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I HATE LIGHTHOUSE SHIPPING.
I HATE LIGHTHOUSE SHIPPING.
3/1 c33 
1xDarkDawnx
I love this story SO much! .
I don't even know, I could say thousands of good things about it, but I'm too lazy to do that right now, and I don't wanna bother you with it.
Only thing I still gotta say: Please, PLEASE, make the next chapter soon. I want it SO BADLY.
1xDarkDawnxI love this story SO much! .
I don't even know, I could say thousands of good things about it, but I'm too lazy to do that right now, and I don't wanna bother you with it.
Only thing I still gotta say: Please, PLEASE, make the next chapter soon. I want it SO BADLY.
6/18/2012 c33 mystery box
OK, two things to say.
First, BEST CLIFFHANGER YET. You killed off Alex :( and the Empyror :) or at least made it seem like you did.
Second, I LOVE the humor in turning Diamond, Clovos, and the Empyro into a dragon. There's the Fusion Dragon with Saturos and Menardi, the Doom Dragon with Isaac and Felix's parents, and the Chaos Hound/Chimera with Volechek, and the Tua Dragon (That's what I'm calling it) with Diamond, Clovos, and the Empyror. I mean, half of the Golden Sun trilogy IS turning people into dragons.
Keep it up! I'm looking forward to those last two chapters.
OK, two things to say.
First, BEST CLIFFHANGER YET. You killed off Alex :( and the Empyror :) or at least made it seem like you did.
Second, I LOVE the humor in turning Diamond, Clovos, and the Empyro into a dragon. There's the Fusion Dragon with Saturos and Menardi, the Doom Dragon with Isaac and Felix's parents, and the Chaos Hound/Chimera with Volechek, and the Tua Dragon (That's what I'm calling it) with Diamond, Clovos, and the Empyror. I mean, half of the Golden Sun trilogy IS turning people into dragons.
Keep it up! I'm looking forward to those last two chapters.
6/18/2012 c31 mystey box
God, more sacrifices! Felix at the Lighthouse, Matthew at the Apollo Sanctum, Matthew and Sveta at the beginning of Lumino's Don't Cry, and now this. Good job!
God, more sacrifices! Felix at the Lighthouse, Matthew at the Apollo Sanctum, Matthew and Sveta at the beginning of Lumino's Don't Cry, and now this. Good job!
6/18/2012 c26 mystery box
I really liked the bit about Alex's past. It explains everything.
I really liked the bit about Alex's past. It explains everything.
6/18/2012 c20 mystery box
YESSSSSS! FINALLY! SOULSHIPPING! :D :D :D :D :D
YESSSSSS! FINALLY! SOULSHIPPING! :D :D :D :D :D
6/18/2012 c16 mystery box
UUUUUUUUGGGHH! YOU WERE THIS CLOSE TO SOULSHIPPING AND YOU DIDN'T USE ANY! I WILL DIE WITHOUT SOULSHIPPING!
*dies*
*comes back to life*
no, not really. I think.
UUUUUUUUGGGHH! YOU WERE THIS CLOSE TO SOULSHIPPING AND YOU DIDN'T USE ANY! I WILL DIE WITHOUT SOULSHIPPING!
*dies*
*comes back to life*
no, not really. I think.
6/18/2012 c12 mystery box
I like how you described Diamond's fighting style. It was kind of detailed and was fitting for her.
I like how you described Diamond's fighting style. It was kind of detailed and was fitting for her.
6/18/2012 c11 mystery box
It was good, the dance, the grave, and the kiss. It sorta reminded me of the ball scene in Kindred Spirits, exept it was very different. Good job!
It was good, the dance, the grave, and the kiss. It sorta reminded me of the ball scene in Kindred Spirits, exept it was very different. Good job!
6/18/2012 c4 mystery box
I like the name Clovos. It just fits, somehow. I wonder what the Diamond name will be...
I like the name Clovos. It just fits, somehow. I wonder what the Diamond name will be...
6/18/2012 c1 mystery box
Stormshipping? SOULSHIPPING? YESSSSSSSSS! :D XD
It seems like it'll be a good fic. I'll review from time to time.
Stormshipping? SOULSHIPPING? YESSSSSSSSS! :D XD
It seems like it'll be a good fic. I'll review from time to time.
5/12/2012 c33 1Heckenschutze
Very nice. I liked the added spell you had Himi conjure up, it allowed for some more fleshing out of Alex's character.
Also, the ending was pretty legit, you just need the Wise One to pop up and start talking about how the heroes have just done something bad by killing the dragon or something like that. You know, like in traditional GS style.
Im just glad that I'm finally able to catch up on the fanfics that I've recently missed due to AP exams. Anyway, keep up the good work.
Auf WIedersehen!
1HeckenschutzeVery nice. I liked the added spell you had Himi conjure up, it allowed for some more fleshing out of Alex's character.
Also, the ending was pretty legit, you just need the Wise One to pop up and start talking about how the heroes have just done something bad by killing the dragon or something like that. You know, like in traditional GS style.
Im just glad that I'm finally able to catch up on the fanfics that I've recently missed due to AP exams. Anyway, keep up the good work.
Auf WIedersehen!
5/10/2012 c33 7Smasher.The-Keyblade-Bearer
Oh wow... That little Alex part was... Deep, to say the least. HIIIGHH EMPYRORRRRR
I wonder what they'll do with him. Main Antagonist Alert!
Is that a little HimiXRief that I see? What would that be called... Ankhshipping? I dunno. I'm going to need to buy the old games, because the love thing going on between the original warriors is destroying my brain. All I know is that Garet got with some random chick, had a baby, and left *COUGHCOUGHALEXCOUGHCOUGH*.
Avita Sen!
(I think that's how you say it)
7Smasher.The-Keyblade-BearerOh wow... That little Alex part was... Deep, to say the least. HIIIGHH EMPYRORRRRR
I wonder what they'll do with him. Main Antagonist Alert!
Is that a little HimiXRief that I see? What would that be called... Ankhshipping? I dunno. I'm going to need to buy the old games, because the love thing going on between the original warriors is destroying my brain. All I know is that Garet got with some random chick, had a baby, and left *COUGHCOUGHALEXCOUGHCOUGH*.
Avita Sen!
(I think that's how you say it)
5/6/2012 c33 18leontinees
Oh, my... O_O This battle had me glued to the chair and my eyes no off the screen even a second. So well explained, so vivid, so real... The calling of dead ones from Himi got me truly amazed. At first I thought is was something like Thorn Grave, but no way, it was so much greater to be that.
I almost wept when Karst reunited with her loved ones, even only for a moment T_T And not liking her that much at all, still I felt sorrow.
And you also gave us some RiefxHimi moments, I thank you for that cause the couple is cute! The heroic act protecting her took me by surprise, because with all the deads helping, I guessed Uzume would be there too, but I liked to see this side of him.
Now I have a little hope for TakeruxNowell too... by the way, I know it´s difficult to have so many characters on field, but where is Nowell? You didnt give her a single line. Couldnt she be healing too or something? Same with Eoleo and Tyrell.
About Alex, his part was the very best (so much like him to be taking the spotlight, right? ^o^). I pitied he couldnt say a word to Veriti, though. I wish he survived again, somehow... like he did at Sol Sanctum when it collapsed. Or at least, if he dies, finally find some peace to his soul.
Well, I think that´s all. I´ll be waiting for the last chapters soon. Good luck! ^o^
P.S. Just if you´re wondering, I´m the same leontinees from Deviantart.
18leontineesOh, my... O_O This battle had me glued to the chair and my eyes no off the screen even a second. So well explained, so vivid, so real... The calling of dead ones from Himi got me truly amazed. At first I thought is was something like Thorn Grave, but no way, it was so much greater to be that.
I almost wept when Karst reunited with her loved ones, even only for a moment T_T And not liking her that much at all, still I felt sorrow.
And you also gave us some RiefxHimi moments, I thank you for that cause the couple is cute! The heroic act protecting her took me by surprise, because with all the deads helping, I guessed Uzume would be there too, but I liked to see this side of him.
Now I have a little hope for TakeruxNowell too... by the way, I know it´s difficult to have so many characters on field, but where is Nowell? You didnt give her a single line. Couldnt she be healing too or something? Same with Eoleo and Tyrell.
About Alex, his part was the very best (so much like him to be taking the spotlight, right? ^o^). I pitied he couldnt say a word to Veriti, though. I wish he survived again, somehow... like he did at Sol Sanctum when it collapsed. Or at least, if he dies, finally find some peace to his soul.
Well, I think that´s all. I´ll be waiting for the last chapters soon. Good luck! ^o^
P.S. Just if you´re wondering, I´m the same leontinees from Deviantart.
5/4/2012 c33 Artur Hawkwing 1
Ya, so, I just found this story. and. IT'S 4:30 IN THE MORNING! I stayed up late reading this in one go though. Yes, that means you have an awesome story here. Camalet should hire you. :)
Ya, so, I just found this story. and. IT'S 4:30 IN THE MORNING! I stayed up late reading this in one go though. Yes, that means you have an awesome story here. Camalet should hire you. :)