for universal knowledge5/31/2012 c15 
6icecreamapparition
Rin is very predictable, she says "it doesn't matter" whenever she's offended. :)
I can't believe they're still not officially together after all that has happened between them. I'd be offended too that Sesshoumaru didn't tell her, but then, like she said, it's all about him and her appreciation of his protection and not his lord status.
It is getting a bit uncomfortable that Kikyo knows about everything. I'm surprised that Rin is not curiously asking a lot of questions. I'm wondering if Rin is the 13th priestess... or if the young priestesses (aka Kikyo and Kagome) are supposed to execute the old rules regarding demons and seal Sesshoumaru's powers. He seems harmless and in love to me!
6icecreamapparitionRin is very predictable, she says "it doesn't matter" whenever she's offended. :)
I can't believe they're still not officially together after all that has happened between them. I'd be offended too that Sesshoumaru didn't tell her, but then, like she said, it's all about him and her appreciation of his protection and not his lord status.
It is getting a bit uncomfortable that Kikyo knows about everything. I'm surprised that Rin is not curiously asking a lot of questions. I'm wondering if Rin is the 13th priestess... or if the young priestesses (aka Kikyo and Kagome) are supposed to execute the old rules regarding demons and seal Sesshoumaru's powers. He seems harmless and in love to me!
5/30/2012 c15 11icegirljenni
Wow from a very romantic night to the day that revealed all the lies. Life is really not a bag of candies huh? I was hoping at least they told her about her past a bit later. She deserved to feel the wonderful after intimate feeling. If that make sense.
I don't know if I like Sesshouamru in this chapter. He did nothing wrong but Rin is likes a lost puppy now. They are so close last night, this morning she has just throw the insecurity outside the window and now? It looks like he has a book of past story that Rin didn't know. This is not fair isn't it? When she asks about it he refused to answer and that would draw them apart.
What with the stealing gift? I didn't aware that Kikyo is jealous of Rin being Sesshoumaru, so why is she seems to be so disturb about Sesshoumaru and Rin has done something? Did she tries to create a misunderstanding between them?
Kohaku! Damn why is Rin all of sudden wants to go to the gig? And who is that man who gave the information? Is kikyo a good friend or? ...
Well update soon because I know there are many things still are not unfold. :-)
I hope you are doing well at Uni :-D Take care.
11icegirljenniWow from a very romantic night to the day that revealed all the lies. Life is really not a bag of candies huh? I was hoping at least they told her about her past a bit later. She deserved to feel the wonderful after intimate feeling. If that make sense.
I don't know if I like Sesshouamru in this chapter. He did nothing wrong but Rin is likes a lost puppy now. They are so close last night, this morning she has just throw the insecurity outside the window and now? It looks like he has a book of past story that Rin didn't know. This is not fair isn't it? When she asks about it he refused to answer and that would draw them apart.
What with the stealing gift? I didn't aware that Kikyo is jealous of Rin being Sesshoumaru, so why is she seems to be so disturb about Sesshoumaru and Rin has done something? Did she tries to create a misunderstanding between them?
Kohaku! Damn why is Rin all of sudden wants to go to the gig? And who is that man who gave the information? Is kikyo a good friend or? ...
Well update soon because I know there are many things still are not unfold. :-)
I hope you are doing well at Uni :-D Take care.
5/30/2012 c15 Taraah36
Sigh... I've been itching for an update but I want more! Please tell me Sesshomaru will still go to the bar out of a gut feeling and keep watch over Rin. She's his now whether he wants to admit it or not.
Kohaku you don't deserve Rin you pig!
I hope they don't get her!
I love how kikyo always gives Rin the skeptical glare Haha. Rin dear you and Sesshomaru are more than friends now :-)
As for the man murdered in town... I thought that was naraku?
What's with Rin's real family and who's mother and grandfathers met who? That part confused me... :-(
Sigh... I've been itching for an update but I want more! Please tell me Sesshomaru will still go to the bar out of a gut feeling and keep watch over Rin. She's his now whether he wants to admit it or not.
Kohaku you don't deserve Rin you pig!
I hope they don't get her!
I love how kikyo always gives Rin the skeptical glare Haha. Rin dear you and Sesshomaru are more than friends now :-)
As for the man murdered in town... I thought that was naraku?
What's with Rin's real family and who's mother and grandfathers met who? That part confused me... :-(
5/27/2012 c14 mulayhna
Love the story! Amazing! The plots awesome and I'm really stoked that rin and sesshomaru are finally together! Please update soon! The only thing I would say is maybe put quotation marks or something around the parts when a character is talking. Just a little hard to figure out when there talking. Lol but seriously! Update soon! Very much enjoy reading it!
Love the story! Amazing! The plots awesome and I'm really stoked that rin and sesshomaru are finally together! Please update soon! The only thing I would say is maybe put quotation marks or something around the parts when a character is talking. Just a little hard to figure out when there talking. Lol but seriously! Update soon! Very much enjoy reading it!
5/14/2012 c14 6icecreamapparition
I love how you ended it! Some ideas seemed random, but I think it's what made this chapter very natural. Like your other fic, your writing style seems to create scenarios that would make everything more believable. There is always some form of surprise!
I didn't realize we're in chapter 14 already. I still want more! :3
6icecreamapparitionI love how you ended it! Some ideas seemed random, but I think it's what made this chapter very natural. Like your other fic, your writing style seems to create scenarios that would make everything more believable. There is always some form of surprise!
I didn't realize we're in chapter 14 already. I still want more! :3
5/13/2012 c14 11icegirljenni
Ah hah this chapter did explain a lot and I think I am on right track now and any chapter update after this is going to be really interesting!
Thank you so much for this wonderful chapter and when I said wonderful I was referring to the ahem the last part HAHA I love it and I certainly love when Rin said she wants him to be her first AWWWWWWWWWWWWW
I can see how torture it will from the Monday to Friday activities LOL living with the man that stole her kiss is really HARD! I am actually glad that Sesshoumaru willingly to tell Rin about what happen 200 years ago. I am sure she is curious but in time she will learns more and understand more :-) which is good.
At least after everything was told now Rin is understand Sesshoumaru more and more. What will happen after the lemon? Bridging the gap? Strengthen the bond? I am looking for more good news from them and their relationship blossom.
I wonder about Kikyo, Sesshoumaru said she is after him? She ... loves him? And that's why she is jealous of Rin?
Very interesting especially about the trigger to unlock Bakusaiga power. WOW we have all the way till today isn't it? I love how the story flow and certainly anticipate to read more :-D
Update soon.
11icegirljenniAh hah this chapter did explain a lot and I think I am on right track now and any chapter update after this is going to be really interesting!
Thank you so much for this wonderful chapter and when I said wonderful I was referring to the ahem the last part HAHA I love it and I certainly love when Rin said she wants him to be her first AWWWWWWWWWWWWW
I can see how torture it will from the Monday to Friday activities LOL living with the man that stole her kiss is really HARD! I am actually glad that Sesshoumaru willingly to tell Rin about what happen 200 years ago. I am sure she is curious but in time she will learns more and understand more :-) which is good.
At least after everything was told now Rin is understand Sesshoumaru more and more. What will happen after the lemon? Bridging the gap? Strengthen the bond? I am looking for more good news from them and their relationship blossom.
I wonder about Kikyo, Sesshoumaru said she is after him? She ... loves him? And that's why she is jealous of Rin?
Very interesting especially about the trigger to unlock Bakusaiga power. WOW we have all the way till today isn't it? I love how the story flow and certainly anticipate to read more :-D
Update soon.
5/12/2012 c14 Taraah36
Wow so all this drama.starting way back when...
Screw that! I want details of that night! I want them now! The emotions that came out of her had to have been from the love she was receiving. Sigh.. can I find that kind of love?
Update soon I have to know whats going to happen between them now!
Omg I can't believe they finally did it! I wonder who will be the first to notice out if their friends? Seeing as he's a gentleman I know he didn't let that happen in the living room :-)
Until next time...
Wow so all this drama.starting way back when...
Screw that! I want details of that night! I want them now! The emotions that came out of her had to have been from the love she was receiving. Sigh.. can I find that kind of love?
Update soon I have to know whats going to happen between them now!
Omg I can't believe they finally did it! I wonder who will be the first to notice out if their friends? Seeing as he's a gentleman I know he didn't let that happen in the living room :-)
Until next time...
5/12/2012 c14 jlh09
Love it...it seems there is a new turn in the story. And I loved the ending of this chapter...yay some happiness for them! Keep up the great work!
Love it...it seems there is a new turn in the story. And I loved the ending of this chapter...yay some happiness for them! Keep up the great work!
4/29/2012 c13 9Cristaline
I loooove the end of this chapter ^^ I think it was very well written, and deep. I definitely like your style.
But I don't like the fact the stalker was able to cut Rin's hair. If I were Sesshomaru, I'd force Rin to sleep in the same room (bed?) as him to keep an eye on her XD
Good work I say, as usual!
9CristalineI loooove the end of this chapter ^^ I think it was very well written, and deep. I definitely like your style.
But I don't like the fact the stalker was able to cut Rin's hair. If I were Sesshomaru, I'd force Rin to sleep in the same room (bed?) as him to keep an eye on her XD
Good work I say, as usual!
4/27/2012 c13 smalltea
Rin's jealous... so fun and interesting too ^^~
i love the kiss scences, so sweet...
I wonder what will happen next, please update soon :D
love
Rin's jealous... so fun and interesting too ^^~
i love the kiss scences, so sweet...
I wonder what will happen next, please update soon :D
love
4/27/2012 c13 11icegirljenni
Awwww I knew it Shippo is lying :-P The way he replied really not convincing at all XD But that's so sweet of Sesshoumaru :-)
I was quite surprise when Rin asked Sesshoumaru about his relationship with Kikyo. Hmmm, where did she get the idea from? From what I can gathered all I know is Sesshoumaru kinds of hating Kikyo XD LOL
I really love the last scene of how Rin handled the real Sesshoumaru. I was hoping Rin kissed Sesshoumaru first when his eyes turned red :-D But either way this kiss scene is really beautiful and I love it.
SO what happen next? How can someone got so close to Rin and able to get her hair? That was superb dangerous! Further more how much we can trust Kikyo? and her info about the stone? I don't know how I started to suspect Kikyo, I think it was when I chat with taraah long back though.
Anyway, this is really a nice chapter and I love how the story progress :-)
Keep it up dear! and update soon :-)
11icegirljenniAwwww I knew it Shippo is lying :-P The way he replied really not convincing at all XD But that's so sweet of Sesshoumaru :-)
I was quite surprise when Rin asked Sesshoumaru about his relationship with Kikyo. Hmmm, where did she get the idea from? From what I can gathered all I know is Sesshoumaru kinds of hating Kikyo XD LOL
I really love the last scene of how Rin handled the real Sesshoumaru. I was hoping Rin kissed Sesshoumaru first when his eyes turned red :-D But either way this kiss scene is really beautiful and I love it.
SO what happen next? How can someone got so close to Rin and able to get her hair? That was superb dangerous! Further more how much we can trust Kikyo? and her info about the stone? I don't know how I started to suspect Kikyo, I think it was when I chat with taraah long back though.
Anyway, this is really a nice chapter and I love how the story progress :-)
Keep it up dear! and update soon :-)
4/27/2012 c13 6icecreamapparition
Yes, it was convincing. Nice chapter, as usual!
Shippo was so adorable! And when Sesshoumaru's pupils dilated, I'm guessing he remembered Rin in the lingerie after the initial shock? Hehehe.
Anyway, he must be relieved that Rin is taking it well!
Keep the updates coming! :D
6icecreamapparitionYes, it was convincing. Nice chapter, as usual!
Shippo was so adorable! And when Sesshoumaru's pupils dilated, I'm guessing he remembered Rin in the lingerie after the initial shock? Hehehe.
Anyway, he must be relieved that Rin is taking it well!
Keep the updates coming! :D
4/26/2012 c13 Taraah36
I was waiting for her to kiss him instead he kissed her! I love it!
Now Rin understands there was nothing ever between Sessh and kikyo. But his feelings were always for her! I love the perfect kiss! But now what?
I was waiting for her to kiss him instead he kissed her! I love it!
Now Rin understands there was nothing ever between Sessh and kikyo. But his feelings were always for her! I love the perfect kiss! But now what?
4/12/2012 c12 icecreamapparition
LOOOOL
I was wondering, was the 'void' a coincidence or did Kikyo do it purposely to lure Sess into seeing Rin? Or maybe it was the mysterious man? Anyway, I think it ended up into something 'nice', hehe.
The lingerie was in the bag, right? I don't think Sesshoumaru would forget that, but maybe that is also the reason why he is annoyed? X3
And the jacket. Is Sesshoumaru really the one who is "dense"? Come on, Rin! :P
Glad to see you updating! Until next chapter! :D
LOOOOL
I was wondering, was the 'void' a coincidence or did Kikyo do it purposely to lure Sess into seeing Rin? Or maybe it was the mysterious man? Anyway, I think it ended up into something 'nice', hehe.
The lingerie was in the bag, right? I don't think Sesshoumaru would forget that, but maybe that is also the reason why he is annoyed? X3
And the jacket. Is Sesshoumaru really the one who is "dense"? Come on, Rin! :P
Glad to see you updating! Until next chapter! :D
4/11/2012 c12 Taraah36
Yes those are all my questions! Where, when, what, how and who?
The envelope?
The lingerie ?
Sesshomaru's thoughts on Rin?
The man in the bakery?
The void in the air?
Update soon!
Yes those are all my questions! Where, when, what, how and who?
The envelope?
The lingerie ?
Sesshomaru's thoughts on Rin?
The man in the bakery?
The void in the air?
Update soon!