for Do you forgive me?9/5/2011 c4 alice169
haahhaahah haleluia hehe
haahhaahah haleluia hehe
9/5/2011 c3 alice169
awsome chapter he kissed finnally ninja boy had guts
awsome chapter he kissed finnally ninja boy had guts
9/5/2011 c2 alice169
do you want to stay and cook here forever hahaha shun can't cook and alice isnt his girlfriend...yet
do you want to stay and cook here forever hahaha shun can't cook and alice isnt his girlfriend...yet
9/5/2011 c1 alice169
what the hell is my proble i was lauphing ahahhahah
what the hell is my proble i was lauphing ahahhahah
5/20/2011 c4 aj
lovely shunXalice forever
lovely shunXalice forever
12/26/2010 c2 SxA 4ever
AHAHA i so agree Shuns cooking is worst then a hell XD
AHAHA i so agree Shuns cooking is worst then a hell XD
12/22/2010 c3 mini99
awsum plz continue
awsum plz continue
12/21/2010 c3 
6AliceXShunNotFabia
This has a great story line! It was really good! So cute ;) Please update soon!
6AliceXShunNotFabiaThis has a great story line! It was really good! So cute ;) Please update soon!
12/21/2010 c1 Kazamirose
OMG! This is amazing! Please PLEASE CONTINUE!
p.s a lil' mistakes here and there but it was understandable and so KAWAII!
OMG! This is amazing! Please PLEASE CONTINUE!
p.s a lil' mistakes here and there but it was understandable and so KAWAII!
12/20/2010 c2 cookiemonsterfan
i love it can you plese continue it
i love it can you plese continue it
12/20/2010 c1 saltwaterstar
Your grammar is terrible!
Your grammar is terrible!