JJ was in this story and was around this whole time. I would have been very angry if she wasn't around and if she didn't at least come back to say goodbye. I love their friendship. I find them so adorable...I also love them as lovers and wish they'd finally get together on the show :( (Not a Will fan)
I just don't like that derek didn't go see Mrs. Reid, she may be mentally ill but she is a grandmother. He should have continued writing letters to her and going to see her instead.
But enough of my ranting...I really did love this series. I actually am sad that its over. I was upset that Spencer died, wish they all got to be happy...but thats life. Everyone dies. I just wish that you wrote a happy ending for Derek and those kids...him finally moving on and then maybe on the epilogue showing Spencer and Shawn watching Derek, their children and maybe his new love interest, being their new mama or dada. I think it would be a really good story...Spencer may be jealous or it may sting, but after watching Derek thru out all of those years, missing and still loving Spencer and it being so ** him without his husbend and love of his life...to watch Derek finally move on and be happy. And for Spencer to be happy for Derek being happy, even though his children has another parent that gets to raise them and watch them grow up.That would be ANOTHER damn tear jerker! Lol.
Oh I'd rather not read a Emily point of view with her pregnancy...I'd rather read a one shot with JJ telling Derek that she is pregnant, and even though he is still hurting and missing Spencer, maybe he'd be there for her for her pregnancy...And then she asks Derek for permission to name her son after Spencer. And maybe asking Derek to be the god father. That would be such a tear jerker. Another great story. Or maybe a one shot with those two several years later with the kids at a park or something and having a conversation just with those two as they watch the kids, finally talking about Spencer and how much they miss him. Because they were the closest out of the friends with Spencer...
Anyway I love your stories. Great job. Thanks for sharing them.
5/15/2012 c3 RideEmLikeACowboyJazzy
Biologically, Joey was Derek's child. The twins weren't, in any way at all. So, as Kenneth had pointed out without a trace of pity or sadness, if Spencer was to die any court of law would place the children under the custody of their real, biological family. As soon as Spencer was to die, which were Kenneth's exact words, Kenneth and Emma would come and take the twins home. The man was also planning on questioning if Spencer and Derek were able to look after the children in their current situation.
Wow what a heartless bastard...but that isn't true...if they abused Shawn...and Spencer had proof they wouldn't say yes to them. Techincally they are the biological family BUT Derek has raised those twins since day one...
I'm glad that Spencer agreed to allow Derek to adopt the kids...surprised he didn't adopt them awhile ago though.
Aww glad Shawn gave his approval and Spencer smiled at the grave
Spencer looked at him for a moment, and smiled. "We're finally a family, now – my children are yours, I'm yours. Nothing else matters."
aww sad
Just had to give Spencer cancer -frowns- Poor guy.
That bastard better not kidnap Spencer's children and take the last few presicious moments with his babies...how heartless can he be? I think his wife will do the right thing...she was nicer then Kennath
Biologically, Joey was Derek's child. The twins weren't, in any way at all. So, as Kenneth had pointed out without a trace of pity or sadness, if Spencer was to die any court of law would place the children under the custody of their real, biological family. As soon as Spencer was to die, which were Kenneth's exact words, Kenneth and Emma would come and take the twins home. The man was also planning on questioning if Spencer and Derek were able to look after the children in their current situation.
Wow what a heartless bastard...but that isn't true...if they abused Shawn...and Spencer had proof they wouldn't say yes to them. Techincally they are the biological family BUT Derek has raised those twins since day one...
I'm glad that Spencer agreed to allow Derek to adopt the kids...surprised he didn't adopt them awhile ago though.
Aww glad Shawn gave his approval and Spencer smiled at the grave
Spencer looked at him for a moment, and smiled. "We're finally a family, now – my children are yours, I'm yours. Nothing else matters."
aww sad
Just had to give Spencer cancer -frowns- Poor guy.
That bastard better not kidnap Spencer's children and take the last few presicious moments with his babies...how heartless can he be? I think his wife will do the right thing...she was nicer then Kennath
5/15/2012 c2 RideEmLikeACowboyJazzy
Derek had no idea how his mind managed to focus on something so unimportant, but for several seconds it was all he managed to think about. There was this habit between him and Spencer.
Whenever they parted, even if it was for just a couple of minutes, the one leaving brushed the shoulder of the one who was staying with their fingertips. It was some sort of a way for them to become reassured that the other was coming back.
This was the first time in their relationship Spencer forgot to do that.
Aww sweet.
Sucks that his parents in law came and threatened to take his children away:(
Derek unleashed a tiny sound of surprise at the way he leaned against the man. "Wait…! What…?" The man's hand brushed down, touching the most sensitive part of him, and he couldn't keep himself from whimpering while his back arched. A brief, stunned chuckle slipped from Derek. "You just… You were so sick I thought you'd pass out on me. And you had a hug shock. You can't be serious…!"
But oh, Spencer was very, very serious. Frustration rushing through him he spun around on the floor and slammed himself against Derek so hard that they fell to the floor. In a flash the little control he'd had disappeared completely. His lips were everywhere on Derek, and it felt like his body had been set on fire.
Hahaha wow...hilarious. But eww Spencer just threw up lmfao
Spencer nodded, speechless for a while. In the end he cleared his throat before managing to produce speech. "Do you… think the kids heard?"
Derek chuckled. "You honestly didn't realize how loud you were? I'm surprised if the neighbors didn't hear." A small kiss was planted to his hair. "But then again… I don't mind. And it's not exactly the worst or most unnatural thing they could hear."
lmfao
I don't like how the kids call Derek 'Derek'...when he has been living with Spencer and the kids and raising them since day one (the twins)...when Derek's daughter Joey called Shawn Papa...
"That first treatment session of yours… It starts in an hour."
Spencer sighed, forcing his eyes halfway open. For a moment the bathroom looked overlighted and hazy until his eyes grew used to it. "I know." It was time to get back to reality. Flashes filled his head, like a bad movie that refused to end.
When he first started feeling sick and getting those headaches a few months earlier he wondered if it was possible, after all, that he was pregnant once more. He was proven wrong when he passed out and fell the stairs of his house. It was a miracle he didn't break any bones.
You did it once again! Poor guy! Can you never give Spencer or Derek a break? Can't they be happy? Lol. Poor guys! They deserve some happiness! Especially Derek! He has been missing Spencer for years before the guy came back into his life. Now he has two daughters and a son and Spencer...he is finally happy.
Spencer is finally happy once again too
BTW I love the names of the twins you picked out. Morgana as the middle name. So cute. And Jayson Sean! Love it...only wish that in this story you had Gideon come back like your other ones:(
Derek had no idea how his mind managed to focus on something so unimportant, but for several seconds it was all he managed to think about. There was this habit between him and Spencer.
Whenever they parted, even if it was for just a couple of minutes, the one leaving brushed the shoulder of the one who was staying with their fingertips. It was some sort of a way for them to become reassured that the other was coming back.
This was the first time in their relationship Spencer forgot to do that.
Aww sweet.
Sucks that his parents in law came and threatened to take his children away:(
Derek unleashed a tiny sound of surprise at the way he leaned against the man. "Wait…! What…?" The man's hand brushed down, touching the most sensitive part of him, and he couldn't keep himself from whimpering while his back arched. A brief, stunned chuckle slipped from Derek. "You just… You were so sick I thought you'd pass out on me. And you had a hug shock. You can't be serious…!"
But oh, Spencer was very, very serious. Frustration rushing through him he spun around on the floor and slammed himself against Derek so hard that they fell to the floor. In a flash the little control he'd had disappeared completely. His lips were everywhere on Derek, and it felt like his body had been set on fire.
Hahaha wow...hilarious. But eww Spencer just threw up lmfao
Spencer nodded, speechless for a while. In the end he cleared his throat before managing to produce speech. "Do you… think the kids heard?"
Derek chuckled. "You honestly didn't realize how loud you were? I'm surprised if the neighbors didn't hear." A small kiss was planted to his hair. "But then again… I don't mind. And it's not exactly the worst or most unnatural thing they could hear."
lmfao
I don't like how the kids call Derek 'Derek'...when he has been living with Spencer and the kids and raising them since day one (the twins)...when Derek's daughter Joey called Shawn Papa...
"That first treatment session of yours… It starts in an hour."
Spencer sighed, forcing his eyes halfway open. For a moment the bathroom looked overlighted and hazy until his eyes grew used to it. "I know." It was time to get back to reality. Flashes filled his head, like a bad movie that refused to end.
When he first started feeling sick and getting those headaches a few months earlier he wondered if it was possible, after all, that he was pregnant once more. He was proven wrong when he passed out and fell the stairs of his house. It was a miracle he didn't break any bones.
You did it once again! Poor guy! Can you never give Spencer or Derek a break? Can't they be happy? Lol. Poor guys! They deserve some happiness! Especially Derek! He has been missing Spencer for years before the guy came back into his life. Now he has two daughters and a son and Spencer...he is finally happy.
Spencer is finally happy once again too
BTW I love the names of the twins you picked out. Morgana as the middle name. So cute. And Jayson Sean! Love it...only wish that in this story you had Gideon come back like your other ones:(
12/13/2011 c5 MadamShinigami
You need to add an additional warning because after reading that I nees a hug.
You need to add an additional warning because after reading that I nees a hug.