for Heaven9/15/2012 c1 FeatherSun19994
Amazing story..I don't know of you're still writing since its been a while since you updated but I'm hoping you're still writing and it's an awesome fanfiction it'll be so sad if you don't update and keep us hanging here! I'll say it again it's an awesome fanfic (:
Amazing story..I don't know of you're still writing since its been a while since you updated but I'm hoping you're still writing and it's an awesome fanfiction it'll be so sad if you don't update and keep us hanging here! I'll say it again it's an awesome fanfic (:
3/5/2012 c10 sawyer
more please! read this all in one night & love it! didnt think i would cause i love danny with evelyn, but i really do:) it would be neat to see danny jealous of gabriel and gabriel jealous of danny. gabriel kinda seems dangerous, so maybe danny could rescue her and they could both get over their stubbornness:) lol -sawyer
more please! read this all in one night & love it! didnt think i would cause i love danny with evelyn, but i really do:) it would be neat to see danny jealous of gabriel and gabriel jealous of danny. gabriel kinda seems dangerous, so maybe danny could rescue her and they could both get over their stubbornness:) lol -sawyer
3/3/2012 c10 Miriam
Fantastic story! I was sucked in. I write fanfiction as well and am actually working on a full length book... You've inspired me! I urge you to finish this one though, don't leave me wondering! Great story and good characters. Nice job! ;)
Fantastic story! I was sucked in. I write fanfiction as well and am actually working on a full length book... You've inspired me! I urge you to finish this one though, don't leave me wondering! Great story and good characters. Nice job! ;)
12/31/2011 c10 
1alwaysreading25
what gabriel? no one is good enough for heaven but danny and awww she cut her hair? loved the chapter cant wait fo more :#
1alwaysreading25what gabriel? no one is good enough for heaven but danny and awww she cut her hair? loved the chapter cant wait fo more :#
12/31/2011 c10 heyailoveyou
Great chapter(: And I hope you don't mind me asking, but what happened to Evelyn and his son? I'd think Danny would like to know about his own kid, but that's alright if you want to leave it the way it is, because I still like it!
Great chapter(: And I hope you don't mind me asking, but what happened to Evelyn and his son? I'd think Danny would like to know about his own kid, but that's alright if you want to leave it the way it is, because I still like it!
12/31/2011 c10 13Chaos Of A Butterfly
Gabriel is going to beat the crap out of Danny. Cause Danny is so adorably hot Tht Gabriel will feel threatened. I likes this chapter, just seems a little sad, but I'm excited for the next chapter. Please update soon :D
13Chaos Of A ButterflyGabriel is going to beat the crap out of Danny. Cause Danny is so adorably hot Tht Gabriel will feel threatened. I likes this chapter, just seems a little sad, but I'm excited for the next chapter. Please update soon :D
11/16/2011 c9 1alwaysreading25
Omgosh best danny/oc ever! I love this so much ur an amazing wtiter is there going to be more plz say sp
1alwaysreading25Omgosh best danny/oc ever! I love this so much ur an amazing wtiter is there going to be more plz say sp
8/26/2011 c9 1skeletalshock
Hey there!
I've just spent the pass hour reading your story and by god is it good. The emotions, the play between Danny and Heaven are beautiful and they've given me the fuzziest and the most tingling feelings in my stomach. I love the justification behind Danny's reason not to get with Heaven, and I really do hope you'll update soon, so we can know what happens next!
You're a really talented writer! Please do continue :)
1skeletalshockHey there!
I've just spent the pass hour reading your story and by god is it good. The emotions, the play between Danny and Heaven are beautiful and they've given me the fuzziest and the most tingling feelings in my stomach. I love the justification behind Danny's reason not to get with Heaven, and I really do hope you'll update soon, so we can know what happens next!
You're a really talented writer! Please do continue :)
6/8/2011 c8 9WinchesterAngel3389
it's been a while since I even bothered to look at Pearl Harbor stories. And I'm glad I came back.
Danny and Heaven's friendship is cute and we both knew it would end up wanting to be more than that. What sucks is that Danny has to leave, just when things could finally start happening :/
can't wait for more!
9WinchesterAngel3389it's been a while since I even bothered to look at Pearl Harbor stories. And I'm glad I came back.
Danny and Heaven's friendship is cute and we both knew it would end up wanting to be more than that. What sucks is that Danny has to leave, just when things could finally start happening :/
can't wait for more!
5/15/2011 c8 1smartchickloser
I hope you update soon. I've been waiting forever for a new chapter of this, it's one of my favorite fan fics
1smartchickloserI hope you update soon. I've been waiting forever for a new chapter of this, it's one of my favorite fan fics
4/16/2011 c8 10Scribbled Truth
This fanfic is simply amazing. It's well written and Heaven is such a good character. I can not wait to see the next chapter.
10Scribbled TruthThis fanfic is simply amazing. It's well written and Heaven is such a good character. I can not wait to see the next chapter.
1/31/2011 c8 1alwaysreading25
Ong I'm in love with ur plot danny is my favorite in pearl harbor and I cried when he died so I resulted to fanfic and I love the pairing with heaven Its so cute I can't wait for update
1alwaysreading25Ong I'm in love with ur plot danny is my favorite in pearl harbor and I cried when he died so I resulted to fanfic and I love the pairing with heaven Its so cute I can't wait for update