for Tear Away The Mask5/5 c14 
9Jenndifurry
I don't like to talk about this because it makes me sick and induces massive panic just thinking about it. But when Mac stopped the brick with her head it makes me ill because of something that happened to me. I fell from a secound story height onto concreat just covered buy thin carpet. I don't remeber much before the fall or hitting the floor (the brain protecting itself) What I really remeber in the painic in my mom's voice ( I was 19 at the time ) and her anger at the brunching nurses while I was sitting up retching in the ER and in massive pain while we were waiting for the on call Dr. ( I was more scared of the neddle on the bed that the carless phlebotomist left. I have a massive neddle phobia). The rest of what I know I peiced together from what I remeber, ( I reacted like most normal humans and slept when they introduced me to morphine.) and the info given to me when I was out of the woods. I almost died from a subdural hematoma. I was lucky my body re-absorbed the blood, but I almost needed surgery to releave the pressure on my brain.
Anyway my point is that Mac getting hit in the head would have been plauged by the Nerologist giving her head scans and monitering her for at least 24 hour to makesure there were anyslow bleeds requiring surgery or monitering. I suggest a glancing blow rather than actully stoping the brick.
9JenndifurryI don't like to talk about this because it makes me sick and induces massive panic just thinking about it. But when Mac stopped the brick with her head it makes me ill because of something that happened to me. I fell from a secound story height onto concreat just covered buy thin carpet. I don't remeber much before the fall or hitting the floor (the brain protecting itself) What I really remeber in the painic in my mom's voice ( I was 19 at the time ) and her anger at the brunching nurses while I was sitting up retching in the ER and in massive pain while we were waiting for the on call Dr. ( I was more scared of the neddle on the bed that the carless phlebotomist left. I have a massive neddle phobia). The rest of what I know I peiced together from what I remeber, ( I reacted like most normal humans and slept when they introduced me to morphine.) and the info given to me when I was out of the woods. I almost died from a subdural hematoma. I was lucky my body re-absorbed the blood, but I almost needed surgery to releave the pressure on my brain.
Anyway my point is that Mac getting hit in the head would have been plauged by the Nerologist giving her head scans and monitering her for at least 24 hour to makesure there were anyslow bleeds requiring surgery or monitering. I suggest a glancing blow rather than actully stoping the brick.
5/5 c25 Jenndifurry
According to the law of physics bullets don't just stop because the've gone in one body that TV physics in real life they don't stop untill a wall (those stoped by a mere wall are usually handguns without the power of a rifle ) or gravity goning through a body faster than the speed of sound only tends to slow them down only minutly. Bullets have been known to go through whole houses and if they don't have an exit wound they bounce around in the body doing massive damge doctors and ME have been know to scans to locate the stray bullet. Imagine a sniper rifle has more damage potentail because of the power needed to kill from a distance. And people wonder why I'm such a democrat when it comes to gun control.
According to the law of physics bullets don't just stop because the've gone in one body that TV physics in real life they don't stop untill a wall (those stoped by a mere wall are usually handguns without the power of a rifle ) or gravity goning through a body faster than the speed of sound only tends to slow them down only minutly. Bullets have been known to go through whole houses and if they don't have an exit wound they bounce around in the body doing massive damge doctors and ME have been know to scans to locate the stray bullet. Imagine a sniper rifle has more damage potentail because of the power needed to kill from a distance. And people wonder why I'm such a democrat when it comes to gun control.
5/5 c16 Jenndifurry
I know that you've finished this story heck you have finnised sequals as in plural but I think that for them to heal they both need to be friends and not in a realtionship to each other or anyone else to heal and cleanse some wounds they say time time heals all wounds it doesn't but it lets you see the infection clean it out make those scabs into scars or let the infection set and fest and boil over and start to rot. Time lesens the pain and give you 20 / 20.
I know that you've finished this story heck you have finnised sequals as in plural but I think that for them to heal they both need to be friends and not in a realtionship to each other or anyone else to heal and cleanse some wounds they say time time heals all wounds it doesn't but it lets you see the infection clean it out make those scabs into scars or let the infection set and fest and boil over and start to rot. Time lesens the pain and give you 20 / 20.
5/4 c31 Jodi
I don't know if you will read this since you posted the story a coup,e of years ago. I only discovered Veronica Mars because of the kickstarter campaign and quickly became obsessed. Thanks for writing a great ending to an awesome show. Loved it!
I don't know if you will read this since you posted the story a coup,e of years ago. I only discovered Veronica Mars because of the kickstarter campaign and quickly became obsessed. Thanks for writing a great ending to an awesome show. Loved it!
4/23 c5 Jodi
Great job!
I am very late to the Veronica Mars world. Brand new to reading fanfic. I'm have become obsessed with their world. You are doing a great job with your work. Can't wait to finish it!
Great job!
I am very late to the Veronica Mars world. Brand new to reading fanfic. I'm have become obsessed with their world. You are doing a great job with your work. Can't wait to finish it!
3/15 c32 Sofie
Loved it!
Loved it!
3/15 c4 Your New Fan
I love the story so far i'm hooked i love how believable the story line is cant wait to read more.
x0x0 Katie
I love the story so far i'm hooked i love how believable the story line is cant wait to read more.
x0x0 Katie
1/27 c17 KatieDean0343
There has not been a chapter I have read since I started this story that I have been disappointed in any way. I have cried and laugh out loud that it startled my dogs. This is one of the best stories I read on Fan-Fiction since I started reading them. And, I love that you put Dick and Mac together, they are just to precious. I absolutely love this story, it's got every emotion from A-Z and then some.
There has not been a chapter I have read since I started this story that I have been disappointed in any way. I have cried and laugh out loud that it startled my dogs. This is one of the best stories I read on Fan-Fiction since I started reading them. And, I love that you put Dick and Mac together, they are just to precious. I absolutely love this story, it's got every emotion from A-Z and then some.
1/20 c32 3liltitesisi
magnfique tout simplement magnifique, j'adore les histoires d'amour mais celle avec véronica et logan c'est le top du top, neck plus ultra marci de l'avoir partagé avec nous !
3liltitesisimagnfique tout simplement magnifique, j'adore les histoires d'amour mais celle avec véronica et logan c'est le top du top, neck plus ultra marci de l'avoir partagé avec nous !
12/8/2012 c31 Lorelai36
I just marathoned my way through this entire story and wanted to let you know how much I loved it. I'm so glad you have so many installment still to read. I intend on reading all of them very soon.
I would review each and every chapter if I had the time, but as it is I'll have to do an overall review for the whole story. I think you did a fantastic job with each of your charcterizations, each one was fully realized and your original characters were well rounded. Your take on Duncan's return was unique and the plot was thoughtfully laid out. I found myself invested in the storyline throughout the entire story, very engaged with the progress of both Logan and Veronica's relationship as well as Mac and Dick's. I liked your later inclusion of Trina, and hope to see more of her in future installments. Finally your humor was spot on and added a sense of levity to the story that helped keep me from being too overwhelmed by the seriousness of some storylines. Great job.
I just marathoned my way through this entire story and wanted to let you know how much I loved it. I'm so glad you have so many installment still to read. I intend on reading all of them very soon.
I would review each and every chapter if I had the time, but as it is I'll have to do an overall review for the whole story. I think you did a fantastic job with each of your charcterizations, each one was fully realized and your original characters were well rounded. Your take on Duncan's return was unique and the plot was thoughtfully laid out. I found myself invested in the storyline throughout the entire story, very engaged with the progress of both Logan and Veronica's relationship as well as Mac and Dick's. I liked your later inclusion of Trina, and hope to see more of her in future installments. Finally your humor was spot on and added a sense of levity to the story that helped keep me from being too overwhelmed by the seriousness of some storylines. Great job.
11/4/2012 c19 RedJane12
I love this fic and esp. those two scenes, first V talking to Logan and then V & D were really touching - I never get tired of re-reading this fic!
I love this fic and esp. those two scenes, first V talking to Logan and then V & D were really touching - I never get tired of re-reading this fic!
9/22/2012 c32 5BeWitchingRedhead36
LOVE the tee shirt Mac had specially made for Dick. I also liked all the tee shirts Dick bought for Mac after she lost the bet too. Too cute! Lots of action. I couldn't stop reading this. Logan would absolutely take a bullet for V, without a doubt. Loved how you spent a lot of time on all the characters. I'm glad you continue with Jazmin because I'm really curious about her back story, something big I'm sure. I'm eager to start the MaDi centric sequel. Good job!
5BeWitchingRedhead36LOVE the tee shirt Mac had specially made for Dick. I also liked all the tee shirts Dick bought for Mac after she lost the bet too. Too cute! Lots of action. I couldn't stop reading this. Logan would absolutely take a bullet for V, without a doubt. Loved how you spent a lot of time on all the characters. I'm glad you continue with Jazmin because I'm really curious about her back story, something big I'm sure. I'm eager to start the MaDi centric sequel. Good job!
9/8/2012 c31 19emackenzie
You know I had plans for today. Things I wanted to do that I can't get done during the week, cleaning, laundry, going somewhere. But no, oh no I started reading and I couldn't stop! Seriously amazing! And I love Duncan in this story, you really made him grow up. I think a lot of people don't have any clue how hard it is to be a parent, and a child at the same time, and then to be forced to flee, and not have his family and friends to help him. I like the thought that he had to toughen up!
Can't wait to read the rest of your work!
19emackenzieYou know I had plans for today. Things I wanted to do that I can't get done during the week, cleaning, laundry, going somewhere. But no, oh no I started reading and I couldn't stop! Seriously amazing! And I love Duncan in this story, you really made him grow up. I think a lot of people don't have any clue how hard it is to be a parent, and a child at the same time, and then to be forced to flee, and not have his family and friends to help him. I like the thought that he had to toughen up!
Can't wait to read the rest of your work!