for Replay3/11/2012 c2 Random Reviewer
HAHAHA! This stuff is TOO good!
Please, by all means, find some time to finish this, or at least add another chapter?
I'm really liking the dynamics of their (Santa and Lotus) interactions, it just flows so well, and despite the age difference, I find it hard to believe that Lotus is actually 40. She's just got that spark of life in her, I guess. Takes really good care of herself, doesn't she?
Anyways, I'd love to see what Santa's plan is, probably gonna try and set Junpei and Clover up on some "accidental" date in order to pawn Junpei off and away from Akane...sounds like things could get interesting from here. =)
Please, finish this!
HAHAHA! This stuff is TOO good!
Please, by all means, find some time to finish this, or at least add another chapter?
I'm really liking the dynamics of their (Santa and Lotus) interactions, it just flows so well, and despite the age difference, I find it hard to believe that Lotus is actually 40. She's just got that spark of life in her, I guess. Takes really good care of herself, doesn't she?
Anyways, I'd love to see what Santa's plan is, probably gonna try and set Junpei and Clover up on some "accidental" date in order to pawn Junpei off and away from Akane...sounds like things could get interesting from here. =)
Please, finish this!
4/17/2011 c2 
9Letzte
Oh, yayness, an update! This is definetly an interesting fic; Santa/Lotus is a cute pairing despite the age difference. Some of the details here don't match up with the cannon, though, so... But other than that it's really good. Please update again soon?
9LetzteOh, yayness, an update! This is definetly an interesting fic; Santa/Lotus is a cute pairing despite the age difference. Some of the details here don't match up with the cannon, though, so... But other than that it's really good. Please update again soon?
4/17/2011 c1 AnimaniacXOX
Was originally a fan of Santa/June, and when I found out the truth, I was like D'OH!
Even though I still like pairing (incest ftw), Santa/Lotus is okaaaaay, just...it gets weird when I think of the age difference...Anyway, good job on this!
Was originally a fan of Santa/June, and when I found out the truth, I was like D'OH!
Even though I still like pairing (incest ftw), Santa/Lotus is okaaaaay, just...it gets weird when I think of the age difference...Anyway, good job on this!
4/16/2011 c2 Mighty Falcon
Oh giddy, giddy! It's about time you update your fanfic.
Your latest chap is really great. I sense that there's gonna be Santa/Clover shipping but I dunno. Lotus/Santa is a really good pair too...
Oh giddy, giddy! It's about time you update your fanfic.
Your latest chap is really great. I sense that there's gonna be Santa/Clover shipping but I dunno. Lotus/Santa is a really good pair too...
4/15/2011 c2 9Dolasiar
Three months? :O
I'm glad you're still writing it though. It's amusing how Aoi lets his guard down around her enough so that he doesn't notice her blatant manipulations despite being in a job that requires impeccable attention to detail.
9DolasiarThree months? :O
I'm glad you're still writing it though. It's amusing how Aoi lets his guard down around her enough so that he doesn't notice her blatant manipulations despite being in a job that requires impeccable attention to detail.
3/2/2011 c1 9Trin-rin
I really like this fanfic so far. The pairing is kinda weird cause of the age difference, but other than that I can see how it works. You definately wrote this well enough to make the behaviour believeable for the characters, can't wait to see more. Write another chapter soon! x3
9Trin-rinI really like this fanfic so far. The pairing is kinda weird cause of the age difference, but other than that I can see how it works. You definately wrote this well enough to make the behaviour believeable for the characters, can't wait to see more. Write another chapter soon! x3
2/26/2011 c1 Niamy Tak
Oh hey, I like this fic! The pairing's not a favourite but the story's pretty neat. I would probably behave in the same manner if my sibling suddenly had a boyfriend so I guess I empathise. Also Aoi's squealing fangirls made me giggle (I'd probably be one of them OTL) Anyhow, nice set-up, hope you continue!
Oh hey, I like this fic! The pairing's not a favourite but the story's pretty neat. I would probably behave in the same manner if my sibling suddenly had a boyfriend so I guess I empathise. Also Aoi's squealing fangirls made me giggle (I'd probably be one of them OTL) Anyhow, nice set-up, hope you continue!
2/15/2011 c1 ghoulsville
the first time I played 999 and I went to door 4 (that's the one that leads to the kitchen, right?) I tooootally paired Santa and Lotus in my head XD and then I found out that she had kids and the other characters kept calling her an old hag (lol she looks so young!) soo yeah.
BUT YES
THIS FANFICTION 3 it just like 3 makes my day
:3 I am so excited to see where this is going!
Santa's my favorite character (who doesn't like Santa, I mean really? XD) and you capture his cursing and personality excellently haha. keep it up :3 !
the first time I played 999 and I went to door 4 (that's the one that leads to the kitchen, right?) I tooootally paired Santa and Lotus in my head XD and then I found out that she had kids and the other characters kept calling her an old hag (lol she looks so young!) soo yeah.
BUT YES
THIS FANFICTION 3 it just like 3 makes my day
:3 I am so excited to see where this is going!
Santa's my favorite character (who doesn't like Santa, I mean really? XD) and you capture his cursing and personality excellently haha. keep it up :3 !
1/18/2011 c1 iloveyouallD
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF finaly a 999 story! :D and with santa! w cant wait to see were this goes :D
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF finaly a 999 story! :D and with santa! w cant wait to see were this goes :D
1/18/2011 c1 3
hahaha this is great XD i'm so excited to see what happends! Santa is going to be in love (be loved by) a women who could possibliy be old enuf to be his mother? :D sooooo funny
hahaha this is great XD i'm so excited to see what happends! Santa is going to be in love (be loved by) a women who could possibliy be old enuf to be his mother? :D sooooo funny
1/15/2011 c1 1A Wandering Beast
Interesting choice of characters!
I'd love to see how things would turn out.
Good read and hope to see an update soon!
1A Wandering BeastInteresting choice of characters!
I'd love to see how things would turn out.
Good read and hope to see an update soon!
1/13/2011 c1 14Princess Toady
That's so awesome ! A 999 story ! ^^
I don't know, despite the age difference, I think they would make a great pair. You know, since they are both more or less hotheads. ^^"
I wonder how it will go...
14Princess ToadyThat's so awesome ! A 999 story ! ^^
I don't know, despite the age difference, I think they would make a great pair. You know, since they are both more or less hotheads. ^^"
I wonder how it will go...
1/12/2011 c1 bp
Weird choice of pairing... Its really strange to think about but it could definately work. Awesome job on the first chapter, Santa is my favourite character so its pretty neat to see the first 999 fic revolve around him and Lotus.
Weird choice of pairing... Its really strange to think about but it could definately work. Awesome job on the first chapter, Santa is my favourite character so its pretty neat to see the first 999 fic revolve around him and Lotus.