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4/5 c19 rikaxgoddess
CONTINUEEEEEE
3/13 c19 11hokkyokukou
Oh my gosh if there are only one or two chapters left then please-update soon! I've read this story before about a year ago I'm guessing, just never reviewed it...

This story is too great! I hope you never abandon it; since it's so close to the finish, that would just be devastating. Tragic. Unbearable. Everything along those lines. I would curse you until I go to my grave...

Just kidding.

Fuuuu, you even wrote an in-love-Shizuo in a way that keeps him completely Shizuo, and Izaya is completely in character (I feel) all the time. Mayonaka is holy god scary but also likable; I especially love how she never backs down! Even when Shizuo figures her out, she doesn't give up on what she wants, though she wants to go back to him so badly...

I hope you update this soon, because I really can't wait to see what happens! Thank you for sharing this story :)
2/24 c19 5Lonely-soul101
I really like how dark this story is, which is unusual for my tastes. Please update soon!
10/4/2012 c19 Kiririn
I want to see Izaya get the shit beat out of him! Then again, Izaya always escapes no matter what... but anyways, Mayo has to end up with Shizuo! That's all I really care about!
10/3/2012 c4 Kiririn
I like this a lot! I really love Mayonaka, she's super-cool, and she sounds pretty! I like how the story's sort of dark. I kind of feel like Shizuo's a bit too mean in this chapter, though. He also was doing ok without sex before Mayonaka showed up, so it just seems a bit weird that he'd fall for that.
9/29/2012 c4 3Gentle Kiss
You're a great writer! I'm absorbed in the story right now, but alas, I must sleep! I'll continue reading tomorrow.
9/29/2012 c19 1MissAnimeMiss
awwwwwwwww too short...cliff hanger 'pouts'
how bout a happy ending and ill just leave it at that
9/29/2012 c19 xXMegers17Xx
Ahh I'll be so sad when this story ends :( I really want her to have a life with Shizuo ! Oh so bad please please can't wait to see what happens next !
6/28/2012 c1 PaperGangsta
Loving it! Can't wait to read more :)!
6/18/2012 c18 fia
I only stumbled across this story last night, and I've read all 18 chapters already. This story is truly amazing, I LOVE IT! It doesn't seem like you've been updating this story for a while, but you have no idea how thankful I would be if you did :P
5/30/2012 c18 13Biter Raygun
I feel like I'm reading a real novel. And honestly, this story is just so unfathomably fantastic that I feel like a dweeb for reviewing, because I just don't know what to write. Mayonaka is a fantastic anti-heroine. For real. I don't think I've ever read an OC who's s fucked up, and yet so cool in all my years of fanfiction reading. And just how you write her with Shizuo... true, they only knew each other for a week, tops, but my god, they're mean for each other.

Izaya can suck my left toe on a friday. He may humor me with his witty psychosis, but aside from that, when you get down to it, he's just an asshole. Especially with what he did to Mayonaka. Oooohhh you gave me a newfound hate for that sonofabitch.

Please please please, give that bitch flea a run for his money! Ohhhh I wanna see Shizuo kick his ass to a bloody pulp . With some assistance for Mayo-chan! (sadly, the nickname has grown on me, however, unlike Izaya it's meant in an endearing manner because I just wanna hug that poor girl to death)

I can' wait to see what else you hve in store! I will be eagerly awaiting your next capter, my dear!
5/13/2012 c18 12Broken Blackk Dahlia
Aaaah _ I wanna know what happens D: Ffff- you need to continue this, pleasee I love it :3
4/4/2012 c18 3DestinyKitten48
CLIFFHANGERRRRRRRRRRRR~!

Way to leave us with the suspense :0

Haha, looking forward to an update :D

Great writing, really impressed.
3/23/2012 c7 Naliams
This is so diferent at everything i have already read about durarara's fics. I'm overhelmed by it, realy, and if you put the music at the same time.., OMG. magic, truly magic, i'm glue to the pc.
3/23/2012 c3 Naliams
Love the soundtrack of your fic, and loving your fic so far. ;)
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