for Little Pieces Bleeding Through8/12/2011 c1 
21Kirsten Erin
Amazing. I love your characterization of Edmund's hardships in returning to England. Most focus too much on Susan and Peter when it comes to adjusting to that life again.
Also, I liked your having his Narnian memories fade just as their English ones did during their reign. I've never seen anyone do that either. Very original. I love it.
Great job! Keep up the great work!
21Kirsten ErinAmazing. I love your characterization of Edmund's hardships in returning to England. Most focus too much on Susan and Peter when it comes to adjusting to that life again.
Also, I liked your having his Narnian memories fade just as their English ones did during their reign. I've never seen anyone do that either. Very original. I love it.
Great job! Keep up the great work!
2/17/2011 c1 26rthstewart
In this very dark, grim piece I did enjoy most Edmund's very perspicacious comment that he sees the Witch the War's end, in the concentration camps and gas chambers and in the faces of the British. I suppose that in those evils, he finds her closer.
26rthstewartIn this very dark, grim piece I did enjoy most Edmund's very perspicacious comment that he sees the Witch the War's end, in the concentration camps and gas chambers and in the faces of the British. I suppose that in those evils, he finds her closer.