for Bleach Christmas2/23/2012 c1 
14wolfeclipse25
I loved this! My favorite parts were the snow by Toshiro and Tier giving him a present! You write amazing for you second story!
14wolfeclipse25I loved this! My favorite parts were the snow by Toshiro and Tier giving him a present! You write amazing for you second story!
2/13/2011 c1 2Sylus D Wolfe
OMG you must make the new years one! I have read both this and your halloween fics I did catch what looked like a hint at a new years fic(unless I was reading to much into it, heres hopeing). And I think Hallibel being included was cool... but she needs a bit more of a meatier part. Hitsugaya's harem must increase. Anyway I love it!
2Sylus D WolfeOMG you must make the new years one! I have read both this and your halloween fics I did catch what looked like a hint at a new years fic(unless I was reading to much into it, heres hopeing). And I think Hallibel being included was cool... but she needs a bit more of a meatier part. Hitsugaya's harem must increase. Anyway I love it!
2/7/2011 c1 Liu-chan
It was really funny, you should make third. Ukitake as Santa, lol. And I am surprised that no one except Momo and Kyouraku didn´t noticed that the snow was from Shiro. And that end, Harribel gives a present:-). You are really good writer.
P.S.: I am Czech, so sorry for my bad English
It was really funny, you should make third. Ukitake as Santa, lol. And I am surprised that no one except Momo and Kyouraku didn´t noticed that the snow was from Shiro. And that end, Harribel gives a present:-). You are really good writer.
P.S.: I am Czech, so sorry for my bad English
1/13/2011 c1 5blueoceannymph789
That was really cute!
It did feel like a filler-Christmas-Bleach-episode :P the fast scene changes fitted good when you mentioned all divisions-in my opinion Komamura and Tetsuzaemon were the best/cutest!- and of course i was left dumbfounded with the ending!
It was really beautiful, good work and happy new year!
5blueoceannymph789That was really cute!
It did feel like a filler-Christmas-Bleach-episode :P the fast scene changes fitted good when you mentioned all divisions-in my opinion Komamura and Tetsuzaemon were the best/cutest!- and of course i was left dumbfounded with the ending!
It was really beautiful, good work and happy new year!
1/11/2011 c1 26at-kb
Awww, this was so cute! It was awesome and definitely didn't suck. I laughed out loud at some points! Ukitake would totally be Santa Claus, and some of the gifts were so appropriate and hilarious - like Kira's smiley face blankets. I particularly liked Nanao's line, "I would *love* for you to stop *giving* yourself so much alcohol before the sun even sets."
It was also definitely a lot easier to read, too! The only tip I would give is that when you have a sentence like:
"I hope she likes it." Hisagi said.
It should be a comma instead of the period, like this:
"I hope she likes it," Hisagi said.
Of course if Hisagi uses an exclamation mark or question mark, like this:
"I hope she likes it!" Hisagi said.
or
"Do you think she'll like it?" Hisagi said.
Then that's totally correct and it doesn't need to be changed to a comma.
But this rule about the comma is only true for sentences when you have the person's words followed by "he said" or "she whispered" or whatever. If Hisagi's words are not followed by "he said" or something similar, as in:
Hisagi said, "I hope she likes it."
or
The large captain smiled and nodded, "Thank you Iba."
Then that's correct the way it is, and the period does not need to be changed into a comma.
I hope that made sense! : )
26at-kbAwww, this was so cute! It was awesome and definitely didn't suck. I laughed out loud at some points! Ukitake would totally be Santa Claus, and some of the gifts were so appropriate and hilarious - like Kira's smiley face blankets. I particularly liked Nanao's line, "I would *love* for you to stop *giving* yourself so much alcohol before the sun even sets."
It was also definitely a lot easier to read, too! The only tip I would give is that when you have a sentence like:
"I hope she likes it." Hisagi said.
It should be a comma instead of the period, like this:
"I hope she likes it," Hisagi said.
Of course if Hisagi uses an exclamation mark or question mark, like this:
"I hope she likes it!" Hisagi said.
or
"Do you think she'll like it?" Hisagi said.
Then that's totally correct and it doesn't need to be changed to a comma.
But this rule about the comma is only true for sentences when you have the person's words followed by "he said" or "she whispered" or whatever. If Hisagi's words are not followed by "he said" or something similar, as in:
Hisagi said, "I hope she likes it."
or
The large captain smiled and nodded, "Thank you Iba."
Then that's correct the way it is, and the period does not need to be changed into a comma.
I hope that made sense! : )
12/25/2010 c1 13Crystalscar
oww! it's brilliant! I really like the last part where Tia sent Hitsugaya the present. It's sweet. Thanks for writing it. It's really nice, got me smiling all the way till the end of the story. (:
13Crystalscaroww! it's brilliant! I really like the last part where Tia sent Hitsugaya the present. It's sweet. Thanks for writing it. It's really nice, got me smiling all the way till the end of the story. (: