4/7/2011 c3 20GilmoreGirlsAddict - Rogan Fan
awsome story

please update soon

I can't believe that Dean would cheat on Rory with Paris of all people

1/13/2009 c3 548Ghostwriter
So, is this gonna be like a psycho Derek thing? 'Cause that would be cool. See Rory get to kick some butt. Great job. Catch ya on the flip sdie.

6/26/2003 c1 some1udontnoe
this is confusing to follow. and the characters r way out of character, i mean wat girl would b ok with her bf cheating on her?

3/22/2002 c1 Tinkerbell
Okay, I've only read the first chapter but I already have a problem. I don't think Dean appreciated being called "Bagboy" and I don't think he would chose that particular nickname fore his screen name. And also, Rory isn't really the type to spell the word "you" like"u" or the word "are" like "r". Please keep in mind, this is just constructive criticism.

3/20/2002 c3 chica
geez where do i start?

spelling's awful, dialogue's drab, situation's laughable, characterizations are pathetic... well this is taking too long.

either brush up, or don't bother continuing.

3/20/2002 c3 sara
great start...more soon!

3/20/2002 c3 mandie
great chapter why is carolynne even in this story? more soon! :)

3/17/2002 c2 continue soon please
wats up with the realtionship with tristan and rory? why isnt there any fighting? its kinda boring but i really wanna c where u are goin with this