for Loving a Bash Brother UP for Adoption4/13/2012 c18 
19texaskid
It's an interesting plot a few problems. The chapters are on the short side, if you don't have your own computer and have to use a public one you could always save them to a flash or jump drive that way you could make them longer. Also you never did introduce Emma she just sorta appeared. And was there a point to Rick just appearing or was it just randomly thrown in there?
Anyway it's a good plot and I'd love to see you continue it.
19texaskidIt's an interesting plot a few problems. The chapters are on the short side, if you don't have your own computer and have to use a public one you could always save them to a flash or jump drive that way you could make them longer. Also you never did introduce Emma she just sorta appeared. And was there a point to Rick just appearing or was it just randomly thrown in there?
Anyway it's a good plot and I'd love to see you continue it.
6/15/2011 c14 2Mychildishromance
Aww man this chapter was really short can't wait till u update again
2MychildishromanceAww man this chapter was really short can't wait till u update again
5/18/2011 c12 Dalonega Noquisi
This kinda reminds me of a mix between the book/movie A Walk to Remember and the movie Step Up. Its still pretty good tho
This kinda reminds me of a mix between the book/movie A Walk to Remember and the movie Step Up. Its still pretty good tho
5/7/2011 c11 Mychildishromance
What! Bad Adam bad Adam she portman's not yours. I like what you. Did about postman being in the musical
What! Bad Adam bad Adam she portman's not yours. I like what you. Did about postman being in the musical
4/28/2011 c10 nananax3
ooooh , i love where this is going ! i wish there were more portman stories , the third movie really left a lot to the imagination .
anyway , i hope you update soon !
ooooh , i love where this is going ! i wish there were more portman stories , the third movie really left a lot to the imagination .
anyway , i hope you update soon !