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251/14/2011 c5 bludd n' gutz rippa
Just a few words. OBJECTION!
me:" This story is awesome!"
someone who hasnt read the story:"Objection, your oppinion cannot represent what others have not re-"
Me:"Shut it before i open up your rib cage with my chain axe and offer it to khorn!"
This is how i would argue for you and your story man.:) Nothing like the threat of force to keep someone in line. After all,'might makes right'.:D
Just a few words. OBJECTION!
me:" This story is awesome!"
someone who hasnt read the story:"Objection, your oppinion cannot represent what others have not re-"
Me:"Shut it before i open up your rib cage with my chain axe and offer it to khorn!"
This is how i would argue for you and your story man.:) Nothing like the threat of force to keep someone in line. After all,'might makes right'.:D
1/13/2011 c3 bludd n' gutz rippa
Well. Its an easy concept. "Might makes wright" is the reason phoenix is so dangerous in the court room, because he is a mighty thinker and able to pull contradictions most people seem to miss.
Just simply reading this chapter makes me realise two things.1)Apollo has his work really cut out for him especially since there isnt a need for an ork to fight/injure/kill someone other for then the sheer joy of it.2) This is extremly well written despite the fact it being extremly obscure.
I am only saddened you havent gotten more reviews.:( I blame that most people have no real taste in something well written with a great concept behind it, oh and the fact that you take two completely clashing universes and put them together.But that last part isnt so bad.:p
keep going please.:D
Well. Its an easy concept. "Might makes wright" is the reason phoenix is so dangerous in the court room, because he is a mighty thinker and able to pull contradictions most people seem to miss.
Just simply reading this chapter makes me realise two things.1)Apollo has his work really cut out for him especially since there isnt a need for an ork to fight/injure/kill someone other for then the sheer joy of it.2) This is extremly well written despite the fact it being extremly obscure.
I am only saddened you havent gotten more reviews.:( I blame that most people have no real taste in something well written with a great concept behind it, oh and the fact that you take two completely clashing universes and put them together.But that last part isnt so bad.:p
keep going please.:D
1/11/2011 c1 bludd n' gutz rippa
I loled so hard when I pictured (in my head) apollo meeting with his 'client'. Keep going.
VERY interesting concept, i suggest you roll with it until you get bored or your concept gets so wacky that most of us cant seem to follow your writing anymore.:P
I loled so hard when I pictured (in my head) apollo meeting with his 'client'. Keep going.
VERY interesting concept, i suggest you roll with it until you get bored or your concept gets so wacky that most of us cant seem to follow your writing anymore.:P