for Terminator: Dawn of the free willed8/14/2012 c11 Guest
So whose the murderer?
So whose the murderer?
6/28/2012 c11
1JFord-5
In the over all, the plot was very good. A little constructive critisism, you need to use more pronouns. Using HK for every reference was somewhat annoying. The last thing, you don't have to be exact in measurements of length and feet, it's not necesarry. I say again though, the story was very good. Keep writing.
1JFord-5In the over all, the plot was very good. A little constructive critisism, you need to use more pronouns. Using HK for every reference was somewhat annoying. The last thing, you don't have to be exact in measurements of length and feet, it's not necesarry. I say again though, the story was very good. Keep writing.
6/30/2011 c7 Velossian
Im hopping ths this story will be continued because I reall like how it it was written, I like the way that the terminator has true free will not just been reprogramemd and It has me curious as to how this tory will end will it meet John Connor please keep it up and post more chapters
Im hopping ths this story will be continued because I reall like how it it was written, I like the way that the terminator has true free will not just been reprogramemd and It has me curious as to how this tory will end will it meet John Connor please keep it up and post more chapters
5/27/2011 c6 Baow
Very interesting. I'd like to see where it goes and what happens to M3.
Very interesting. I'd like to see where it goes and what happens to M3.
1/22/2011 c3
3Scope Eva
Like it! The terminators are just too awsome to stay evil in my opinion. Keep up the good work.
3Scope EvaLike it! The terminators are just too awsome to stay evil in my opinion. Keep up the good work.
1/3/2011 c1 bob
keep it going.
keep it going.
