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4stcobb
Nicely done! My only issue was with Eli finding a code in the Ancient database to shut down the Cylons. There is only a tenuous tie from the Ancients to the Cylons at best. Why would there be some anti-Cylon code?
4stcobbNicely done! My only issue was with Eli finding a code in the Ancient database to shut down the Cylons. There is only a tenuous tie from the Ancients to the Cylons at best. Why would there be some anti-Cylon code?
6/9/2012 c22 27Jonn Wolfe
This was a wonderful mix of BSG/SG-1 (Would that be BSG-1?) Things were kept in character, and it melded rather well. I only wish to have seen more of what happened during the Cylon Civil War, and what happened to the Final Five. Other than that, this was a most excellent read. Thank you for writing it!
27Jonn WolfeThis was a wonderful mix of BSG/SG-1 (Would that be BSG-1?) Things were kept in character, and it melded rather well. I only wish to have seen more of what happened during the Cylon Civil War, and what happened to the Final Five. Other than that, this was a most excellent read. Thank you for writing it!
1/30/2012 c4 BigWilly526
I really like the story so far but it makes no sense that the cylons are taking down F-304 shields so easily, bullets and nukes have hardly any effect on energy shields
I really like the story so far but it makes no sense that the cylons are taking down F-304 shields so easily, bullets and nukes have hardly any effect on energy shields
1/11/2012 c8 7admiraljoshhar
This is still a great story so far. However, you could use a little editing. The worst example I've seen so far was this: "Greets, I am Thor, Supreme Commander Thor of the Asgard Fleet," Thor introduced himself to the surprised assembly."
You said "Greets" instead of greetings, and you introduced Thor four times. Here's how I would recomend fixing the sentence: "Greetings," the grey alien said. "I am Thor, Supreme Commander of the Asgard Fleet."
That establishes his identity without making the reader feel stupid, while still acknowledging that the audiance (aside from the pres and SGC personnel) don't know who he is.
Once again, though, aside from a few easily correctible proofingerrors, this is a great piece of fanfic, one I will continue reading to the end!
7admiraljoshharThis is still a great story so far. However, you could use a little editing. The worst example I've seen so far was this: "Greets, I am Thor, Supreme Commander Thor of the Asgard Fleet," Thor introduced himself to the surprised assembly."
You said "Greets" instead of greetings, and you introduced Thor four times. Here's how I would recomend fixing the sentence: "Greetings," the grey alien said. "I am Thor, Supreme Commander of the Asgard Fleet."
That establishes his identity without making the reader feel stupid, while still acknowledging that the audiance (aside from the pres and SGC personnel) don't know who he is.
Once again, though, aside from a few easily correctible proofingerrors, this is a great piece of fanfic, one I will continue reading to the end!
1/10/2012 c1 admiraljoshhar
I love it! I thought of writing my own SG-1 BSG fanfic a while ago, but never got around to it. This is great, though, far better than I had planned! And no Ori (yet)! I'll continue reading, hopefully it'll either stay this good or get better!
I love it! I thought of writing my own SG-1 BSG fanfic a while ago, but never got around to it. This is great, though, far better than I had planned! And no Ori (yet)! I'll continue reading, hopefully it'll either stay this good or get better!
12/14/2011 c22 Malix2
A nice end to a nice fic. It's a rare pleasure to see a good fic reach the point where it has that "Complete" written after it, so congrats. Far too many fics in my experience seem to just stop updating one day and all the readers are forever left wondering, so anytime I actually see some closure and finality I'm always happy.
A nice end to a nice fic. It's a rare pleasure to see a good fic reach the point where it has that "Complete" written after it, so congrats. Far too many fics in my experience seem to just stop updating one day and all the readers are forever left wondering, so anytime I actually see some closure and finality I'm always happy.
12/14/2011 c22 4Major Simi
well unfortunately we all know that every story has an end. nice epilogue, but a bit short. well i hope i'll see some more of you
4Major Simiwell unfortunately we all know that every story has an end. nice epilogue, but a bit short. well i hope i'll see some more of you
12/14/2011 c21 Major Simi
well looks like the nightmare is finaly over. two chances were given to the cylons and both times they started a war. and now it's over. well good fleet battle even throug i would have loved a bit longer fleet fight and ground fight. but well done
well looks like the nightmare is finaly over. two chances were given to the cylons and both times they started a war. and now it's over. well good fleet battle even throug i would have loved a bit longer fleet fight and ground fight. but well done