for The Breaking Point8/20/2012 c20 Disappointed
there shouldn't be a sequel. you should finish this story off better. I don't know how many chapters it would take but you've ruined what was a good story with this final chapter. I'm sorry if this sounds harsh and yes endings are hard to write but more so if don't actually end it in the right place.
Please reconsider redoing this chapter and adding on chapters where he looks for her and where she seeks to avenge him until they find each other again. It will be much more satisfying and well rounded story for it.
there shouldn't be a sequel. you should finish this story off better. I don't know how many chapters it would take but you've ruined what was a good story with this final chapter. I'm sorry if this sounds harsh and yes endings are hard to write but more so if don't actually end it in the right place.
Please reconsider redoing this chapter and adding on chapters where he looks for her and where she seeks to avenge him until they find each other again. It will be much more satisfying and well rounded story for it.
8/22/2012 c21 Petite Mule
I can't wait to see you back! I would like to help you as beta-reader but I have to warn you that English isn't my native language. Take care.
I can't wait to see you back! I would like to help you as beta-reader but I have to warn you that English isn't my native language. Take care.
8/22/2012 c20 
3nightkitty555
I hope they get a happy ending. Are you considering a sequel? Post an authors note chapter here to tell your followers about a sequel
3nightkitty555I hope they get a happy ending. Are you considering a sequel? Post an authors note chapter here to tell your followers about a sequel
8/22/2012 c19 17randomfan17
Okay, now i see what i missed. Glad i read the last chapter first, hehe. I loved it! I loved it! I loved it! Can't wait to see anything else that might be coming.
17randomfan17Okay, now i see what i missed. Glad i read the last chapter first, hehe. I loved it! I loved it! I loved it! Can't wait to see anything else that might be coming.
8/22/2012 c20 randomfan17
What?! I missed something, going back to read but know i will be stalking your profile till i see a sequel, because it could have gone on so much longer. However if you don't plan on writing one i'll let my mind wander free in thoughts of the future this story might have had. i loved it, beginning to end though!
What?! I missed something, going back to read but know i will be stalking your profile till i see a sequel, because it could have gone on so much longer. However if you don't plan on writing one i'll let my mind wander free in thoughts of the future this story might have had. i loved it, beginning to end though!
8/20/2012 c20 Petite Mule
You've got me! I really thought you killed him. Of course, you should write a sequel! You can't leave your readers here. Pretty please? Read you soon.
You've got me! I really thought you killed him. Of course, you should write a sequel! You can't leave your readers here. Pretty please? Read you soon.
8/20/2012 c20 151articcat621
OH MY GOD. PLEASE DO A SEQUEL OH MY GOD THEY HAVE TO BE TOGETHER I LOVED IT!
151articcat621OH MY GOD. PLEASE DO A SEQUEL OH MY GOD THEY HAVE TO BE TOGETHER I LOVED IT!
8/20/2012 c20 41Professor Severus Snape's Wife
glad you took my advice/idea! lol...hope there is a sequel or something!
41Professor Severus Snape's Wifeglad you took my advice/idea! lol...hope there is a sequel or something!